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My Life is Perfectly Disastrous: Kritika's Challenge

Poem By: jfm98
Editorial and Opinion


This is for Kritika's challenge! It's my opinion so PLEASE do not take ANY offense to it! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 17, 2008    Reads: 50    Comments: 5    Likes: 1   


My life is perfectly disastrous
Yellow is too bright
 
Lemons are too sour
Innuendo is old news
Flowers are dying
Emus are eaten
 
Igloos are melting
Sugar is not real
 
People die everyday
Emos are “in”
Roads are paved where trees once stood
Farms are built as the rainforests deteriorate
Elephants are poached just because of their tusks
Christ is needed more than ever
Telemarketers call too much
Love is hard to find
Younger and younger teenagers are getting pregnant
 
Dumb is the new smart
Immature children grow up to be immature adults
Schools have mostly women applying to them
Alimony is rising as marriages die
Sickness is growing throughout the world
The world is dieing because of Global Warming
Risk, the game, is now played in today’s world
Obesity in the United States is growing
Urchins are hunted and even eaten
So what can we do to stop this?


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Comments:

Nothing absoultly nothing much but to PRAY HARD.
NICE POEM REALLY

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!!!

i lyk it, its well written, wow :D

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! Try my script! It's not done...but it will be soon! Thanks!

I absolutely adore this one...so many senstive issues brought up sensibly...did u tell krithika regd this? i am sure this one would make her so happy...a challenge very well done...lovely approach...

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

I will have to tell her! I thought I did...But I guess not!

Well, this is very neat. Nicely done!

:)

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! Can u read any of my novels? Thanks!

Very nice, we cant do much but to pray =/
but i do favor this poem very much.

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanksd! I'm glad u liked it!



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