Sep 12, 2010 In chapter 9, there is a repeat paragraph or two from chapter 5, i had to do some major revisions to chapter five on my computer, so i apologize for the reptition
Jul 27, 2010 Chapter nine may not be up for a while, i'm finding it hard to get large sections of writing time and i wish to inform everyone that i have been editing some of the earlier chapters and haven't put the updates online, so i appologize if there is any confusion in the upcoming chapters.
Jul 1, 2010 In upcoming chapters, (and chapter 5)there is German dialog. If you're curious, use an online translator. FYI
Jun 24, 2010 I was sick of not rememberng how to spell the lead villain's name, Adalrico, so i changed it to Robert. Just a heads up.
Hey, I like writing naratives, and want to know if they're good, so if you could just read my stories and tell me if they are decent or not, thanks