This is an essay that I'm writing for my english class and I need some feedback. It's supposed to be a sort personal narrative, just talking about yourself. I'm not sure if it is interesting/creative enough. It's also not completely finished. Thanks!
How often it takes someone else to open our eyes to what the really important things are in life....what a blessing it is when someone 'reminds' us that there is a great deal more life left.....never grow old too soon, put on your dancing shoes, a smile and get out there!
Act I Sc.I of the play 'The Merchant of Venice' can be called a reflective scene, that sets the mood of the play throughout. In other words, the opening scene has accomplished the task of informative exposition of the play introducing important characters,elements of the plot and the general atmo...
My 9th grade CBA teacher asked me to write an essay about time. She asked us to write about what we would do if we could turn back time or go into the future. I asked if I could write about Time in general. This is what I came up with in about 50 minutes. Please comment!
A essay describing the events that happened while the author was on a rowing trip with his family. His dad challenged him and his brother to a race. Though the author won, the parents come back hours later with a amusing, but dark story of why they came so late.
An essay I wrote a few years back for school on the first half of the book Cat's Eye by Margaret Atwood, specifically about the way Elaine was treated as a child and how it effected her adult self. I got an A on it.