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This is for Kritika's challenge! It's my opinion so PLEASE do not take ANY offense to it! View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 17, 2008 Reads: 50 Comments: 5 Likes: 1
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Nothing absoultly nothing much but to PRAY HARD.
NICE POEM REALLY
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
i lyk it, its well written, wow :D
Posted: Jul 27, 2008
I absolutely adore this one...so many senstive issues brought up sensibly...did u tell krithika regd this? i am sure this one would make her so happy...a challenge very well done...lovely approach...
Posted: Jul 30, 2008
Well, this is very neat. Nicely done!
:)
Posted: Aug 11, 2008
Very nice, we cant do much but to pray =/
but i do favor this poem very much.
Posted: Aug 26, 2008
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