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It is story, which is based on father and daughter relationship. I write in the script about highness of the angry man. It is very good story please read and give your feedback to me.


Submitted:Jul 26, 2012    Reads: 1,255    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


THE ANGER LIMITS

characters

Ashika

Samarth

Namya(3-5 year old)

Scene 1

Morning ka time h, dono couple bed per so rahe h. ashika bed per se uthker Samarth ko nind se jagane ki koshis karti h.

Ashika = Samarth utho morning walk k liye jana h. or uske baad tumhe office bhi to jana h. agar issi tarah careless hoker pade rahoge to office k liye late ho jaoge. Ab chalo utho or jaldi se morning walk k liye ready ho jao.

Samarth= kya ashika tum b roz-roz subah itni jaldi utha deti ho,muje nahi jana aaj walk per, tum akeli chale jao.

Ashika= kya Samarth kitne aalsi ho tum, or namya ke uthne se pahle hame ghar wapas lotker bhi aana h. Samartha uthker Ashika ke shoulder per apna sar rakhker… Samarth= kya ashika tum b itni kya health conscious ho, chalna jaruri h kya….

Ashika thoda side me hatati h or Samarth ka sar apne hath per lete hue.

Ashika = haan jaruri h, nawab sahib…ab aapki batein puri ho gayi ho to chale. Dono walk k liye ready hote h or dining hall me pahuchte h. Dono walk karte hue ghar se niklte h. Scene 2

At morning walk location dono walk ker rhe h or bate ker rhe h. dono ek jagah ko cross karte h, jaha kuch awara ladke waha se gujrne wale logo ka mazak bana rhe h or comment pass ker rhe h. Samath or ashika bhi waha se cross hote h, tabi group me se ek ladka ashika per comment pass karta h.

Boy= hi, hi….. kya Jodi h, jisme bhi in mohatarma ka to kya kehna. Inhe dekhker to hamara bi walk karne ka dil ker rha h.

Samarth ko gussa ata h, lakin wo ashika ko dekhker apne gusse ko control karke ashika ke sath aage bad jata h. or thoda aage chal ker Samarth khasne ka natak karta h or neeche gir jata h, tabi ashika use sambhalti h.

Boy= arre dekho re futi kismat chori ki, ye to sala T.B. ka marij h. lakin bhaiyo kuch bhi kaho hum to bilkul fit-m-fit h.

Samarth= ashika muje bahut problem ho rhi h, tum please samne wali shop se ek pani ki bottle le aao, please….

Ashika= haan…haan, me lati hu, tum apna dhayan rakhna , me abi lati hu….

Boy= arre hum bi bahut dino se pyaase h. jara hame b to pani pila do. Samarth unko ghur ker dekhta h or kahta h "aa bete, me bujata hu teri pyaas." Or Samarth dodta hua jaker unko marna chalu ker deta h. Ashika jab ye dekhti h to, dodti hui waha pahuchti h or Samarth ko rokne ki koshis karti h or use chu-da-ker dur le jati h.

Ashika = ye kya tha Samarth tum unke sath hathapaii kyun ker rhe the or tumne unko marne ke liye mere sath wo bimar hone ka natak kiya.

Samarth= to kya karta main, dekha nai tumne wo tumhe kitne gandhe comments maar rhe the. Ye sunker mujse rha nahi gya or fir mene ye sab natak kiya.

Ashika=ye…ye…natak kiya, tum apne gusse ko controle me kyun nai rakh sakte. Ye to aaj inhone yaha mere sath aisa kiya to tumne marna chalu ker diya. Kal koi dusri jagah mere sath aisa karega to tum 1-1 ker ke puri duniya se ladoge. Samarth thoda apne daanto ko dabate hue….

Samartha= koi meri biwi or mer parivar ke sath badtameezi karega, to main use issi tara marunga.

Ashika= tum kabi nai sudhroge, muje hi tumhare gusse ko jelna padega.

Samarth= arre baba maaf ker do….galti ho gyi , ab aage se dhyan rakhunga.

Ashika= wo to dikh rha h kitna dhyan rakhte ho. Ab chalo yaha se…

Samarth=kaha….ghar….

Ashika smile karte hue= nai kisi or se maar pit karne.

Samarth= haan to chlo phir…

Ashika= chup karo…..or chup-chap ghar chalo, wese bhi namya ke uthne ka time ho gya h or tumhe bi to office jana h.

Scene 3

Dono ghar me enter hote h. or Ashika namya ke room me enter hoti h or curtains ko side me karti h or namya ke pass jaker bethker uske sar per hath ferte hue, kahti h…

Ashika = chlo utho beta, or jao jaldi se ready ho jao, aapko school bi jana h.

Namya, aankho ko malte hue uthti h, or good morning mumma kehker ashika ke gale lag jaati h.

Namya=mumma, aaj muje school nai jana…

Ashika=nai,beta aisa nai bolte h, aager tum school nai jaoge to tum good girl kese banoge.

Namya= per mumma, main to wese hi good girl hu.

Ashika smile karte hue=wo to tum ho hi, lakin tumhe or bi accha good girl banana h na, or jab aap good girl ban jaoge to tumhe bahut se gifts milenge or bahut si chocolates milegi h na…..to jao fata-fat school ke liye ready ho jao.

Namya= ok, mumma….main abi ready hoker aati hu. Love U Mumma.

Ashika= luv u two, beta…

Scene 4

Ashika, namya ko manaker room me jati h, or waha bed per Samarth ka towel pada dekhker kahti h.

Ashika= kya Samarth, tum koi b kaam thik se nai karte ho, hamesha kaam ko karne k bajaye kaam ko felane ka kaam karte hu.

Samarth=thoda sa gussa hoker chilate hue. Ab kya kiya mene ashika , tum kyun dant rhi ho.

Ashika Samarth ko dantate hue…

Ashika=mere samne gussa nai…

Samarth= thoda gusse se dekh ker, phir halki si smile pass karte hue, accha baba abi hatha deta hu.

Itne me hi namya room me enter hoti h.

Namya= good morning , papa.

Samarth=good morning beta, arre mera shone beta uth gye aap or ye kya aap to school ke liye b ready ho gaye.

Ashika= Samarth, usko itna pyar mat karo, usse tumhare gusse ki aadat nai h or na hi wo tumhare gusse ko sahan ker sakegi.

Samarth namya ko pakad ker=muje meri beti ki kisi baat per gussa nai aata or na hi kabi aayega.

Ashika= hmm….dekhte h, kab tk apni baat per tike rahte ho.

Namya= haan papa main ready ho gyi, lakin papa aapko mumma kyun dant rhi h, kya aapne bi meri tarah bister me su-su ker diya kya.

Samarth=chonkte hue,….nai beta… main, main, mene aisa kuch nai kiya.

Ashika jor se hansti h, or ashika ko dekhker namya bi hansne lag jati h.

Samarth-namya se=beta tumhe school k liye late ho rha h na, chalo jaldi se breakfast karo or phir hum school chalet h. Sabi apne kaam me lag jate h.

Scene 5

Breakfast table per sabi breakfast le rhe h or ashika serve ker rhi h or phir breakfast kerke Samarth namya ko godh me uthata h or dono gaadi me jaker beth jate h or ashika ko bye karte hue ghar se baher ki or nikal jate h.

Scene 6

Namya or Samarth school pahuchte h.

Samarth= jao beta aapka school aa gya h or acche se padhai karna.

Namya=ok, Luv U papa….bye Or namya car me se utarker school ki taraf chali jati h.

Scene 7

Evening me Samarth apne ghar pahuchta h or car me se nikal ker or piche wali seat se ek box nikalta h or phir ghar me enter hota h. Jese hi Samarth ghar me enter hota h, namya dodti hui aati h.

Namya= papa aa gye, papa aagye.

Samarth= arre mera shone beta, kese ho aap, aaj papa namya ke liye gift leker aaye h.

Namya= kya laye ho papa.

Samarth= aapke room me chalo, waha batate h. Samarth or namya room me pahuchate h or Samarth ashika ko bi aawaz lagata h.

Samarth= ashika kaha ho tum yaha aao na…

Ashika= kya h aa rhi hu…. Samarth uss box ko kholta h or usme se Samarth computer ke 1-1 parts ko connect karta h.

Namya= papa ye kya h?

Samarth= beta ye computer h.

Ashika= tum kyu laye ho isse abi, kya kaam aayega. Or abi to namya bi bahut choti h. tum bi na fijulkharchi bahut karte ho.

Samart haste hue= kio baat nai tum isse use ker lena.

Samarth computer k sabi parts connect karne k baad, computer ON karta h. tabi namya Samarth ke back per clap karte hue kahti h

Namya= very good papa, ab aap bade ho gye ho. You are very good boy. Ashika hasne lag jati h or Samarth namya ko apne gale se laga leta h, or uski aankhe num ho jati h or wo kahta h.

Samarth=haan beta tuje paker, main wese bhi bahut bada ho gya hu. Ashika Samarth ko sambhalte hue.

Samarth= cholo aaj issi baat per hum hotel me khana khayenge.

Namya= yes papa chalo..

Scene 8

Samarth, namya or ashika hotel me pahuchte h, unke pass waiter aata h or samarth or ashika khana order karte h.

Ashika= 2 dinner

Samarth= or 3 icrcream.

Khana ata h or teno khana khate hue batien karte h, khana pura ho jane ke baad, samarth waiter ko pani ke liye order karta h. Waiter pani leker aata h or jese hi wo table per pahuchta h, tabi galti se usse pani ki tray neeche gir jati h or sara pani namya k sar per gir jata h, or namya papa-papa ker ke rone lag jati h. ye dekhte hi samarth waiter ko marna chalu ker deta h.

Samarth= abe dekhker nai chal sakta…

Waiter samarth ki maar se bachte hue= sahab galti ho gyi, sahab….muje mat maaro sahab…

Samarth= galti ho gyi, saale galti ho gyi tujse….ager ye glass meri beti ko lag jata to... Samarth usse marta rahta h or Ashika samarth ko hatane ki koshis ker rhi h.

Ashika= Samarth chodo usse sab log dekh rhe h.

Samarth= nai, isne meri beti per pani giraya h.

Ashika= samarth wo bol rha h na, galti ho gyi usse, please chodo usse ghar chalo… Samarth namya ko apni god me uthata h or puchta h, beta tumhe kahi lagi to nai….or ashika samarth ko leker hotel ke bahar nikal jati h.

Scene 9

Teeno ghar pahuchte h. or ashika namya ko room me jane k liye kahti h.

Ashika= beta aap room me jao, mamma abhi aati h. namya waha se apne room me chali jati h, or ashika piche mudti h, tabi samarth, ashika ka hath pakad leta h.

Samarth= ashi kya hua tum mujse baat kyun nai ker rhi ho.

Ashika= pahle hath chodo tum mera… Samarth ashika ka hath chodte hue= ab to batao.

Ashika chilate hue= kya baat karu main tumse haan, kya baat karu …..darr lagta h muje tumse baat karne me..

Samarth= lakin iss bar to galti to uss waiter ki thi na… ager namya ko koi chot lag jati to.

Ashika= lagi to nai na, galti se gir gyi thi tray uss-se, lakin tumne to uski ek nai suni or maar-maar ker adhmara ker diya usse.

Samarth= lakin…

Ashika or jor chilate hue= lakin kya Samarth, lakin kya... tang aa gyi hu, main tumhare iss gusse se, nai sahan ker sakti main tumhare iss gusse ko, shaadi ke mandap me agni ke charo or ferre mene tumhare sath liye the, tumhare iss gusse ke sath nai. Tumhare iss gusse ki wajah se kitne hi log tumhare dushman ban bethe h. main jab socity ki ladies se baat karti hu to, tumhare iss gusse ki complain jyada sunti hu. Tumhare iss gusse ne jena haram ker rakha h mera.(or ashika wahi bethker rone lag jati h) Smarth bhi ashika ke perro me beth jata h.

Samarth= muje nai pta tha ki mere gusse se itni problems ho sakti h. lakin main kya karu jab bhi mere sath kuch galat hota h, to main apne aap per kaabu nai rakh pata hu. Ashika baat ko kat-te hue= to kaabu karno sikho, controle karo iss gusse per, kahi aisa na ho jaye ki tumhare iss gusse ke karan muje or namya ko kho betho.

Samarth= chonkte hue….nai main tum dono ko nai khona chahta hu, tum please bs muje iss bar maaf ker do.

Ashika= tum har muje yahi bolte ho, lakin phir bhi tum nai sudhroge…..

Samarth= nai pakka bs last time, bs iss bar muje maaf ker do, bs aakhri bar… Dono uthker namya ke room me pahuchate h, or uske sar ki taraf ja ker beth jate h. Samarth namya ke sar per hath ferte hue, beta main mere gusse ki wajah se tum per koi aanch nai aane dunga, chahe kuch bhi ho jaye.

Scene 10

Kuch din to acche se gujrate h, lakin phir ek din… Samarth apne room me bethker apna kaam ker rha h or tabi ashika ki aawaz aati h.

Ashika= samarth please kitchen me aao na, muje tumhari help ki jarurat h.

Samarth= haan, aata hu.

Samarth apna kaam aise chodker waha se kitchen ki or chala jata h. or room me namya ek paper leker uss per kuch likhna chalu ker deti h. thodi derr baad namya uthker dodti hui kitchen me samarth ke pass jati h. samarth kitchen me khana bna rha h.

Namya= papa, papa….dekho mene kya banaya.

Samarth= haan beta, ruko main thdi der me dekhta hu. Or wo jor se samarth ka hath kichti h. Namya ke jhatke se , samarth neeche gir jata h or samarth gusse me uthker namya ko jor se thappad marta h, iss se namya gire hue oil per gir ker behosh ho jati h. samarth namya ko jaldi se hospital pahuchata h. or uske hath me wo paper aise hi rah jata h. namya ko hospital room me le jate h or bahar ashika or samarth pareshan h, thodi derr baad doctor bahar nikal ker aate h.

Ashika= doctor kya hua, meri beti thik to h na…

Doctor= haan wo thik h, lakin….

Ashika= lakin kya, doctor…

Doctor= lakin uske gaal per jo thappad lagah or wo jis garm oil per gir gyi thi, wo thappad itna jor se tha ki uske karan uski ek aankh(eye) me chot aayi h, abi hum kuch keh nai sakte lkin hame lagta h ki uski aankh ki roshni bhi ja sakti h, or oil ki wajah se uski skin jal chuki h, lakin wo to thik ho jyegi lakin uska nishan jindgi bhar rahega. Itna sunte hi ashika neeche gir jati h or samarth usko sambhalta h.

Doctor= aap ghabraiye mat, abi hum saare test ker rhe h, uske baad hi aapko kuch bta payenge.

Samarth= doctor, kya hum uss se mil sakte h.

Ashika or samarth , namya ke pass pahuchate h. ashika namya ke pass ja ker beth jati h or rone lag jati h. tabi samarth ki nazar namya ke hath me pakade hue paper ki taraf jati h. wo usse leta h or fut-fut ker rona chalu ker deta h. ( uss paper per namya ne samarth or namya ki drawing banai hui hoti h or usme side me likha hua hota h ki "mere papa duniya ke sabse best papa h") tabi namya ko hosh aata h or wo samarth ki or dekhti h or kahti h…..

Namya= papa, ab main aapko kabi kisi kaam ke liye disturb nai karungi, lakin please aap muje kabi marna mat….. Or itna sunte samarth namya ke perro me gir jata h or paglo ki tarah rona chalu ker deta h. itne me doctor waha aate h.

Doctor= Mr. samarth, hume ye batate hue dukh ho rha h ki, test me pta chala h ki, iss bacchi(namya) ki aankh per chot ke lagne ke karan, iske ander ek vain diffuse ho gyi h, iss se ye ek aankh se kabi nai dekh payegi. Itna sunte samarth namya ki uss aankh ko dekhta h or uske aankh or gaal per halka se hath ferta h or rone lag jata h.

THE END





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