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Submitted: Sep 29, 2006    Reads: 130    Comments: 7    Likes: 1   


Oh close your eyes for convenience' sake
so your stomach stays so calm.
Turn your ears from converstion
just you are not alarmed.
But so you know,
just so you're aware,
Everyone's love glows
whether or not you care.
Behind your back there will always be
hearts filled for a love
with which you might disagree.
a black man, a white woman,
two guys or two girls,
are loving and caring and go on
while you're daring
to stop your heart
with hate for a thing
you dont understand.

                                     [ is it even possible for a love to be impure? ]


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Comments:

Hi,
Great poem! It really made me think.
I agree with you wholeheartedly about the love of same sex partners and biracial partners. It isn't immoral because of the gender and racial identifiers.
Can a love be impure? Good Question.
A love of hatred, perhaps, or a love of making others live in fear, or of bullying, or of being in power, or of taking life but ....a love of another person?
I think, unfortunately, yes. The idea of unconditional love, where there are no expectations for the other person to fulfill some need of our own is always pure, a perfect love. But perfect love is an ideal and is seldom attained by imperfect human beings. An example of an obviously impure love might be a pedophile's love of children when it is acted on, and victimizes the loved child.

Posted: Sep 29, 2006

Author Comment:

Oh my, well you are right about that last part... Of course this has NOTHING to do with pedophiles.... and I think that anyone would agree, that sort of "love" isnt a REAL love. I am, of course talking only about consentual adult relationships, as no other sort even entered my mind while I was writing this piece. Very good to hear from another open-minded person!! Thanks for the comment and compliment!

you put it out there, said it well - profound, be nice if everyone in the world felt that "all" adult love was pure and good.

Posted: Oct 24, 2006

Author Comment:

Wouldn't it though?? Probably the only thing that I hate in this world is closed-mindedness. It is, if you think about it, the root for all conflicts and wars and.......... shitty laws that won't allow for some people to have all the things that really, they have the right to.

~Gabrielle
Wow, very nice. I really like this piece. ^_^ Very nice
~MurderousSweetTart

Posted: Jan 10, 2007

Author Comment:

thank you!

Nice work, I think you spoke for a lot people here! ~ Nixie

Posted: Sep 18, 2007

This one should be posted everywhere. Love comes in all shapes and forms and fashions. Is it not just as wrong for a woman to lust for a man or a man to lust after a woman? I feel this way about it. We should all have the freedom to love who loves us.Man or woman.We are the one's that have to live with the outcome of any relationship.The laws are wrong. Especially when you look in some cases .The same sex be together 10,15,20 years. Everything bought together in both names.Then if one dies the other has to fight to have any rights. You have made many valid points in this post.
girlish

Posted: Oct 14, 2007

loved loved loved this poem. people need to understnad that finding true love is close to impossible today(between two consenting adults)and if it is the same sex or someone of another race then so be it. People should focus on cures for Cancer or Aids or Poverty.

Posted: Dec 26, 2007

GAY PEOPLE ARE GANSTER!
and nobody better say otherwise....
they are so fricken awesome....
Love is pure in all possible ways. Its the one thing that brings us together.
LOVED YOUR POEM.
P.S LOVE GAY PEOPLE!

Posted: Nov 24, 2008



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