jmf98 gave me challange.I had to write a story,or poem...according to this:
Place of happening:California
Hope it's good...I know that my title isnt very good,but....
I couldnt decide between Unpleasent meeting,Unpleasent love and Tipical cheater,all titles suc...
I came up with this just as I was about to go to sleep when i was remembering the day i spent looking after my friends kids.
Don't be fooled by this poem i actually love kids...this poem reminds me of my younger brother when he was a baby lol.
I had to write a poem with this sentence:
THE ANCIENT PYRAMIDS ARE STUPENDOUS
The fear on your face was big.
He was like a stabbing knife getting in my heart.
Eternal scar on my mind.
This is based on my sister's relationship, but, there are a few major differences.
1. My sister and he are not broken up.
2. My sister seems to show no mercy (she has righteous reasons it seems)
(I got this just be listening to a phone call)
And, remember- constructive critic...
This poem is written for "Them". Them is generally friends all around. I had in mind my G-chat group that persuaded me to create a booksie [(cough, cough) you guys better comment! (cough cough)]. So, you get the idea, this is a basic expression of gratitude and reflection. (not my best work so far)