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hiya, this is what i have written so far. can you tell me if i should carry on or stop writing altogher. Also can you tell me what i can improve. thanks x
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Other writing by TheMysteriousgirl not quite sure yet Broken Hearted once again The secret girls My heart is bleeding i know the poem you're reading you are you i am me friendship YOU broke!
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