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Submitted: Aug 4, 2008 Reads: 40 Comments: 2 Likes: 1
how do i feel what i feel how do i know what i know what makes me do what i do. it drives me crazy oh so crazy i wish i was dead i wish i was alive all of these feelings hit me at once what do i do what do i want please go please just take me from life take me to heaven where things are so simple love god love jesus and don't feel any pain. why cant we just see him.
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You could make a poem out of this:
how do i feel
what i feel?
how do i know
what i know?
what makes me
do what i do?
and so on. Or if you want to distinguish between lines try something like this:
how do i feel
what i feel?
how do i know
what i know?
what makes me
do what i do?
would work well, the essence is there, you just need to capatalise on it and make people read.
Posted: Aug 15, 2008
YAH! Booksie was meant to throw the lines around the second time, left to right but didn't work!!
Posted: Aug 15, 2008
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