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Booksie Address: http://www.booksie.com/benjawilliam
Country: United States
Member Since: Jun 26, 2012

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Three Nights -Ben Asper

Short Story by benjawilliam
Posted: Jan 29, 2013
This is a short story about a killer who lives in his...
Tags:horror, thriller, suspense, killer, violent, murderer, edgar, ben asper

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Three Nights -Ben Asper

Short Story by benjawilliam
Posted: Jan 29, 2013
This is a short story about a killer who lives in his...

"Stone" excerpt part 2

Short Story by benjawilliam
Posted: Jul 3, 2012
Ambre was not the only survivor of the incident on...

"Stone" excerpt

Short Story by benjawilliam
Posted: Jun 26, 2012
This is an excerpt from a novella I'm working on with the...



I've been writing for a really long time and have written two novels already.  While I work on getting them published, I thought it might be fun to join this site to show some of my work to the public.

I will read almost anything anyone sends to me and I will be completely honest with my comments, however brutal that might be.  I don't see the point in putting up vague comments simply saying "I like it" or whatever, so I expect no less from anyone else.  If you choose to read on my work and comment on it, I simply ask that you give me something to work with.  Saying that you like it or not doesn't help me at all.  I want to know WHY.

If you have a problem with constructive criticism, I don't recommend asking me to read any of your work.  I'll tell you what I think it needs.  I'm not a professional, so my word is simply that, and you may take it or leave it.  The point of this website, in my opinion, is for writers to show their work to others who can give them honest opinions about it so that they can grow and learn, and simple "i like it" or "I hate it" comments DONT do that.  So please, if you comment, PLEASE leave me with some substance :)

I probably wont put any completed works on here unless they are short stories, but I will however be putting exerpts from the different projects I'm working on.

 

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