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Submitted: Feb 20, 2007    Reads: 105    Comments: 5    Likes: 0   


 

 

According to the Oxford dictionary abortion is the loss and removal of a baby from the womb before it has developed enough to survive. The question is not what abortion is but whether women have the right to choice to terminate an unborn child.

 

The abortion topic is a very controversial and touchy subject in St. Lucia and in other countries. There are many arguments for and against abortion and some of those arguments for both sides are very convincing.  In my personal view I do not support abortion. I will give a few reasons to support my view.

 

Thou shall not kill (Exodus 20:13 and Deutourenmey 5:17) was one of the Ten Commandments given to us by God. Most of us would not dare kill or take anyone's life so what makes an unborn child different? Some may  argue that a fetus  is not a human being because it can not live on it's own  so that  gives  the  mother the right to terminate  the baby but  medical experts have said that an unborn child  could hear it's mother 's voice and some even walk inside the mother's womb. So it begs me a question if a fetus is not a human being then what   is it? I believe the fetus is a human being because it hear and walk and even breathe even though it is not by itself. God even says in Jeremiah 1:5 that before he formed us in the womb he knew us. Pro- choice activists might say that women have a choice. Examples of this are 1: when a woman is life and death situation and there is a choice to choose between the mother and baby that the mother will choose her life and abort her baby. But even though her life is danger she should put her baby's life before hers and try to carry the baby to term.

 

Another reason that pro- choice activists gives is that if the woman is rape or sexual abuse. If a woman is pregnant by her rapists why should she have to continue  to be  tormented and feeling guilty that she was going to bring a child into the world who everyone know is the product rape. And that it will be very insensitive to force a woman to have the baby. What they don't know is that women who have abortions are further traumatize by killing of her baby. The victim will feel guilty about the abortion.

 

Abortion can cause medical problems and might prevent the mother from ever getting pregnant again. In conclusion I believe that abortion is legally and morally wrong and I think governments should not consider legalizing abortion in any case and if any government has they should revise this. For abortion like any killing is murder and any woman commits this should be charge with murder along with the doctors and medical staff who help her commit this crime and if she is under age and is force by her parents then the parents should be charge


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AWESOMELY PUT! I'm glad your not afraid to write all those things! I totally agree with every single think you put! This was a good job! There is nothing wrong with anyones opinion! Thanks for sharing! Shi

Posted: Feb 20, 2007

Author Comment:

thank you very much

I'm really going to go out on a limb here and take some contest to a few points you've written. Let me start by saying I appreciate anyone brave enough to post their views here. You have definately started a clear outline of your beliefs.
However, I must also say that I strongly disagree with a few points you've made. In your last paragraph you state that abortion might cause medical problems and prevent a mother from getting pregnant again. With abortion made illegal, this problem will be solved. However, there is one problem. Abortions will still take place. If a medical facility might cause harm to a mother, can you imagine what a back alley and a rusty hanger can do? There is no reference made to the problems that can develope and situations where the mother and child will die if the pregnancy goes forth? Nothing about "ill termed" pregnancy where the child is in fact dead and thus the mother is forced to carry a dead fetus to term?
This isn't my piece, so I don't want to continue. I do want to say, though I don't agree, it would be nice to see you write a more fully developed piece on this subject. It is obviouse you have passion for it, so let us really know what you think on the entire scope of the subject. Again, though I don't agree, you have brought up some very good points and it would be a shame to let them lie half baked.

Posted: Mar 17, 2007

Author Comment:

thank you very much. actually in fact i have rewritten on paper i just don't have the patience to type it. but i will type an fully developed piece

princess onika auguste:

Exceptionally well written argument in defending the legitimate civil and moral rights of pre-born human beings.

There is so much more to say about this topic, but space constrains us from a fuller and more adequate discussion. This must be the most controversial issue of this modern world. It will become easy for someone so young to become overwhelmed with everything others may have to say. Repeatedly and endlessly. Good job.

God bless you.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Mar 18, 2007

Author Comment:

thank you very much

Hi,

"Some may argue that a fetus is not a human being because it can not live on it's own so that gives the mother the right to terminate the baby but medical experts have said that an unborn child could hear it's mother 's voice and some even walk inside the mother's womb. So it begs me a question if a fetus is not a human being then what is it? I believe the fetus is a human being because it hear and walk and even breathe even though it is not by itself."

True, but what about first-trimester abortions? What about abortions that happen before a baby walks or hears; that is, an abortion when the fetus is just a cell, or even perhaps a clump of cells? I think most people would agree with you that killing a fetus when it can hear, or think, is wrong: even pro-choice advocates would largely agree. The really contentious issue is: are abortions morally acceptable even BEFORE the baby can hear, etc? That's the interesting question, in my view, and your article doesn't much respond to THAT view.

Oh, and quoting the Bible doesn't really do much. You say things like:

"God even says in Jeremiah 1:5 that before he formed us in the womb he knew us."

So what if Jeremiah 1:5 says it? It doesn't make a difference unless Jeremiah 1:5 is correct? What is your justification for this?

Of course, we could get into a relgious debate, but, as you are probably no doubt aware, I can only respond to this article once. So, if you have some sort of reason for thinking that the Bible is right in this particular instance, you should have put it in your article. Because, no matter what you say in reply to this, I will be unable to argue the point. I suspect that you won't have a GOOD reason, but, as a piece of advise, try putting such justifying controversial points WITHIN your article, so that respondents can have a change to respond to them.

I do like how you've taken criticisms of the pro-life position and tried to respond to them, though. It makes good sense to not just put forward your own position, but pick apart objections to it. It's a good tactic, even though I don't think you really hit any arguments on the head.

Ed:

" This must be the most controversial issue of this modern world."

It might be, but I think there are a lot of relatively unimportant issues vying for the title as well. Global warming, perhaps? I think Global hunger should take the top spot; would you agree? As I say, I think you're right that abortion IS the most controversial issue of the modern world, but do you endorse this state of affairs? I'm not making any judgements about you, just curious. The apathy towards global hunger should be utterly heinous to most people, I think. People should be up in arms about THAT far more than the things they tend to be up in arms about. Sorry, I know this is a wee bit off topic, just curious on your thoughts.

Peace out.

Posted: May 31, 2007

Author Comment:

well thank you for your honest opinion it's very much appreciated. and you make good points about how i didn't hit the arguments i saw it too after i read it but i very little patience to rewrite this article. i do believe the bible is correct. yes i think global hunger should be top priority and as a christian it's my duty to feed the hunger and clothe the poor God gave this as a rule in the bible. it should be top priority and i think everyone should try to eraticate hunger. and gobal warming i think we should try to put a stop to the damage it's causing our planet i live in a beautiful island in the caribbean and i see the effects of gobal warming i too want to put a stop to it

uwhen God speaks to one person what he tells the person is also for the rest of mankind. when he says i knew you before you were in the womb should we think that it's only jermiah if it wasn't for the rest of mankind it would not have be in the bible, second look at the reasons why mass murders were commited in his name yes they were committed but it was God who told them. like i will always say no one has the right to take a life except God, GOD IN THOSE DAYS SPOKE DIRECTLY TO THE PEOPLE HE was the one who gave them permission HE HAS THE RIGHT TO DO WHATEVER HE WANTS HE;S GOD WE DON'T
for christmas tree i don't believe the christmas tree thing but i will write an essay about thatshowing the origins of many of the celebrations of christmas.
thank you for opinion it's widely appreciated

Posted: Nov 13, 2007



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