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The Magical Garden

Book review By: ruthi
Childrens stories



Aynik was 10 years old. Ayrilk was always told by her parents to
take care of your toys; there's
so many kids that would love to
have your toys.
Aynik always thought about that,
due to Aynik had just got an very
expensive doll house for a birthday present,
just a couple weeks ago. She didn't
know how to tell them, that the
doll house was broken, by her doings.
Finally Ayrilk got her nerves up, Mom
and Dad I got to tell you something Ayrilk's
parents didn't know what to expect,
because she was so upset.
Aynik start to explain, I was jumping from my bunk bed, I
bounced so high; I landed on my
doll house. And it BROKE! Tears start forming in Aynik eyes.
Aynik's parents was so amazed of what thier daughter
had told them.
Aynik's mom and dad, at the same time asked are you ok,
as Aynik mom grabbed her; in her arms.
Aynik's parents, then start saying you know we have
always told you to be carefully on that bunk bed.
Aynik sighed, and thought to herself maybe they
won't say anything about the doll house.
When she thought she was in the clear, that's when
her parents surprised her, and start talking about the
the doll house.
Now Aynik, you are old enough to take care of your
toys, money doesn't grow on trees. Aynik closed her
eyes and imagined dollars bills were leaves on a trees;
then start smiling.
Aynik's mom and dad was not happy at all, they then
replied young lady there isn't anything funny here,
Aynik then replied but mom and daaad, Aynik parent's
didn't give a chance to say anymore.
Aynik's parents told Aynik you need to pray for a miracle, that the
doll house
can be repaired; then left her room
in silence.
Aynik thought about what her parents
had said. Aynik was ready to go to
bed, before she went to bed she got
on her knees and start praying.
Dear God my parents have always
taught me to have faith, and how
to pray. Aynik started to cry, then
she finished praying, and start
L smiling; and said I know God
has heard my prayer.
Aynik then went to bed, then
finally went to sleep.
Through out the night Aynik was
tossing and turning.
The next day was there, Aynik woke
up feeling great as if nothing had
happen, she felt as if she didn't
have a care at all.
She went downstairs after she got
dressed for school.
Aynik's mom was cooking breakfast,
dad was already eating, it was
quiet in the kitchen, but no more
then usual.
Then finally her dad asked her how
are you doing my daughter, Aynik
said I'm ok dad.
mom
was standing at the stove smiling;
mom said hurry up and sit down
and eat so you won't miss the bus.

Aynik said ok mom, and smiled at
her dad as he left for work, and said
bye dad.
Aynik said mom I had a dream lastnight but I can't figure out what
it was, mom stated what do you mean
sweetheart, Aynik then said mom
I talked to God, before I went to
bed then I had a dream . I just can't
figure out what it was. Aynik mom
then said it going to be ok, go get
your bus.
Aynik left the house and got on
the bus and went to school.
Aynik arrived at school she was
still in a great mood. As the day
went on she was ready to go
home.
Ms. Rose Aynik's teacher, saw her
day dreamiming, then called Aynik
to her desk. Ms. Rose asked Aynik
was she ok, caused she knew Aynik
never acted like that before.
Aynik replied, Ms. Rose I am going
through something right now, Ms
Rose was very concerned. Is there
anything I can do.
Aynik knew that her teacher went
To church on a regular basic, and
She felt comfortable talking to
Her teacher on different levels.
So Aynik said yes Ms Rose, Ms
Rose appeared to be very happy
knowing that Aynik would confide
in her. Ms Rose said go ahead
Aynik tell me what's going on, Aynik
starting smiling, she was ready to
Explain.
After Aynik explain to Ms Rose
what was going on, she said you
did the right thing, God will give
you the anwser, just be patient.
Ms Rose told Aynik to go back
to her seat, she will be going
home real soon, and copy down
her spelling words from the
black board.
Aynik replied ok Ms Rose, she
thought to herself I like my
teacher.


It was 3:00pm the bells start ringing,
school was finally out. Aynik was the
first was out, the teacher told her
to slow down, by then Aynik was
already on the bus.
She got home happy as a Lark, mom
greeted her at the door, mom said
you must of had a great day today. Aynik sat down and started to watch
TV, mom interrupted her and said, isn't
there something you need to do.
Aynik was puzzled, she didn't know
what her mother was talking about.
Aynik's mother said let me remind, the
doll house does that ring a bell.

Aynik became emotional, her mother
said there's no need for that, just go
clean up the mess. Aynik was relieved
she said ok mom. Mom said think about
it while you pick of every piece, Aynik
said ok.
Aynik went up stairs, the doll house
was still in the same place.
As she picks up the pieces, gathering
them up putting them in a paper bag;
she really start thinking.
So many thoughts went through
her head, I'm glad mom didn't ground
me. I wonder what dad going to
say when he get home. O know she
heard the door open then shut. It
was her dad, Aynik became nervous
when she heard footsteps, but it
wasn't her dad it was her sister Lynn.
Aynik was relieved, Lynn said what
are you doing, Aynik explained what
had happened, Lynn was surprised.
she didn't get trouble, and start questioning her, what did mom and
dad say.( See Lynn had spent the night
with some friends from church,
she was unware what had happened).
Aynik said they said pray for a
maracle, and I did, then I had a
dream and I can't explain it.
That peaked Lynn's curosity, girl
what do you mean you, had a dream it was
something I can't explain.
Lynn wouldn't let it go, Lynn was
the oldest sister, and she always
stayed on her sister, just trying
make sure she would make things
clear; and stay on top of things.
And always pray about things,
like thier parents had taught
them, Then out of the blue Aynik
said I will pray about it, I have
faith that God will give me the
anwser. Lynn said that's good, I'm
proud of you. As she left
the room, she said stop jumping
on the bed, you could of really
hurt yourself. "Be careful, find
something else to do. Read a book,
the good book. Aynik was confused,
Lynn turned at saw the expression
on Aynik face. Lynn said the Bible,
Aynik then said ok; she knew all
about the Bible.
As Lynn left her father was
already at the door, he stated in
a very peaceful voice to Lynn
I am so proud of you, you told
your sister right.
Lynn father called Lynn away from
Aynik bedroom door and you saved
your sister from getting grounded.
Lynn smiled, but really didn't
understand. Lynn's dad explain what
you said to your sister is all that
was needed; then stated you have
really matured. Then left it like
that.
Lynn was unware that her dad
had heard everything she had said.
Aynik dad knocked on the door, he
come in, Aynik was very scared,
and she showed every bit of it, and
her dad knew it.
Aynik dad said what do you have
to say for yourself young lady,
Aynik said what do you mean dad.
Aynik thought she was out of the
woods, cause her mom didn't say
much about the doll house. But she
knew her dad was the one that
made the final decesion, but she
didn't know he was going to be
so mad. When dad says what
you got to say for youself young
lady the punishment was going to
be bad!
Dad said well Aynik what do you have
to say? Aynik thought about it
for a while and said "I prayed
about it" her dad was amazined
with her answer.
Aynik was scared, but she smiled,
through her amazement her dad
did too; grabbed her, and gave her
a hug; then left the room.
Aynik said thank you God, then she
got on her knees and began to
pray, thank you dear God for this
Maracle, please give me a answer
to my dream.
Aynik got up did her home work, took
a shower then went to bed, for some
reason she put the bag with her doll
house by her bed.
Aynik closed her eyes, no sooner then
she closed her eyes, everything she
was wishing for began.
Aynik start dreaming, she heard
a voice so loud in clear, my dear
child I have heard your prayers,
your tears has made your life
bloom my flower. Your faith had
has given you strengh, to make
you stand strong.
Aynik was in her back yard, with
a bag in her hand, Aynik said to
herself this is the bag I put my
doll house in.
The voice still so loud and clear,
keep your faith and follow me,
Aynik kept walking towards a
area which appeared to be a
garden. There was a shovel
laying by a hole, Aynik didn't
know what was going on, this
was so real, she thought to
herself am I dreaming. She
walked over to the hole, with
some type of force she had
lowered the bag in the hole.
The dirt was around the hole
was gone, the bag with the
broken doll house had disappeared.
Aynik woke up looking for her
the brown bag with her doll house.
It was still there by the bed where
she left it.

Aynik was quite puzzled, how can
this be I was carrying the bag, then
she paused I was dreaming. I know
I know she said in a very loud voice,
that's it, it's God he is telling me
the answer to my first dream. Aynik
fell back to sleep.
Lynn and Aynik's mother and father
came in the room to see what was
going on. They all were surprised to
see her sleeping.
Aynik mom shook her, are you ok,
Aynik said yes with her eyes barely
opened. Her mother asked why were
you yelling so loud, Aynik replied
I woke up from my dream, I couldn't
figure out what was going on, the
dream was so real.
Aynik mother said honey tell me
about it, well mom I dreamed about
the doll house the paper bag a hole
in the ground and! Aynik mom said
slow down take a breath or two.
Aynik's Dad told her to go back
to sleep, Lynn just rubbed Aynik's
forehead. Everyone left her room,
Aynik's mother and father start
talking about the doll house, she's
really put alot if thought into
this situation.
Aynik went right back into her
dream, she ended up by the
hole, which was covered with
dirt.
The next thing she knew, the shovel
reappeared, Aynik heard a voice my
dear child dig; she picked up the
shovel and start digging.
Aynik was so surprised, the bag
was gone, but as she dug the doll
house appeared, she dug and dug.
When Aynik finished digging the
doll house was out of the ground,
it was fixed.
Aynik did not make a sound, her
mouth was wide open, all could
say was Thank you Jesus! A voice
so soft and serence said, your
faith behold you, and it was done.
The voice sounded like a angel
to Aynik, at that time she
understood what was going on,
and what was happening.
Aynik said I prayed for a maracle,
and now I know it will be done.
Aynik woke up, the bag was gone
from the side of her bed. But
she was not alarmed, because she
knew it ment some wonderful.
Aynik ran down the stairs, no
one was around, this is odd she
thought. I know it's Saturday,
no school for my sister, no work
for dad, mom had no errands,
at least that's what she said
lastnight.
Aynik's dad and mother came in
the room and said who are you
talking to.
Aynik mouth was wide open, when
she turned around, there was her
doll house it was fixed.
Aynik said how did you do that,
how did you get my doll house out
of my dream, I knew it was fixed
I found the anwser in my dream.
I prayed for a maracle like you
said.
Dad how did you do that, well
Aynik I wasn't in your dream,
but God had it where this whole
situation was weighing heavy
on my mind. i have a friend
who does carpentar work, I
called him out of the blue.
He said I heard you had a doll
house, you need to be repaired.
Aynik's dad was amazined,
Mark, Ms. Rose husband picked
up on that. Mark then said
you wonder how I knew that,
Aynik's dad said yes.
Mark said my wife is Mrs. Rose
Aynik's teacher, your daughter
told my wife, what had happen.
I was just about to call, you to
have you bring by the doll house,
Aynik's dad said ok, if its ok I'm
on the way.
Mark asked where was Aynik,
Aynik's dad said she is sleeping,
Mark said that's cool, I will
call you when it's ready.
One (1) hour had past, Aynik's
dad was getting restless, due to
he was hoping it would be fixed,
before Aynik woke up.
No sooner than that thought left
his head the phone rang, it was
Mark telling Aynik's dad to come
get the doll house. Aynik's dad asked
how much do I owe you, Mark
said nothing at all, it was my
pleasure. Aynik's dad said thank you,
Mark just smiled in a peaceful way.
But guess what, he is married
to Mrs. Rose your school teacher.
Aynik start smiling, and said
God knows everyone.
Aynik mother said yes, if we trust
him and have faith maracles
can happen. Now Aynik what have
you learned from this.
Pray to God when I break my toys
and he will create a magical garden,
and fix my toys; then she smiled.
Aynik dad added to the conversation,
and said it's not that easy, but God
will supply our needs, but he wants
us take care of our worldly things.
But he wants us to know, he will
show us that he will always be there, when you least expect it.

Lynn also had something to say, Aynik
just remember, things happen for a
reason this was a miracle, because
your teacher told her husband, and
her husband was daddy's friend.
Just remember God is good!
Aynik also said God can perform
miracles. . .

THE END



Submitted:Mar 16, 2011    Reads: 67    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


The magical garden

Aynik was 10 years old. Ayrilk was always told by her parents to
take care of your toys; there's
so many kids that would love to
have your toys.
Aynik always thought about that,
due to Aynik had just got an very
expensive doll house for a birthday present,
just a couple weeks ago. She didn't
know how to tell them, that the
doll house was broken, by her doings.
Finally Ayrilk got her nerves up, Mom
and Dad I got to tell you something Ayrilk's
parents didn't know what to expect,
because she was so upset.
Aynik start to explain, I was jumping from my bunk bed, I
bounced so high; I landed on my
doll house. And it BROKE! Tears start forming in Aynik eyes.
Aynik's parents was so amazed of what thier daughter
had told them.
Aynik's mom and dad, at the same time asked are you ok,
as Aynik mom grabbed her; in her arms.
Aynik's parents, then start saying you know we have
always told you to be carefully on that bunk bed.
Aynik sighed, and thought to herself maybe they
won't say anything about the doll house.
When she thought she was in the clear, that's when
her parents surprised her, and start talking about the
the doll house.
Now Aynik, you are old enough to take care of your
toys, money doesn't grow on trees. Aynik closed her
eyes and imagined dollars bills were leaves on a trees;
then start smiling.
Aynik's mom and dad was not happy at all, they then
replied young lady there isn't anything funny here,
Aynik then replied but mom and daaad, Aynik parent's
didn't give a chance to say anymore.
Aynik's parents told Aynik you need to pray for a maracle, that the
doll house
can be repaired; then left her room
in silence.
Aynik thought about what her parents
had said. Aynik was ready to go to
bed, before she went to bed she got
on her knees and start praying.
Dear God my parents have always
taught me to have faith, and how
to pray. Aynik started to cry, then
she finished praying, and start
L smiling; and said I know God
has heard my prayer.
Aynik then went to bed, then
finally went to sleep.
Through out the night Aynik was
tossing and turning.
The next day was there, Aynik woke
up feeling great as if nothing had
happen, she felt as if she didn't
have a care at all.
She went downstairs after she got
dressed for school.
Aynik's mom was cooking breakfast,
dad was already eating, it was
quiet in the kitchen, but no more
then usual.
Then finally her dad asked her how
are you doing my daughter, Aynik
said I'm ok dad.
mom
was standing at the stove smiling;
mom said hurry up and sit down
and eat so you won't miss the bus.

Aynik said ok mom, and smiled at
her dad as he left for work, and said
bye dad.
Aynik said mom I had a dream lastnight but I can't figure out what
it was, mom stated what do you mean
sweetheart, Aynik then said mom
I talked to God, before I went to
bed then I had a dream . I just can't
figure out what it was. Aynik mom
then said it going to be ok, go get
your bus.
Aynik left the house and got on
the bus and went to school.
Aynik arrived at school she was
still in a great mood. As the day
went on she was ready to go
home.
Ms. Rose Aynik's teacher, saw her
day dreamiming, then called Aynik
to her desk. Ms. Rose asked Aynik
was she ok, caused she knew Aynik
never acted like that before.
Aynik replied, Ms. Rose I am going
through something right now, Ms
Rose was very concerned. Is there
anything I can do.
Aynik knew that her teacher went
To church on a regular basic, and
She felt comfortable talking to
Her teacher on different levels.
So Aynik said yes Ms Rose, Ms
Rose appeared to be very happy
knowing that Aynik would confide
in her. Ms Rose said go ahead
Aynik tell me what's going on, Aynik
starting smiling, she was ready to
Explain.
After Aynik explain to Ms Rose
what was going on, she said you
did the right thing, God will give
you the anwser, just be patient.
Ms Rose told Aynik to go back
to her seat, she will be going
home real soon, and copy down
her spelling words from the
black board.
Aynik replied ok Ms Rose, she
thought to herself I like my
teacher.


It was 3:00pm the bells start ringing,
school was finally out. Aynik was the
first was out, the teacher told her
to slow down, by then Aynik was
already on the bus.
She got home happy as a Lark, mom
greeted her at the door, mom said
you must of had a great day today. Aynik sat down and started to watch
TV, mom interrupted her and said, isn't
there something you need to do.
Aynik was puzzled, she didn't know
what her mother was talking about.
Aynik's mother said let me remind, the
doll house does that ring a bell.

Aynik became emotional, her mother
said there's no need for that, just go
clean up the mess. Aynik was relieved
she said ok mom. Mom said think about
it while you pick of every piece, Aynik
said ok.
Aynik went up stairs, the doll house
was still in the same place.
As she picks up the pieces, gathering
them up putting them in a paper bag;
she really start thinking.
So many thoughts went through
her head, I'm glad mom didn't ground
me. I wonder what dad going to
say when he get home. O know she
heard the door open then shut. It
was her dad, Aynik became nervous
when she heard footsteps, but it
wasn't her dad it was her sister Lynn.
Aynik was relieved, Lynn said what
are you doing, Aynik explained what
had happened, Lynn was surprised.
she didn't get trouble, and start questioning her, what did mom and
dad say.( See Lynn had spent the night
with some friends from church,
she was unware what had happened).
Aynik said they said pray for a
maracle, and I did, then I had a
dream and I can't explain it.
That peaked Lynn's curosity, girl
what do you mean you, had a dream it was
something I can't explain.
Lynn wouldn't let it go, Lynn was
the oldest sister, and she always
stayed on her sister, just trying
make sure she would make things
clear; and stay on top of things.
And always pray about things,
like thier parents had taught
them, Then out of the blue Aynik
said I will pray about it, I have
faith that God will give me the
anwser. Lynn said that's good, I'm
proud of you. As she left
the room, she said stop jumping
on the bed, you could of really
hurt yourself. "Be careful, find
something else to do. Read a book,
the good book. Aynik was confused,
Lynn turned at saw the expression
on Aynik face. Lynn said the Bible,
Aynik then said ok; she knew all
about the Bible.
As Lynn left her father was
already at the door, he stated in
a very peaceful voice to Lynn
I am so proud of you, you told
your sister right.
Lynn father called Lynn away from
Aynik bedroom door and you saved
your sister from getting grounded.
Lynn smiled, but really didn't
understand. Lynn's dad explain what
you said to your sister is all that
was needed; then stated you have
really matured. Then left it like
that.
Lynn was unware that her dad
had heard everything she had said.
Aynik dad knocked on the door, he
come in, Aynik was very scared,
and she showed every bit of it, and
her dad knew it.
Aynik dad said what do you have
to say for yourself young lady,
Aynik said what do you mean dad.
Aynik thought she was out of the
woods, cause her mom didn't say
much about the doll house. But she
knew her dad was the one that
made the final decesion, but she
didn't know he was going to be
so mad. When dad says what
you got to say for youself young
lady the punishment was going to
be bad!
Dad said well Aynik what do you have
to say? Aynik thought about it
for a while and said "I prayed
about it" her dad was amazined
with her answer.
Aynik was scared, but she smiled,
through her amazement her dad
did too; grabbed her, and gave her
a hug; then left the room.
Aynik said thank you God, then she
got on her knees and began to
pray, thank you dear God for this
Maracle, please give me a answer
to my dream.
Aynik got up did her home work, took
a shower then went to bed, for some
reason she put the bag with her doll
house by her bed.
Aynik closed her eyes, no sooner then
she closed her eyes, everything she
was wishing for began.
Aynik start dreaming, she heard
a voice so loud in clear, my dear
child I have heard your prayers,
your tears has made your life
bloom my flower. Your faith had
has given you strengh, to make
you stand strong.
Aynik was in her back yard, with
a bag in her hand, Aynik said to
herself this is the bag I put my
doll house in.
The voice still so loud and clear,
keep your faith and follow me,
Aynik kept walking towards a
area which appeared to be a
garden. There was a shovel
laying by a hole, Aynik didn't
know what was going on, this
was so real, she thought to
herself am I dreaming. She
walked over to the hole, with
some type of force she had
lowered the bag in the hole.
The dirt was around the hole
was gone, the bag with the
broken doll house had disappeared.
Aynik woke up looking for her
the brown bag with her doll house.
It was still there by the bed where
she left it.

Aynik was quite puzzled, how can
this be I was carrying the bag, then
she paused I was dreaming. I know
I know she said in a very loud voice,
that's it, it's God he is telling me
the answer to my first dream. Aynik
fell back to sleep.
Lynn and Aynik's mother and father
came in the room to see what was
going on. They all were surprised to
see her sleeping.
Aynik mom shook her, are you ok,
Aynik said yes with her eyes barely
opened. Her mother asked why were
you yelling so loud, Aynik replied
I woke up from my dream, I couldn't
figure out what was going on, the
dream was so real.
Aynik mother said honey tell me
about it, well mom I dreamed about
the doll house the paper bag a hole
in the ground and! Aynik mom said
slow down take a breath or two.
Aynik's Dad told her to go back
to sleep, Lynn just rubbed Aynik's
forehead. Everyone left her room,
Aynik's mother and father start
talking about the doll house, she's
really put alot if thought into
this situation.
Aynik went right back into her
dream, she ended up by the
hole, which was covered with
dirt.
The next thing she knew, the shovel
reappeared, Aynik heard a voice my
dear child dig; she picked up the
shovel and start digging.
Aynik was so surprised, the bag
was gone, but as she dug the doll
house appeared, she dug and dug.
When Aynik finished digging the
doll house was out of the ground,
it was fixed.
Aynik did not make a sound, her
mouth was wide open, all could
say was Thank you Jesus! A voice
so soft and serence said, your
faith behold you, and it was done.
The voice sounded like a angel
to Aynik, at that time she
understood what was going on,
and what was happening.
Aynik said I prayed for a maracle,
and now I know it will be done.
Aynik woke up, the bag was gone
from the side of her bed. But
she was not alarmed, because she
knew it ment some wonderful.
Aynik ran down the stairs, no
one was around, this is odd she
thought. I know it's Saturday,
no school for my sister, no work
for dad, mom had no errands,
at least that's what she said
lastnight.
Aynik's dad and mother came in
the room and said who are you
talking to.
Aynik mouth was wide open, when
she turned around, there was her
doll house it was fixed.
Aynik said how did you do that,
how did you get my doll house out
of my dream, I knew it was fixed
I found the anwser in my dream.
I prayed for a maracle like you
said.
Dad how did you do that, well
Aynik I wasn't in your dream,
but God had it where this whole
situation was weighing heavy
on my mind. i have a friend
who does carpentar work, I
called him out of the blue.
He said I heard you had a doll
house, you need to be repaired.
Aynik's dad was amazined,
Mark, Ms. Rose husband picked
up on that. Mark then said
you wonder how I knew that,
Aynik's dad said yes.
Mark said my wife is Mrs. Rose
Aynik's teacher, your daughter
told my wife, what had happen.
I was just about to call, you to
have you bring by the doll house,
Aynik's dad said ok, if its ok I'm
on the way.
Mark asked where was Aynik,
Aynik's dad said she is sleeping,
Mark said that's cool, I will
call you when it's ready.
One (1) hour had past, Aynik's
dad was getting restless, due to
he was hoping it would be fixed,
before Aynik woke up.
No sooner than that thought left
his head the phone rang, it was
Mark telling Aynik's dad to come
get the doll house. Aynik's dad asked
how much do I owe you, Mark
said nothing at all, it was my
pleasure. Aynik's dad said thank you,
Mark just smiled in a peaceful way.
But guess what, he is married
to Mrs. Rose your school teacher.
Aynik start smiling, and said
God knows everyone.
Aynik mother said yes, if we trust
him and have faith maracles
can happen. Now Aynik what have
you learned from this.
Pray to God when I break my toys
and he will create a magical garden,
and fix my toys; then she smiled.
Aynik dad added to the conversation,
and said it's not that easy, but God
will supply our needs, but he wants
us take care of our worldly things.
But he wants us to know, he will
show us that he will always be there, when you least expect it.

Lynn also had something to say, Aynik
just remember, things happen for a
reason this was a maracle, because
your teacher told her husband, and
her husband was daddy's friend.
Just remember God is good!
Aynik also said God can perform
maracles.....,

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