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Stepping on Crushed Snails

Novel By: Tomer Nechmad
Action and adventure

I have no idea what i am doing. actually, i do, since i am writing it. but i have no idea where this is going. View table of contents...


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Submitted:May 17, 2013    Reads: 6    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

The other guy, Eylon the one with the vest, finally came out of the car. They were now all in the open, right in front of the old town of the Oods. Eylon was the only one carrying his gun, the rest had theirs concealed.

The plan was simple: Get in and find the girl. The rest is arbitrary. Super simple. Nothing was supposed to go wrong. They have been planning this for months. Walk in through the main entry, go to Iris Street, house No 5. In through the back door, silently proceed to her room. And from there they'll know what to do.

"Eylon, for fuck's sakes, could you possibly have brought something more visible than that? Take off that silly vest and leave the M16 in the car. I told you we don't need guns for this."
"Whatever, man. Every time we plan something like this it's always 'no guns'. BO-RING! But whatever, it's your call", said Eylon as he proceeded to take off his vest and removed the weapon, leaving it in the car. They were now ready, all in black uniforms, ready to go.

The first few steps were easy. The town's guards were asleep, and getting by was as easy as slicing a banana. The hard part was actually finding the god damn house. It took them 15 minutes until they found the Iris street, and another few minutes to get to the house. When they got there, her parents were just leaving. They waited a moment for them to pass the corner before moving up and entering the house.

The back door was a tiny bit squeaky, but not enough for her to hear. Her room was in the attic, so getting up without making any sound would be hard.
But they had a better plan.


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