This is a short story which is done in the way that it's being essentially read to you by the main character..
I did this a while ago but have recently read over and edited.. I'm looking for some suggestions on how to improve or make it more interesting. Open to critic ^^
A professional poker dealer is subbed in for a fresh game. After a while of dealing, it becomes obvious that one of the players is cheating however, there is not enough solid evidence for anyone to prove so. The story unfolds as the dealer attempts to uncover the methods of unfair play without b...
Will Betcham is a gangster in 1940s Los Angeles. He is quite happy with his life. Then one evening he sees three witches. They tell him that he will be the boss. Should he act to make that happen, even though the boss is one of his oldest friends?
This is my reworking of a famous play.
| Updated Mar 2, 2015
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