I wrote this story years ago and now I'm editing it rather alot by adding in loads more detail/character depth. It's not perfect of course but I would appreciate any feedback on this first chapter! That way I can edit it more. :D
Inspired by Danger Days: The True Lives of the Fabulous Killjoys. A young man who seemingly has it all is willing to risk losing it for what is right. He proves that he would sacrifice everything he has to help the world.
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My Version of the warrior novels by Erin Hunter.
One apprentice, Crimsonpaw, discovers, as evil nears, how much faith Starclan can put on one single cat...
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Orcania and the Sphere of Desolation. Is about the Planet Orcania. Where its based. It is the home of Millions of Orcs, imps, Gnomes, etc. Mainly Orcs. Due to the Fact that they are the first one to evolve on the planet. There is indeed, quite some hatred between indifferent species. Is this thei...