Welcome Visitor: Login to the siteJoin the site

The unsespected victory

Poetry By: darkism
Action and adventure

The unsespected victory

Submitted:Jul 6, 2010    Reads: 66    Comments: 15    Likes: 4   


Im in the battle, facing my fear inside,

this is a gamble,am a going to live or die?,

i know i will never,see my family,so i close my eyes

in hope of Victory,whil i will raise or fall in misary.

The hours past,so fast that i coudnt see,the past in me

or atleast the precios time that i spend with my family.

And in the end we won,i was suprased of this victory

i coudnt realise the life that i was given,to hold one more

chance,to become better in everyway and in my opinion

this is better than my display,which i ow to my comrades.


| Email this story Email this Poetry | Add to reading list


About | News | Contact | Your Account | TheNextBigWriter | Self Publishing | Advertise

© 2013 TheNextBigWriter, LLC. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy Policy.