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I'd like to go to a place where it alway's stay quiet.
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Submitted: Sep 3, 2008    Reads: 45    Comments: 2    Likes: 3   


I'd like to go to a place where no one has ever known.

In a state of mine where I could always call my own.

Where I can go anytime I choose and theres no such thing as time.

Where I can feel no pain.

And to hear the rain on my window pane.

Just calm and say what a beautiful place for me to find.

But you keep watching my every move.

And keep on track with everything I say.

Why won't you let me be.

But I asked myself, Why am I even here.

I wonder,you leave me wondering and thinking.

Why I don't know.

Now I keep having those tears in my eyes.

Have my arms around my knees.

But I didn't need to feel this way.

When I walked into that door.

Everyday is crying,screaming,slamming and lying.

But for now,I can't even remember

Who I am or who I was before.


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Comments:

I really liked your poem.
I too would love to find that quiet place.
One day,in a twinkle of an eye,we will.
God Bless you in your writing, Shattered.
Your Friend,
Angellynn.

Posted: Oct 3, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you so very much.for enjoyed reading it

Wow that was a powerful piece. In a way, I can definitely relate. You pretty much just described one of my most difficult relationships.

You really expressed yourself beautifully. :)
-Liv

Posted: Oct 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks.



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