(I will be updating this piece in segments)
This is a piece I have been working on for a while now, I am unsure as to how often I will be updating it, or how big the updates will be, but hopefully those updates will happen.
A few critique questions for this piece:
-How is the mood of it?
I apologize for taking so long, but here it is, #10! I estimate that I am half way through #12, so hopefully I'll get it done soon. This Holiday Man story is set during Christmas and I hope you enjoy it!
Emily Grunge has lost everything. Furthermore she has been blamed for burning down their house and murdering their mother. After being declared psychotic she was sentenced to two years in a mental hospital. After serving her time she is out to finally get her revenge on the person who did it.
Belle Galloway is confronted by a police officer named Jason Smith. Her gut feeling is telling her not to trust this guy but just one small mistake causes her to lose the ones she loves the most. Even herself.
The short story is an incident that happened in a small village. The small village contains about 40 families. The main characters are Britney and Brianna, both of them are sisters. Their Dad who is a village doctor and Mom which is a house wife. Britney and Brianna often go to the beach and pick...
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