I have moved to Sweden in 2009 from Africa D.R. Congo aaand this is the street I live on and my family's house XD

Now this is in the summer, in the winter our little village looks like this- 

 I have always enjoyed writing stories, when I write I take true stories that I get from friends and combine it with fiction. I also write fictional stories that are combined with my own personal experiences I get in daily life.

 I am a 17 year old girl and my dream is to become a documentarist and film inside of D.R.Congo as well as other parts of Africa. I am currently studying in a college prep school, and I am working with filming and manuscripting.  

I know my grammar can be rather off when I write. So you don't have to point that out, it would actually help if I could be shown WHERE I was off. Since I have not had any REAL english lessons since 7th grade I am far behind with that, and I live in Sweden now so trying to improving my english and writing is difficult. In saying so, I would very much appreciate it if some of you might be able to help me with that so I could have a chance to improve my grammar. :) 

So ya...anyway...the awesomest thing I've ever heard?- 

Steady tears fall, yet no one hears my silent call. 
A desperate call for comfort, in all the pain and hurt. 
Who is to say someone will come running? Yet who is to say that I am nothing. 
One will come when I call, whenever I may fall. 
NoI I am never alone, and His name will always be known. 
As long as I take breath and know not death, 
I shall sing, to the all mighty King. 
He who teaches of love, and He who lives up above. 

Praise be to the King, to him I shall sing. 
Praise be to the Father of Love who loves me, who wipes my tears and lets me see. 
Praise be to He who made me free. ^.^