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Fleur Elizabeth



Booksie Address: http://www.booksie.com/Fleur_Elizabeth
Country: United States
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Member Since: Jan 1, 2009

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The Silent Mark

Novel by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: May 8, 2010
Emilie Thompson is the same as any of her friends, a...

A Few Words to Live By

by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: Dec 16, 2009
Read the title.

La Cite de Morte

Novel by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: Dec 8, 2009
The streets are full of unexplained panic and the police...

Isabelle's Memory II

Short Story by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: Apr 28, 2009
This is a continuation of Isabelle's Memory.

Forever Silenced

Novel by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: Apr 16, 2009
Blah.

A Prison Like No Other

Short Story by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: Apr 5, 2009
"A Prison Like No Other" is simply something I've been...

Isabelle's Memory

Short Story by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: Apr 3, 2009
Section One of a short story I've been playing with these...

That Which Awakes Within All of Us

Poem by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: Jan 8, 2009
These are the final words spoken atop the cliff of fear...

Le Temps Passe

Poem by Fleur Elizabeth
Posted: Jan 6, 2009
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I am 27-years-old and working at becoming a young-adult, juvenile author.  I reside in Upstate New York, and yes it doesn't refer to Orange County (located just north of the City).  I live about half hour from the Mohawk River.

My interests other than writing are for me to know and others to find out.  If you're curious, leave a comment and I may, or may not respond.  However, I definitely won't respond without outside Booksie.com information for contacting.  :-P.

The comments I leave are based on 9-years of writing and 2 private writing courses I've taken over those 9-years.  Hence, I'm no idiot when it comes to writing.  Yes, I too make errors and despite how I may respond, to which I apologize now, I always welcome long, thought out comments depicting your opinions, therefore check out my work and leave something.  What I don't like are individuals who leave one or two word comments and are unable to back-up their thoughts if asked to expand their reasoning.  Sometimes even a short little comment like: Brilliant, or Horridly spoken: can say it all.  Please, just be ready for being asked to explain your thoughts.  Oh, another thing I hate: People guessing at what is happening next.  If you are curious what happens next, come back to see what else is posted at a future date.  Don't leave guesses about what is, or isn't going to happen in the future sections of my works.  Thanks.

 

 

**** IMPORTANT TO READ IF YOU WISH ME TO COMMENT *****

For those looking for me to comment on their works, understand I comment and rank based on the following conditions out of 10 stars for each catagory: Grammar/Punctuation/Flow/Structure.... Overal Story..... Ability to Capture the Reader.... Word Choice/Effectiveness....  When I average my scores together, I than comment according to my thoughts... 10 out of 10 is pure perfection/masterpiece, 9 out of 10 is superb work, 8 out of 10 is decent, 7 out of 10 is a good piece, 6 out of 10 is above average, 5 out of 10 is average, 4 out of 10 is below average, 3 out of 10 is ok, 2 out of 10 is poor quality, 1 out of 10 is needs drastic work....

It is my belief that no matter who you are, all pieces of literature written may fall within one of these conditions; especially my own.  Do note that I never rank my individual catagories above a 7.  In fact, my work usually when all scores are averaged together fall between a 5 and 6...

Second, when I comment, I will often give examples to explain my points as I believe it is important for all writers to experience different writing styles and for those commenting to explain what their comments mean.  I will not be offended if people comment in a such a manor with my work.  Remember, they are merely suggestions, not a requirement.... Therefore, please do not ask me to comment if you are not willing to hear my thoughts and fully explaining my reason believing the way I do.

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