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The Storm That Blew Me Away

Short story By: briannaheath
Action and adventure

well ,your gonna have to read to find out!

Submitted:Jul 17, 2012    Reads: 30    Comments: 0    Likes: 1   

I could feel the winds breeze brush threw my long,brown hair while I raced my boat threw the waves of the Atlantic ocean. The large body of water was an incredibly dark,heavy,blue blanket that laid upon the indentions of the land.

Suddenly, I could hear the water hissing at me. As I move deeper into the ocean,the clouds began to darken, getting closer and closer together like they were in a rush to get somewhere. I started to feel anxious about going further, but I put my worries aside and watched my boat drift upon the humongous waves.

The white, spinning, eye of the dark water was staring straight at me, coming towards me as I froze in fear.The eye was like a tornado inside out but was getting stronger instead of weaker.My anxiety was growing so fast that i started to feel a burning sensation inside of my head.

When the lightning striked, the thunder roared like a lion.

I drove wave by wave, but the salt water was going over instead of under. So, i decide to race to the basement of the boat as fast as i could.i kept falling from it moving side to side.The storm jostled me to the floor of the basment. i was terrified, thinking that was going to be the end of my life,

And it was...


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