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The Day The Sun Rose In The World That Never Existed

Novel By: SavvyApple
Action and adventure

Two sisters and a brother. All working together to save their world. All working together to prevent each other from fading away. All working together to save themselves.

About four months to half a year ago, Ethan (18) and Ava (15), created a magical world. This world was very much real, if you believed in it enough - under certain circumstances, of course. Certain 'rules' applied, including the fact that if you took the risk in creating this world, then it would become part the creator's lifeline(s). Therefore - it dies, you die, or at least cease to exist. Despite the known risks, Ava and Ethan take on the challenge of creating their own world in which, if needed one day, humans could live in themselves successfully.
Ava and Ethan attempted at keeping this world from Zoey (7), thus saving their parents by having at least one remaining child in case something happened to their world, as opposed to none. But when Zoey gets involved in everything, well, then everything changes.

Now, something's going on in the sibling's world; the sun is getting smaller and lower every time Ava sees it in her dreams, which isn't supposed to happen. They had made the sun their main focus point, their main energy source, and the holy item in their world. It was never supposed to set unless said otherwise. Because of how vital the sun is, Ava, Ethan, and Zoey, knowing that they couldn't possibly keep all Evil away from humanity, chose Seven Sun Protectors, also known as the Guardians, or the Strong Sun Seven. The leader, Eli (pronounced Ellie), was to pick out the other 6 Guardians - which happened, but now all Guardians have been stolen and hidden in multiple locations of the trio's world. The confusion alerts all three's attention, and they all must go on a thrilling adventure to save all 7 Guardians, 6 unknown, all before the sun shrinks and sets for good, because after that, their world will have never existed - and neither will have they. View table of contents...

Submitted:May 9, 2012    Reads: 14    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   

Chapter 11: Ethan

Ava went to her room when I said I'd care for Zoey, and would call her when she woke up. I was still pretty grossed out from just watching poor Zoey throw up. I had only one memory of me throwing up, and that was when I was around like seven yeas old, Zoey's age now. It was NOT a pleasant memory. Just watching Zoey splatter all that regurgitated chicken soup made me myself want to throw up, but I luckily held on to my pride and didn't.

To pass the time I turned the TV on mute and watched some random episode of Modern Family. I wasn't actually sure what was going on, my mind was drifting off to worrying about the journey ahead of us. Ava was right, there were a bunch of 'what if's. What if we starved? What if we were kidnapped? What if we were killed? What if only one of us died and the other two had to go on? Or what if it was vice versa? What if that was me?

It was always a possibility - death. We were taking a risk going into our world to save almost complete strangers. Heck - we took a riskmaking our world. What were we thinking, pretending we could do this? Did I actually believe in what I had just told Ava, or was I just kidding ourselves?

Before I knew it, the fast moving end credits for Modern Family came up. I turned off the television and decided to pull out on of our family's old photo albums. Looking at the cover, I picked out the one that had all the pictures from our family vacation at some lake house from about two summers ago.

The first pictures were just the family standing in front of the cabin we had rented. You could see the lake in the background and the wing that would later be broken by none other than moĆ­. The next picture was just a view of the lake. In the corner you could barely see Zoey, five years old, poking around on the edge of the water, probably looking around for a bug or two.

I was about to flip the page when Zoey moaned. At first I thought it was my imagination, until I looked over and saw Zoey's big brown cow eyes looking at me.

I closed the photo album and slid over next to Zoey. "Hey, kiddo, how you feeling?" I asked, feigning a smile.

"Okay..." Zoey broke her gaze and looked at the photo album. "That was a good summer." I nodded in agreement. "It was before all this happened."

"Sure was."

"I liked those times better." Zoey frowned.

"Yeah. They were better. A lot better, weren't they?" She nodded. "Let me get Ava, and then you can tell us what's up, okay?" Zoey nodded more and I got up and knocked on Ava's bedroom door.

"Yeah?" Ava called from inside, opening the door.

"She's up." I told her, and Ava rushed out of the room.


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