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Nicoledeer



Booksie Address: http://www.booksie.com/Nicoledeer
Country: United States
Favorite book: The Hunger Games; The Foretelling; Chronicles of Vladimir Tod
Member Since: Jan 6, 2012

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Haymitch: The Untold Story (Novelette)

Novel by Nicoledeer
Posted: May 11, 2012
So we all know Haymitch after the battle, the drunken,...
Tags:love, death, romance, torture, drinking, contest, hunger games, whipping, haymitch, zayn

Nicoledeer

Picture Yourself as a Cloud

Short Story by Nicoledeer
Posted: Jan 7, 2012
so her boyfriend has cancer, and hes the one shes relying...
Tags:loss, death, sad, cancer

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Haymitch: The Untold Story (Novelette)

Novel by Nicoledeer
Posted: May 11, 2012
So we all know Haymitch after the battle, the drunken,...

Kisses lead to Princes

Short Story by Nicoledeer
Posted: Mar 13, 2012
For Meradee's 'A Picture Worth a Thousand words' contest!...

Picture Yourself as a Cloud

Short Story by Nicoledeer
Posted: Jan 7, 2012
so her boyfriend has cancer, and hes the one shes relying...

People Stare

Poem by Nicoledeer
Posted: Jan 7, 2012
so i wrote this for a contest i enetered (i got first in...



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Ignoring Us

Scarlet Evermore is struggling everday in a life with an abusive, alcholic father, cruel schoolmates, and a haunting past. Jake O'Brian, her hot ex-boyfriend, returns from almost a two year move to Arizona with his family to find the spontanious girl he used to know scummbing to the painful jokes of her classmates and walking with her head down. Will Jake be able to help her return to her former self or will he be dragged into her darkness?

I turn and storm away from him and his loving gaze, ripping my hand from his as I scoop up my shorts and towel. I ring my hair out and just as my bare feet hit the concrete leading to the parking lot, his hand closes over mine spinning me to face him. 
 
I look at him for a moment in the dim glow of the street light. His wet hair is matted down to his forehead and shorts hang loosely around his hips, sagging slightly with the added weight of seawater. I can't see his eyes properly, but if they are as I remember, then they are a beautiful chocolate brown. 
 
"Just leave me be will you? Can't you see I don't want to be around you. Not now or ever." I yank my hand from his grasp. The sheer force of these words take him aback and he falters for a moment. I look him straight in the eye knowing exactly, word for word, what he is going to say before he says it.
 
"Why, what did I ever do to you that could have made you so angry with me?" he says this with more control than I could have ever managed. I take a step closer to him, my voice dropping threateningly. 
 
"There is a difference between hate and anger, but you can be both at the same time and those are the only things I'm feeling about you right now." I turn and cut across the parking lot to get home quicker because I can hear him jogging along after me. He had never been one to give up easily. 
 
"That's not an answer Scarlet. Tell me why." I come to a stop and hear him stop too, the rushing of the ocean waves the only sound to be heard. I think for a moment trying to come up with something about him that I find horrible, some lie that will make him hate himself as much as I do. But the worst thing I can think of is the truth. 
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That is my fav novel im working on and it is on chapter 5 as of today! Currently, i am working on 3 and have an idea for a fourth, but my limit is three and thats pushing it.
 
I loved (LOVE) The Hunger Games!! Oh M Gee! seriously so excited for the movie! i have midnight premiere tickets and majority of the 7th and 8th grade class is goin. I swear if we have a test the day after i WILL kill someone.
 
 

I love the cast! holy crap! i cant wait until we see finnick!!!!

 

Alright, so I'm 14.  yes 14, but its not a reason to not read my stuff. I figure, by the time im 18, ill have been writing for 4 years. 4 years of experience compared to being 18 and writing how i do now. I dont think im that bad of a writer... if you think so, feel free to tell me, nicely.  I appreciate constructive critism on any and all of my works.

 

If you fan me, there is a guarantee i will read and comment on your stuff.

yah, i think thats it... for now! bwhahaha....

 

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