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Betrayed by Beauty

Poem By: LeAnne
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Beauty may be one thing,
but personality is a whole different subject.


like they always say, never judge a book by its cover even if it's the most fascinating of all. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 2, 2008    Reads: 53    Comments: 5    Likes: 3   


Betrayed by Beauty

 

Her hair flows equally with the wind.

Her eyes and skin seems to blend.

Her lips are purely painted.

Her touch is unacquainted.

Her smell is beautiful and sweet and glows.

Her skin is white and smooth like snow.

 

She lures you in with her beauty

and asks you to lover her for all eternity.

Absent mindedly and foolish, you agree.

You know her beauty,

You know she’s stunning,

But you do not know her personality.

 

She bites at you

She wins, you lose.

You drop ten feet,

She raises twenty.

She smiles at your misery

While you regret you life for all eternity.


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Comments:

Hey This is brilliant. I am glad you believe in this concept. Yes life is all about personality and good thoughts and a great soul...beauty fades over time but not the true soul....a soul full of affection, a heart filled with love ,a beautiful mind .....and a lovely smile.....which will light up anyone's day....

This is amazing LeAnne. do keep me informed buddy whenever u post anything new....

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

Author Comment:

will do!!
and yes again, i truly agree with you on that one!

wow! now this is just fabulous!! i loved it!! wow! betrayed by beauty!!! EXCELLENT!!!

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

Author Comment:

shank ya!!
haha, thank you very much!

Magnifico! This is brilliant my friend. ^^

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Ah, thank you!!

reminds me of that show Gossip Girl, which I hate. But love your poem. Or those movies where the guys are all craving after this beautiful girl that turns out to be either shallow, the biggest bitch in the world, or both. A beautiful soul is more stunning than a painted face. Lovely!

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

True as always!!
yes i know, those men just want women for beauty, i hate them!

this is very beautiful i love that you see that true and real beauty comes from within and is not merely what is worn on the outside too many people associate beauty with an outward apprearance when in reality many of the outwardly beautiful people are truly ugly on the inside and what is on the inside always finds its way out so its way better to have a beauty that comes from within :) great job!!

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

My teacher always says that too, exactly what you said!

i know, many people always look on the outside and instead of within. It completely irritates me.

And thank you!!



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