This is a poem I wrote while in class. It's rough but I will still enter it.
The story is that there are two people who care for each other. It didn't work the first time, now their on the same path again except that the roles they play are reversed.
This poem is dedicated to Gerabel, who is having his first Booksie Birthday with us this weekend. Jerry is a very important member of Booksie, and I want him to know how much he truly is appreciated.
Jerry, I wrote this poem with you in mind. Happy Booksie Birthday.
Gosh I can't even tell you how great this poem was. Practically perfect in my eyes, no mistakes that I could see. The emotion she puts into her poem is like a tidal wave that keeps coming back. Her rhyme scheme wasn't forced at all, and it flows from beginning to end. You'll be hooked.