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The Real Reasons for Teenage Crime in the 21st Century

Essay By: happyangel
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Submitted: May 7, 2008    Reads: 853    Comments: 17    Likes: 7   


“The real reason for teenage crime in Australia in the 21st century.”

 

The real reasons for teenage crime in the 21st century are poverty, home issues and acceptance. These factors contribute to teenage crime because they need to steal simply to survive. Teenagers try to forget about the traumas at home by doing other things that could be just as bad, like binge drinking. They want to be accepted by their peers, who could already be a criminal.

 

Many families nowadays are very poor and will get poorer, from the rising of interest rates and many other things. This will cause the poor to become even poorer, with less chance of making their way up the ladder without needing to steal. These teenagers do not even have the basic needs such as food or shelter, and so of course they will result in things like stealing. Otherwise, they simply will not be able to survive. Many students come to school everyday without even having a notebook or pens or paper. Some, who are slightly more fortunate, cannot pay for the many excursions that schools have. Those who do not have those simple everyday things will simply need to steal or carjack. These families truly need things which they do not have. These families often live in poorer parts of the cities, where more robberies and stealing will exist. Micheal Raper from Welfare Rights, CEO, said, “The more money you’ve got, the more you spend on things like health care and child care, the more you get back.” The article, Middle Class gets Welfare as Poor Families Struggle, states that middle class families get lots of money back from different companies and from the government, whereas poorer families do not get any help. Many middle class families are paying no tax at all. This is causing larger issues for those that are poor. However, there is no other option for those poor families. By being in a less prosperous home, you are without doubt going to need to steal, simply to survive each week and so that you can go to school or work.

 

The rate of divorces has also gone up dramatically during the last decade. More and more families are going through these hard times. Many teenagers go to school, worried about their home life and what will happen to them. Those teenagers would be considered lucky compared to others, because some teenagers don’t even have a home to live in. Hundreds of teenagers face numerous challenges at home, such as things like not keeping up to their school and parent’s academic standards which seem small to events like divorce or even becoming an orphan. The teenage crimes suddenly appear to increase because most of these teenagers are trying to forget about the traumas at home, by doing things that could catch their parent’s attention or simply trying to rebel and forget about their home life. This could be doing things like binge drinking or taking drugs like amphetamines. The article, one in 10 teens abuses alcohol, by Melissa Jenkins, informs us of the fact that one tenth of teenagers have abused alcohol in the past week. 67,000 high school students have taken amphetamines in the last year. Drugs such as cannabis are being used with every one in seven high school students. 168,000 12 to 17 year olds drink at levels where boys consume more than seven drinks in a day and girls over five. These numbers are constantly increasing and are shocking to hear about. However, part of the problem is that parents are not teaching their children and teenagers the right thing to do. Some are just simply not caring enough and are too absorbed in their own stress. Many teenagers are trying to deal with problems at home by doing things that are worse.

 

Acceptance is a huge goal for many girls and boys. Everyone hates to be left out or be called bad names, so teens do what they think is right to join in and be accepted. Many try to be cool and so do what many other criminal teenagers are doing, which is things like binge drinking, drink driving and doing drugs. However, these wrongdoings do not help at all, and can make the situation worse. Teenagers can and will become aggressive and might try to join a gang. This will make them have a sense of belonging, which is what many kids and teenagers these days need. Being neglected for too long, they will do absolutely anything to be doing the right thing. Most of the time, it is doing things that are bad and cause crimes and other damage or problems. Many teenagers go to suburban parties where they get drunk. This can lead to many different problems such as drink driving or even teen pregnancy. John Gillebaud, a leading academic on birth control, says, “Every single week a new city of 1.7 million could be created.” He also said, “Each year, there are around 80 million unwanted pregnancies and 30 million of these are aborted.  These events are caused because teenagers do not want to be left out.

 

Teenage crime is caused because of the need of want for something. Teenagers do not want to be poor and not have enough money even for essential school supplies. They want peace and harmony at home and also they need and want to be accepted, wherever that is. Teenage crime is rising at an alarming and things must be done. Parents are stuck right in the middle. They should be helping their child at these times especially, when anything can happen and go wrong. Parents are there to support and advise their children, and should care about them.


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Comments:

Very interesting read. Stumbled upon this while browsing around Booksie. I was a very troubled teen, due to my father's alcoholism and my parent's divorce. We never struggled for money, yet I seemed to want for things. So, I stole these things. This lifestlye is behind me now. I'm 31 and do well for my own children. I am considered in the 'poor' category. Both my children know about the alcohol and drug problems that many people encounter.
Anyway, if you're interested, I'd like for you to check out my profile. I just wrote an essay called Alcoholism: An Essay Of Truth.
MA

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

yep, i sure will!! aw, so sad!! Hope ur going well now!! Thanks for commenting!

very interesting! good essay!

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thankyou very much. Thanks for commenting and reading. I'm sure there are parts to work on, could you suggest some ideas?

hi! ha. this is a very important topic. it's good u brought it up. and ur advice is right - parents should be the guiding light in times of their chidren's needs. good work. ;-)

Posted: May 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thankyou very much! thanks for commenting and reading. Well, this topic was just a topic from school, that we had to write as an essay. Parents really do need to help their children along.

nice work!! I think you chose a great topic, and something should be done. The binge drinking has gone up at alarming rates, but i think it's going down a bit now.

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!! Hmm.. i didn't really choose the topic, we had to write an essay on this topic for school. Yeah, i know, and it's awful hearing about all those people. Anyways, i hope the rate go down a bit. Thanks for reading and commenting!! :D

Wow so long. It took a while to read but what you said was actually true. People always try to be cool or fit in by doing bad stuff. Good essay.

Posted: May 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks very much! No, its not actually very long. At my year level, we are expected to write this amount, well, i did write a bit extra. Ye, i know. Thanks for reading and commenting.

That's written very well. Good work.

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks very much!! thanks for reading and commenting.

a bit lengthy but that can be forgiven...afterall essays are supposed to b long....neways this is a sensitive and important topic!!

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!! ye, some paragraphs got a bit too long. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Very interesting. As a high school student myself, I can believe that these numbers are correct. You gave very good reasons as to why all this is occurring. A great topic to write about.

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks so much. I really appreciate the feedback. Thanks for reading and commenting.

this is an eye opener for so many parents who don't understand the responsibility of raising a happy kid.
giving birth is 'not' enough......
thoughful article.....

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

yes, that is true. Thanks very much. Thanks for reading and commenting.

if i had been your English teacher, I would have given you a very good mark.. but unfortunately i am not..
plesae keep writing. good luck

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks very much!! I'll try to. Thanks for reading and commenting!

This is really well written and your thoughts are really true!! I hope your teacher gave you an A! Good JOb! :)!

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks very much!! Yes, i did get an A. Thanks for reading and commenting!

happyangel:

Most excellent posting! Well written! Liked your choice and treatment of theme.

Gave it an "I Like It" vote. Great job! Keep at it!

Could have included a reference to the content broadcast on TV and in other electronic mass media. A separate posting, perhaps.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Oct 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for the feedback! oh yeah! i guess i forogot about getting references from tv or other media types. However, i'm sure i did get a quote from a newspaper article. Thanks very much for reading and commenting!

Thanks for highlighting the ills chasing the teenagers .

Posted: Oct 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thats ok! thanks for reading and commenting!

i totally agree, great essay!

Posted: Oct 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hey, thanks! thanks for commenting!

Happyangel,

Like everyone else who has commented so far, I do think you have written a nice essay. I don't disagree with anything you have written, but you almost get into so many different subjects that you loose a bit of impact. Teen Crime, Gang Mentality, Teen Pregnancy, and the Effects of Poverty on Crime are all such deep subjects that any one of them could be a book.

The fact that you have taken on such a challenging topic shows that you have somthing to say. Keep up the good work.

Tim

Posted: Oct 22, 2008

Author Comment:

ok, thanks for the feedback. Well, the teen crime, gang mentality, teen pregnancy, and the effects of poverty are some of the reasons of teenage crime in the 21st century. I do hope i did somewhat portray this. Well, this topic was given to me for school, so it wasn't of my choosing. Well, i guess teenage crime is a big issue, so i guess you could write a lot more about each of the subjects.

Thanks for reading and giving me feedback!
happyangel

Hi Happy Angel - we like your article would like to see more about kids being kids and not doing so called adults things -like are kids trying to grow up to fast and only taking on the bad thing to show this -also we would like you to contact us we think this is suitable for our site can you give it a happy ending? and if you could write a very happy story to show that kids that are Happy Life stye in contrast. we would publish the 2 stories -let us know we only have 2 weeks cheers Angels in Action ps -can you also tell us your story -age - living style - future plans - we rate this around 8

Posted: Oct 23, 2008

Author Comment:

hello! thanks very much for reading! I would be honoured to write another story. wow... i never would expect this to get published. Thankyou so much for the opportunity! I'll write an email to you. However, am i elligible for it?

So many eavils out there these days that the younger ones just dont have time to rest and be young anymore, good work.

Posted: Oct 24, 2008

Author Comment:

hey, thanks! ye, i agree with you. Thanks for reading and commenting!



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