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Fleur Elizabeth

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Member Since: Jan 1, 2009

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The Silent Mark

Novel by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: May 8, 2010
Emilie Thompson is the same as any of her friends, a...

A Few Words to Live By

by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: Dec 16, 2009
Read the title.

La Cite de Morte

Novel by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: Dec 8, 2009
The streets are full of unexplained panic and the police...

Isabelle's Memory II

Short Story by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: Apr 28, 2009
This is a continuation of Isabelle's Memory.

Forever Silenced

Novel by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: Apr 16, 2009

A Prison Like No Other

Short Story by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: Apr 5, 2009
"A Prison Like No Other" is simply something I've been...

Isabelle's Memory

Short Story by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: Apr 3, 2009
Section One of a short story I've been playing with these...

That Which Awakes Within All of Us

Poem by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: Jan 8, 2009
These are the final words spoken atop the cliff of fear...

Le Temps Passe

Poem by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: Jan 6, 2009

I am 27-years-old and working at becoming a young-adult, juvenile author.  I reside in Upstate New York, and yes it doesn't refer to Orange County (located just north of the City).  I live about half hour from the Mohawk River.

My interests other than writing are for me to know and others to find out.  If you're curious, leave a comment and I may, or may not respond.  However, I definitely won't respond without outside information for contacting.  :-P.

The comments I leave are based on 9-years of writing and 2 private writing courses I've taken over those 9-years.  Hence, I'm no idiot when it comes to writing.  Yes, I too make errors and despite how I may respond, to which I apologize now, I always welcome long, thought out comments depicting your opinions, therefore check out my work and leave something.  What I don't like are individuals who leave one or two word comments and are unable to back-up their thoughts if asked to expand their reasoning.  Sometimes even a short little comment like: Brilliant, or Horridly spoken: can say it all.  Please, just be ready for being asked to explain your thoughts.  Oh, another thing I hate: People guessing at what is happening next.  If you are curious what happens next, come back to see what else is posted at a future date.  Don't leave guesses about what is, or isn't going to happen in the future sections of my works.  Thanks.




For those looking for me to comment on their works, understand I comment and rank based on the following conditions out of 10 stars for each catagory: Grammar/Punctuation/Flow/Structure.... Overal Story..... Ability to Capture the Reader.... Word Choice/Effectiveness....  When I average my scores together, I than comment according to my thoughts... 10 out of 10 is pure perfection/masterpiece, 9 out of 10 is superb work, 8 out of 10 is decent, 7 out of 10 is a good piece, 6 out of 10 is above average, 5 out of 10 is average, 4 out of 10 is below average, 3 out of 10 is ok, 2 out of 10 is poor quality, 1 out of 10 is needs drastic work....

It is my belief that no matter who you are, all pieces of literature written may fall within one of these conditions; especially my own.  Do note that I never rank my individual catagories above a 7.  In fact, my work usually when all scores are averaged together fall between a 5 and 6...

Second, when I comment, I will often give examples to explain my points as I believe it is important for all writers to experience different writing styles and for those commenting to explain what their comments mean.  I will not be offended if people comment in a such a manor with my work.  Remember, they are merely suggestions, not a requirement.... Therefore, please do not ask me to comment if you are not willing to hear my thoughts and fully explaining my reason believing the way I do.

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