Video games and other violent movies help children let out anger. When a child is able to let out their anger it make them feel a lot better. Violence can be seen in different ways for people who face issues.
| Updated Apr 24, 2014
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I am taking a massive leap in to the world of story writing! A huge step from my usual poetry.
I would really love some feedback on this first piece so that I know what direction to head in! Any comments any advice would be fab...
I have purposely left the name of the character right at the end...
| Updated Mar 7, 2014
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i thought id write a story based on the poem 'from a railway carriage' and linked it to the father off the railway children as he returns from prison. Please read and let me know what you think and what i could add!