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If I Was God

Poem By: LeAnne
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Tags: if, i, was, god, brother, poem, poetry

My bro's poem, the one that was graduating when i wrote the poem for him.

He wrote this poem and here it is.... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 19, 2008    Reads: 31    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


If I can change the world,
I’ll make it a better place for us to live in,
I’ll get Gods book and unwritten the words that he’s been written,
Make me God and I’ll decide,
Who lives, who dies, who lies, and who wise,
Reverse the process so my grandma can have nine lives,
So that my Boi wouldn’t go suicide and die,
So answer me this
So why the good die,
And now it’s goodbye,
My grandma just pass by,
And she bye,
My Boi just pass by,
He said Impulse fo life,
And 9-11 what was that shit for,
I’ll make George Bush resign just so we wouldn’t had to go to war,
And let me get my ink pen,
Rewrite the Holocaust so that the Jewish people wouldn’t be a victim,
And make Hitler pay himself,
In matter of fact I’ll just send him straight to hell.


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Comments:

hi! leanne. lot of anger is simmering in this poem. the granny'll've nine lives! wow. immortality never won over death. bush is anyways on his last leg in office and hitler doesn't make news. instead of being god, raise the consciousness of fellow men so that the coming generation is aware of the catastrophies of war and genocide. liked the thought. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

this is my brother's poem, he just wanted to see how poeple would react to his piece.

but i will sure tell him that he got a comment.



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