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The car, that was the last thing I saw. The last thing I knew. Weeks before I was normal. Went to school got good grades. Blasted music in my car. Now I would never again do those things. You know they say theres a light you see while you die. I didn't see it. Just darkness. Almost the feeling of drowning mixed with complete darkness. Choking on nothing but air. Yes I didn't see a light, didn't hear someone calling for me. Did get drag down to hell with little devils. No I was stuck in a black icky darkness. That smuthered me. That and that alone. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Feb 1, 2013    Reads: 22    Comments: 8    Likes: 5   


Everything was the same. Pale and white. However I was laughing now. Rose was standing, and wobbling around. She was hugged by all her friends. She just finished hugging Ilissa, who had arrived the moment Rose mumbled in her sleep, and was now wobbling over to me when the doctor came in.

"You need to lay down." he mumbled. She looked at him as if he had just busted the funniest joke it the world. So with a plastered smile she sat on the yellow bed. He put the monitor thing on her finger, which caused her to laugh.

"My heart beats going to be high." she said through laughter and tears.

"It shouldn't be. It unsafe for you." the doctor said with frustration, he recording some stuff on a pad then stood. Rose rolled her blue eyes clearly annoyed. She slowly was looking from face to face, lingering on some eyes.Then her sparkling blue eyes crashed onto my face.

"Pancakes, and poptarts sound devine right now!" she mumbled as the doctor walked out the door. After a moment of waiting Rose stood back up and wobbled around on the grey tile. She couldn't walk right, with the heavy cast wrapped around her neck,so she leaned against the wall and yanked it off.

"Makes me feel old." she complained as Storm, and Drew asked her to put the grey plastic cast back on. She refused even after Storm, and Drew tried to bribe her. I laughed, and with a more elegant giant then I expected,she walked over to me. She was wearing one of those white dress things they make you wear at a hospital, it wrinkled as she hugged me.

"I really missed ya, in that coma I didn't get allot of good sleep." she said before laughing. I watched as her bare feet slid from one grey tile to the next. She went to Storm, who was shuffling his feet.

"How long was I out?" I muffled a laugh, she had found the weak link.

"8 weeks and 6 days." Storm said as everyone turned to look at him.

"You, we agreed not to tell her!!" Julie growled, as Rose slowly sat into one of the blue chairs Storm had been using.

"8 weeks and 6 days sitting in this chair?" she said sarcastically standing and rubbing her butt.

"Your a dork!" I laughed at her.

She turned to everyone and smiled.

"'I'm happy they put me into the rock bed, cause those chairs are harder."

She raced to the bed and turned the TV. on laughing as "Family Guy" pop onto the big screen.



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