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The Real Reasons for Teenage Crime in the 21st Century

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Submitted: May 7, 2008    Reads: 9849    Comments: 52    Likes: 13   


“The real reason for teenage crime in Australia in the 21st century.”

 

The real reasons for teenage crime in the 21st century are poverty, home issues and acceptance. These factors contribute to teenage crime because they need to steal simply to survive. Teenagers try to forget about the traumas at home by doing other things that could be just as bad, like binge drinking. They want to be accepted by their peers, who could already be a criminal.

 

Many families nowadays are very poor and will get poorer, from the rising of interest rates and many other things. This will cause the poor to become even poorer, with less chance of making their way up the ladder without needing to steal. These teenagers do not even have the basic needs such as food or shelter, and so of course they will result in things like stealing. Otherwise, they simply will not be able to survive. Many students come to school everyday without even having a notebook or pens or paper. Some, who are slightly more fortunate, cannot pay for the many excursions that schools have. Those who do not have those simple everyday things will simply need to steal or carjack. These families truly need things which they do not have. These families often live in poorer parts of the cities, where more robberies and stealing will exist. Micheal Raper from Welfare Rights, CEO, said, “The more money you’ve got, the more you spend on things like health care and child care, the more you get back.” The article, Middle Class gets Welfare as Poor Families Struggle, states that middle class families get lots of money back from different companies and from the government, whereas poorer families do not get any help. Many middle class families are paying no tax at all. This is causing larger issues for those that are poor. However, there is no other option for those poor families. By being in a less prosperous home, you are without doubt going to need to steal, simply to survive each week and so that you can go to school or work.

 

The rate of divorces has also gone up dramatically during the last decade. More and more families are going through these hard times. Many teenagers go to school, worried about their home life and what will happen to them. Those teenagers would be considered lucky compared to others, because some teenagers don’t even have a home to live in. Hundreds of teenagers face numerous challenges at home, such as things like not keeping up to their school and parent’s academic standards which seem small to events like divorce or even becoming an orphan. The teenage crimes suddenly appear to increase because most of these teenagers are trying to forget about the traumas at home, by doing things that could catch their parent’s attention or simply trying to rebel and forget about their home life. This could be doing things like binge drinking or taking drugs like amphetamines. The article, one in 10 teens abuses alcohol, by Melissa Jenkins, informs us of the fact that one tenth of teenagers have abused alcohol in the past week. 67,000 high school students have taken amphetamines in the last year. Drugs such as cannabis are being used with every one in seven high school students. 168,000 12 to 17 year olds drink at levels where boys consume more than seven drinks in a day and girls over five. These numbers are constantly increasing and are shocking to hear about. However, part of the problem is that parents are not teaching their children and teenagers the right thing to do. Some are just simply not caring enough and are too absorbed in their own stress. Many teenagers are trying to deal with problems at home by doing things that are worse.

 

Acceptance is a huge goal for many girls and boys. Everyone hates to be left out or be called bad names, so teens do what they think is right to join in and be accepted. Many try to be cool and so do what many other criminal teenagers are doing, which is things like binge drinking, drink driving and doing drugs. However, these wrongdoings do not help at all, and can make the situation worse. Teenagers can and will become aggressive and might try to join a gang. This will make them have a sense of belonging, which is what many kids and teenagers these days need. Being neglected for too long, they will do absolutely anything to be doing the right thing. Most of the time, it is doing things that are bad and cause crimes and other damage or problems. Many teenagers go to suburban parties where they get drunk. This can lead to many different problems such as drink driving or even teen pregnancy. John Gillebaud, a leading academic on birth control, says, “Every single week a new city of 1.7 million could be created.” He also said, “Each year, there are around 80 million unwanted pregnancies and 30 million of these are aborted.  These events are caused because teenagers do not want to be left out.

 

Teenage crime is caused because of the need of want for something. Teenagers do not want to be poor and not have enough money even for essential school supplies. They want peace and harmony at home and also they need and want to be accepted, wherever that is. Teenage crime is rising at an alarming and things must be done. Parents are stuck right in the middle. They should be helping their child at these times especially, when anything can happen and go wrong. Parents are there to support and advise their children, and should care about them.


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Comments:

Very interesting read. Stumbled upon this while browsing around Booksie. I was a very troubled teen, due to my father's alcoholism and my parent's divorce. We never struggled for money, yet I seemed to want for things. So, I stole these things. This lifestlye is behind me now. I'm 31 and do well for my own children. I am considered in the 'poor' category. Both my children know about the alcohol and drug problems that many people encounter.
Anyway, if you're interested, I'd like for you to check out my profile. I just wrote an essay called Alcoholism: An Essay Of Truth.
MA

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

yep, i sure will!! aw, so sad!! Hope ur going well now!! Thanks for commenting!

very interesting! good essay!

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thankyou very much. Thanks for commenting and reading. I'm sure there are parts to work on, could you suggest some ideas?

hi! ha. this is a very important topic. it's good u brought it up. and ur advice is right - parents should be the guiding light in times of their chidren's needs. good work. ;-)

Posted: May 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thankyou very much! thanks for commenting and reading. Well, this topic was just a topic from school, that we had to write as an essay. Parents really do need to help their children along.

nice work!! I think you chose a great topic, and something should be done. The binge drinking has gone up at alarming rates, but i think it's going down a bit now.

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!! Hmm.. i didn't really choose the topic, we had to write an essay on this topic for school. Yeah, i know, and it's awful hearing about all those people. Anyways, i hope the rate go down a bit. Thanks for reading and commenting!! :D

Wow so long. It took a while to read but what you said was actually true. People always try to be cool or fit in by doing bad stuff. Good essay.

Posted: May 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks very much! No, its not actually very long. At my year level, we are expected to write this amount, well, i did write a bit extra. Ye, i know. Thanks for reading and commenting.

That's written very well. Good work.

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks very much!! thanks for reading and commenting.

a bit lengthy but that can be forgiven...afterall essays are supposed to b long....neways this is a sensitive and important topic!!

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!! ye, some paragraphs got a bit too long. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Very interesting. As a high school student myself, I can believe that these numbers are correct. You gave very good reasons as to why all this is occurring. A great topic to write about.

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks so much. I really appreciate the feedback. Thanks for reading and commenting.

this is an eye opener for so many parents who don't understand the responsibility of raising a happy kid.
giving birth is 'not' enough......
thoughful article.....

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

yes, that is true. Thanks very much. Thanks for reading and commenting.

if i had been your English teacher, I would have given you a very good mark.. but unfortunately i am not..
plesae keep writing. good luck

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks very much!! I'll try to. Thanks for reading and commenting!

This is really well written and your thoughts are really true!! I hope your teacher gave you an A! Good JOb! :)!

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks very much!! Yes, i did get an A. Thanks for reading and commenting!

happyangel:

Most excellent posting! Well written! Liked your choice and treatment of theme.

Gave it an "I Like It" vote. Great job! Keep at it!

Could have included a reference to the content broadcast on TV and in other electronic mass media. A separate posting, perhaps.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Oct 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for the feedback! oh yeah! i guess i forogot about getting references from tv or other media types. However, i'm sure i did get a quote from a newspaper article. Thanks very much for reading and commenting!

Thanks for highlighting the ills chasing the teenagers .

Posted: Oct 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thats ok! thanks for reading and commenting!

i totally agree, great essay!

Posted: Oct 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hey, thanks! thanks for commenting!

Happyangel,

Like everyone else who has commented so far, I do think you have written a nice essay. I don't disagree with anything you have written, but you almost get into so many different subjects that you loose a bit of impact. Teen Crime, Gang Mentality, Teen Pregnancy, and the Effects of Poverty on Crime are all such deep subjects that any one of them could be a book.

The fact that you have taken on such a challenging topic shows that you have somthing to say. Keep up the good work.

Tim

Posted: Oct 22, 2008

Author Comment:

ok, thanks for the feedback. Well, the teen crime, gang mentality, teen pregnancy, and the effects of poverty are some of the reasons of teenage crime in the 21st century. I do hope i did somewhat portray this. Well, this topic was given to me for school, so it wasn't of my choosing. Well, i guess teenage crime is a big issue, so i guess you could write a lot more about each of the subjects.

Thanks for reading and giving me feedback!
happyangel

Hi Happy Angel - we like your article would like to see more about kids being kids and not doing so called adults things -like are kids trying to grow up to fast and only taking on the bad thing to show this -also we would like you to contact us we think this is suitable for our site can you give it a happy ending? and if you could write a very happy story to show that kids that are Happy Life stye in contrast. we would publish the 2 stories -let us know we only have 2 weeks cheers Angels in Action ps -can you also tell us your story -age - living style - future plans - we rate this around 8

Posted: Oct 23, 2008

Author Comment:

hello! thanks very much for reading! I would be honoured to write another story. wow... i never would expect this to get published. Thankyou so much for the opportunity! I'll write an email to you. However, am i elligible for it?

So many eavils out there these days that the younger ones just dont have time to rest and be young anymore, good work.

Posted: Oct 24, 2008

Author Comment:

hey, thanks! ye, i agree with you. Thanks for reading and commenting!

Power to the poor.
I used to stea shit... wait... I still d.
he main problem with parenting is nowadays, the parents just seem to be shovin more and more responsibilities on the school, and the government. If you've ever read Farenhiet 451, you'd know what I mean.

Posted: Jan 4, 2009

Author Comment:

ye,some teachers at school almost have to act like counsellors. thanks for commenting..

Very thought-provoking. Some parents seem to be under the impression that their kids temporarily cease to exist when they leave the house and return to existence when they come home. I remember a friend of mine; her mother seemed like a nice enough lady, but I don't think she had a clue what her daughter was getting up to when she left, and nobody, her daughter included, seemed to think this was a problem. She had her "home" identity, and her "away" identity. Of course everybody does this to some degree, but at seventeen my friend was seriously into booze, and many of her friends were into drugs. She'd managed to quit using pot by then (I think) but she would still go buy a bottle of whiskey from a guy who made extra money selling booze to minors out of his house (and no doubt a few other substances too). So, you take some clueless parents who are running themselves ragged anyway trying to keep everybody from starving, a lot of bored, lonely kids desperate to fit in, give the kids plenty of time alone, throw in some bad influences like the guy mentioned above, and you're going to get a disaster. A lot of disasters, in fact.

Posted: Apr 20, 2009

i'm always interested to read articles like this. conversely enough i come from an extremely happy family background, we are reasonably well off, i have a job and we all get on very well.

but every weekend i go out, binge on alcohol on cocaine, smoke loadsa cigerettes, start as many fights as i can, then invariably find some girl and get laid. once the weekend is over i go back to my job and my loving family. all my friends are exactly the same. it always confuses me that everyone i know is able to keep this balance but i'm always hearing about teenage violence. i do live in the greateast country in the world though (britain) so maybe it's different across the globe....

Posted: Apr 21, 2009

Daljeet kaur
(not registered user)

hi!its really great good explaination and views.

Posted: May 1, 2009

Daljeet kaur
(not registered user)

hi! great views i agree with this article.

Posted: May 1, 2009

wow! so true! u should be a journalist! very informitive! keep writing! and ur free to check out my profile, i have somm great stories that im sure u will enjoy! happy writings!

Alexandra :)

Posted: May 14, 2009

Bunks
(not registered user)

While I agree that the scenarios you have described can be reasons for teenage crime, I think they are also sometimes used as an excuse for it. The world is a big, bad place full of pressures and extremes and our teenage years are when we learn to deal with those pressures - or not. Socio-economic and emotional factors affect everyone differently - what might drive one teenager to crime might drive another towards changing their situation for the better.
Good article - very though provoking.

Posted: May 19, 2009

I agree with Bunks.... well, kind of. Being poor doesn't necessarily lead to crime. My parents grew up in a poor neighborhood, but there was very little crime, because their parents were always there- teaching them, watching them. I made some bad decisions a couple of times, when I was young. I got in with the wrong crowd, tried to be cool, etc. But I made those decisions myself for my own selfish reasons, and I paid the price. Now I teach my kids that the responsibility lies with them. I realize that some kids don't have good role models, but I have met people who started life with far less than me and made something out of themselves despite their early disadvantages. I am interested in how these people do it? Maybe we can learn something from them?

Posted: Jun 3, 2009

Great essay. It truly highlights the plights that many teens are forced to go through every day. If only more people would realize what you have pointed out here. Keep on writing!

Posted: Jun 12, 2009

You're making it sound like all people that struggle with the tangible life are incapable of living, that they are falling apart, that they are broken glass itself. nothing is ever wrong nor is it right. When someone feels like they're doing the best decision to make, it's not always right nor is it wrong in their or others' opinions like you so have stated yourself. but what they do is their decision, their ability to decide in life; it's what makes them feel whole while everything else is falling apart. and while everything at home (if they even have a place to call home) is effing their life up, they can make the decision to be the different, the one that does or does not belong. BLAH!

what i'm trying to say is that "The real reasons" that you say are true are not true. bleh. i'm sorry, but i think i just fell for the analytical writing debate trick of the analytical writing. BLAH. sorry

Posted: Jun 13, 2009

a.z
(not registered user)

hi. gudd eassay, wonderful and very organized
teach me how to

Posted: Oct 24, 2009

it's a good article. there's just a few things i have to say.

one is that how you live should not be an excuse for how you act. many great people have come from terrible situations.

two is that parents need to have more discipline. governments can't understand why crime rates are up, but then they take your kids away if you spank them. there needs to be limits....but some things are becoming ridiculous.

my opinions

Posted: Oct 27, 2009

Kade
(not registered user)

I agree completely with storyofmylife. Pretty much wrote everything I was thinking. Still, very good essay, good points.

Posted: Oct 29, 2009

shukoringa
(not registered user)

That is realy very interesting topics.it helps me alot when i was doing my essay .i strongly agree with you .keep up the good topic.

Posted: Nov 2, 2009

Since when did people not have to pay taxes? That is likely false. Everybody has to pay taxes.

Posted: Nov 5, 2009

Sometimes its the troubled youth that receives the most neglect. In terms of education, I think society have to change the way they treat the young and inexperienced ones. Brainwashing, extortions, bullying...I could go on, and the sad part is, those are just the lighter problems.

my take:

free (decent) education for those who cant afford one.

period.

Posted: Nov 15, 2009

XiuK
(not registered user)

Nice topic , great work ! i can use some of this idea for my essay.=) thank you very much

Posted: Nov 20, 2009

tun
(not registered user)

I have to find some articles for my studying.Yours is very interesting and useful.I think tomorrrow I will have a good presentation on this topic.

Posted: Dec 15, 2009

Ghuraba
(not registered user)

Theres a reason why the young ones are not feeling loved or accepted in the home. The reason is because familys barely exist in todays capitalistic society. Familys do not exist anymore. The very word family has become abstract. The mother can't be a mother because she has to help her husband pay the bills. There is no home structure anymore, and the very word family is no longer treasured. These children who are not feeling loved, who are not getting attention, are trying to find it elsewhere. They try to find it at school hanging up with the wrong crowds, doing the wrong things. A girl might end up selling her body trying to seek love and ending up pregnant, having bastard children. Then these children have no family, no foundation, no nothing, and I feel extremely bad for these children. The world we live in today is extremely backwards.

Posted: Jan 25, 2010

I think you've almost got it right...
I believe it all has to do with parenting.
I din't read all the comments, but when I started to type mine; I noticed and reaad Ghuraba's.
I'm in total agreement with Ghuraba.

I've know very poor people, the one's that had a parent there for them didn't commit crime.

On the other had, I've known middle class kids, that committed crimes, because the needed parental attention. Some of the things they stole...THEY HAD THE MONEY FOR IT IN THEIR POCKETS!!!!

I've gone through a stage where I wondered where our next meal is going to come from, or are we going to freeze to death....and I didn't commit crimes!

I think the first cause for crime is upbringing, then other factors fall in.

You do write well, I just disagree with the order of why crimes are committed.

Posted: Jan 29, 2010

mrs.coop
(not registered user)

you suck u need partice

Posted: Jan 29, 2010

I read this yesterday and liked it. As it's interesting I stumbled you although I may not agree on everything.

Posted: Mar 1, 2010

I do not believe that our system of government or economics is very healthy for human beings. People have been reduced to being numbers in the corporate machine. This creates all kinds of problems for the lower classes in child rearing. Never enough time to do what is right. I gave up my job because my kids needed me. We have learned to live creatively poor without becoming criminal. It is all about your expectations and choices. Humans only need food and shelter to survive everything else is a choice. If you think that you "need" what the corporate consumerists are feeding you, then you don't have your priorities in order. What your essay speaks of is self victimization, copping out for the desire of status.

Posted: Mar 4, 2010

Gary C.F.Yunn
(not registered user)

Wow tat's really great essay! :) most of points are true. i can say all schools have this cases. there's no way to deny it! Wad a great job u done dude : ) god bless

Posted: Mar 9, 2010

It's not necessarily fitting in, it's more like he's doing it so it must be the normal thing to do. Half the people who do drugs know they are wrong. It's a high school culture to do it and get high and what not. The education system is to blame too.. students brag about doing drugs right in middle of class and the teacher takes no action. So what's the point calling your school drug free when the students them self are promoting the use.
The problem is the generation itself, we see TV shows that promote drugs, teen pregnancy and what not. I mean every human has a mind and you make your own choices. Even the best household can have a child who has a drinking problem. It's really about the choices you make, when you are in high school you should be getting smarter about them not dumber.
Teenagers need to be told and given an example of bad results from drug use. I mean for god sakes our generation doesn't know whats the difference between sympathy and joke.
We are watching an educational video about the Rwandan massacre and behind me these two students are making rude comments about how the children are skinny, and look like guys when they are girl. I mean are you even in the right mind? how can you laugh at people dieing?
That reminds me, we should be thought the positives of history not the negative aspects of it. I told this to my classmate and she replies, "everything bad leads to something good. Every event has to have a drastic disaster happen to them to have a good ending", this proves my point right there. My generation thinks that in order for a good event to take place you must do something bad. Sure you'll repeat history if you don't know about it. But, you will also do things that you will see and hear, it's common sense. I don't remember any great positives in history yet everyone remembers the holocaust and mass genocides. If you teach kids this in school then what's the message you are trying to send?
I mean our generation already divides everyone in cliques and labels... isn't that what people did in history?
Parents are not to blame... every human was given a brain and at the age of 16 your are smart enough to make the right choices. Now whether you decide to use your brain or not is up to you, not your parents. Parents are also humans they also have their own problem. telling teenagers that they are acting a certain way because of their parents and home life is telling them or giving them a ridiculous reason to back up for THEIR wrong doings and THEIR wrong choices not the parents.

Posted: Mar 10, 2010

goddamn teenagers glad i'm not one lol

Posted: Mar 23, 2010

Being a teenager is sooo painful, I haven't read very far and I definitely want to read further (I have a thirteen yr old son) If you have time, I 'd really appreciate it if you could glance at a couple of my things, I'm trying to figure out if I was to do this for a living. Thanks & your story rocks!

Posted: Apr 7, 2010

i think that it is mostly the same drivel that is being spouted in school nowadays about 'peer pressure' and the like. teens don't go off drinking and partying to be accepted or to fit in, they do it because they want to. people steal because they don't have money to buy what they want, and they are too unmotivated to get a job or to go through proper channels to gain money from the government. people think they are so smart b/c they can say things like "man teens just want to fit in so they go driving drunk and doing drugs"... i do drugs and i'm a teen and i do drugs because /i like to get high/. i don't do them because my friends do them, i don't even have friends to be honest. it's my choice and my responsibility. beliefs like this foster the image that it's "okay" for teens to be "like that" because it foists responsibility on people other than the individuals themselves

Posted: Apr 13, 2010

Objection, most of the weight is on middle class, because most moderately poor people sit on their butts and wait for the welfare check to come in the mail.
Most middle class work their butts off to sit just above the poverty line, and they don't get a single cent.
It is actually the rich who wheedle out of taxes.
I think your sources are sadly incorrect or biased, I think that America should abolish the welfare system, because my home country Taiwan doesn't have a welfare system, and it is more encouraging for people to find jobs. Overseas it is either earn money or starve, I think that it is cruel but it would force people to work, and it would help our government's deficit shrink.
And please note most kids don't have caring parents, most kids' parents are druggies or are taking shots like no tomorrow.
Yes I am only a freshmen in High School.
I also say that the government should allow prostitution, because then more women would get erm, fixed, and we would have less single parents. I also say that the governments should charge money for licenses, which would also help deficit. Plus prostitution is going on anyways, so eventually everyone will wiser up.
The End.

Posted: Apr 13, 2010

Your topic was very good.. Well written, too. Neglection, Abuse, Peer pressure are quite the main reasons..
But I wish you'd mention that parents at times are helpless. Sometimes kids beat up their parents. sometimes kill them.. I mean parents are not always held responsible.
Aside from that I really like it..

Posted: Apr 30, 2010

An interesting read, I can use this for my story as one recurring themes. Keep up the great work.

Posted: May 1, 2010

its ok...strengthen your vocabulary and cite sources so its credible!!!

Posted: Jun 18, 2010

suru
(not registered user)

ho there i thought u had some great ideas in there and many of them were the root causes of these kinds of problems. However i wish you would have elaborated more on the need for both parents in ones life or at least a lot of supervision from a guardian. I am a student myself and i live in quite a wealthy town/area and i see so many of my peers becoming bored and in need for interaction that they turn to forms of vandilisim/alchohol and various drugs. Especially as i live in a small minning town in WA i believe these issues to be quite confronting on a day to day basis. Anyways keep up the good work! if i was a teacher (hell no!) i would give you a A+

Posted: Jun 23, 2010

kahlen
(not registered user)

good essay.
thx la~

Posted: Jun 26, 2010

sakura
(not registered user)

it s so true....teenagers nowaday are strayed away from to true way of life....

Posted: Aug 10, 2010



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