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The Girl Of The Past

Novel By: The Me Inside
Action and adventure


Running away has it's problems but running away cause you got this strange power that can send you back into time can cause a whole lot of problems for a girl named Hanna. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Jun 27, 2012    Reads: 1    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


The voice seemed refreshing to me so i wasn't scared, i nodded my head i would love to see the world in a anouther way. Stand up Hanna then, i picked my self up and spread my hands

in the air trying to find him. Do not focus on seeing if you cannot the voice stated, i put my hands down focus on hearing and smell try to find me the voice called out. I stood their thinking

of the time back in the woods when the animals became clear as i could smell them and hear their movement. It took alot more concentrating and time but the world around me, became

different?! Good Hanna, rely on theese sense's and now man or beast can sneak around you. The smell was honey, as i heard his breathing i turned to his direction found you i said 

pointing. He laughed, your very talented to use it to that skill but now you must master it. It was tougher than this was, we went over and over again about smelling farther and hearing more

it made my head spin but i continuosly tried harder. My thoughts seemed to wander on how their all doing when a hand hit my head, Oww i said annoyed why'd you do that i asked? 

you were thinking of unnessasary things just then huh he asked? Ugh , he knew he got me cause he chuckled. Good now lets continu, being dead had some good points you never got 

hungry and never tired but he still made me sleep. He kept on with new lessons in using the sword and kai which is energy flow around the body that would'nt kill me to use but it will still

drain my energy enough to make me pass out. The world became a new picture to me, i could see the lining of the tree and every singel pedal that was individualy were different even the 

ripples on the floor became aparent. When finaly, Hanna he called to me. I looked in his direction, my job is done and you shall go back to the world of the living. Can you do one thing for

me he asked? yes i said quickly anything i added, He chuckled. Tell Mia and her brothers Li and Sai that i love them and that their mother is so proud of them. My heart seemed to break

like a balloon as i spoke yes i'll make sure. I felt his presence vanish as i rubbed my tears away , i sat their waiting for somthing to happen. When i collapsed, Hanna a voice called. Child 

Wake up for God sake. My body trembled, Grandma i whispered. My voice was scratchy and rough and my body was stiff but i managed to hug her tightly, she was stiff for alittle while when

she gladly hugged me back. You reckless child, you gave so much pain to everyone. I felt my heart go wild, where is everyone anyway i asked? Their at the village 3 days away, i was still

happy will they becoming back soon i asked jumping up. My legs ploped me back on the ground as she hit me, for now rest child. I kept my eye's closed and told her that my eyes were trying

to adjust right know and that seemed ok with her. She handed me a bowl of soup as it hit my empty cold stomache, i globbered that down. The whole not seeing part and using sense's came

naturaly and alot easier to use in this world so i didn't even have to think about it to use it. Grandma gave me lots of rest and food and made me stretch and walk when on the second day

i was already running around, hey even jumping through tree's. It felt amazing to be alive, again. My heart flutterd as i hear foot stepps and voices, i saw them their outlines and bodys 

their heat and sweat not to mention their heart beats. Their outlines stopped as i heard their hearts beat faster, i hadn't realized but i was crying through my closed eye's. I heard their bags 

drop as they dashed over and gave me a huge hug, they were all crying i could hear it in their voice's. Hanna they yelled running and huging me tightly, i wouldn't have minded if time could

just have stopped here and now so it could stay like this forever. As i smiled embracing everyone.





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