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The Day The Sun Rose In The World That Never Existed

Novel By: SavvyApple
Action and adventure

Two sisters and a brother. All working together to save their world. All working together to prevent each other from fading away. All working together to save themselves.

About four months to half a year ago, Ethan (18) and Ava (15), created a magical world. This world was very much real, if you believed in it enough - under certain circumstances, of course. Certain 'rules' applied, including the fact that if you took the risk in creating this world, then it would become part the creator's lifeline(s). Therefore - it dies, you die, or at least cease to exist. Despite the known risks, Ava and Ethan take on the challenge of creating their own world in which, if needed one day, humans could live in themselves successfully.
Ava and Ethan attempted at keeping this world from Zoey (7), thus saving their parents by having at least one remaining child in case something happened to their world, as opposed to none. But when Zoey gets involved in everything, well, then everything changes.

Now, something's going on in the sibling's world; the sun is getting smaller and lower every time Ava sees it in her dreams, which isn't supposed to happen. They had made the sun their main focus point, their main energy source, and the holy item in their world. It was never supposed to set unless said otherwise. Because of how vital the sun is, Ava, Ethan, and Zoey, knowing that they couldn't possibly keep all Evil away from humanity, chose Seven Sun Protectors, also known as the Guardians, or the Strong Sun Seven. The leader, Eli (pronounced Ellie), was to pick out the other 6 Guardians - which happened, but now all Guardians have been stolen and hidden in multiple locations of the trio's world. The confusion alerts all three's attention, and they all must go on a thrilling adventure to save all 7 Guardians, 6 unknown, all before the sun shrinks and sets for good, because after that, their world will have never existed - and neither will have they. View table of contents...

Submitted:Jun 5, 2012    Reads: 11    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   

Chapter 14: Ethan

I made Zoey and myself a bowl of Fruit Loops and left the cereal out just in case Ava wnted more stuff to eat. Like she said, it might be the last decent breakfast for a while.

I wanted to review everything so far. Seven very rather important people stolden. Only one's location was known. I n order to help us, apparenlty we've been given powers. Ava was a Dreamer, I was a Swordsman, and Zoey - well Zoey was unknown, but she's got to be something as of importance. She was so vital, I knew that we couldn't do anything of what we were about to do without her.

Then Ava came back, with a bunch of packets of food, Cup of Noodle, and a few canteens. "You okay?" I asked. She seemed startled.

Ava nodded. "Fine. What time are we leaving?" She asked

I shrugged. "I was thinking ten. We should spend the first day there getting a game plan to set up." I saw Ava glance at the clock, and I looked as well - it was around seven now.

"I thought we alreayd had a game plan." Ava said, tossing the box of Fruit Loops in the sack.

"We do only partially. We need to figure out what we do when we get there."

"Go save the Gaurdian. Duh. Then she'll help us save the others and boom we should be able to finish up soon."

I sighed. I hated when Avva got like this. Impulsive. Not listening. At these times usually it was with Mom or Dad. They handled it calmly. I wanted to do the same, but Ava was Ava - it was a lot more difficult than it seemed. "Ava, we need a moredetailedplan, if you haven't noticed. Who'se leading us? we need to actually get a plan of action, not just an outline of -"

"Woah woah woah. What are you talking about, Who's leading? There is no leader. I thought that was another thing that we agreed on. What happened to everythingw e agreed on when we createthis world? Huh? I thought we agreed on a lot of things."

I gripped on the counter, turning my knuckles white. "God dammit Ava, why don't you listen?! We just need a plan of action, why the hell do you try to make it more than that?"

"Stop trying to be like Dad, Ethan. Just shut the heck up."


"I didn't ask for this you know. I just wanted to my own world. I didn't ask for all that crap. I didn't want it. I don't want it. So don't give it to me!" Ava amsacked the table hard, and you could hear some of the glasses in the cabinets shake.

"We thought you knew what youw ere getting into. I knew. Heck, even Zoey knew. Ava, what makes you think you don't know? What makes you think you're the only scared one? Fudge Ava, we're all sacred. We're all scared to death. But together we can save all seven Gaurdians. What's wrong witih you Ava? What are you scared? Why on earth is the most headstrong, prefect, smart, and even seemingly obnoxious Ava scared all the sudden? What changed?"

Ava was crying now. She was bretahing hard. I didn't want to say anything more, I didn't even want to touch her. "Ava. What changed?"

"You did."


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