The thing that brought all those gifts in this beautiful place;

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Submitted: May 8, 2008 Reads: 243 Comments: 13 Likes: 8
The thing that brought all those gifts in this beautiful place;
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Aw this is beautiful - which I know sounds very cheesy, but it is! I got two things from this, the love of peers, or the love of a lover. Ok three - the love of God. It's a very moving read, you always do such a good job! ~ Nixie
Posted: May 8, 2008
Your poem is very nice wikhaiinn,
Love the best treasure of all :D
~katie
Posted: May 8, 2008
it is good i like it:] (i'm sort of short on words today sorry:[)
Posted: May 8, 2008
This is a very beautiful poem. It is like the man who found a precious treasure and sold all he had to buy the field that it was buried in. Keep inspiring.
Posted: May 8, 2008
I love this poem.
Posted: May 8, 2008
awe, very heartfelt and true. Is it bad that I always want to call you Wiki?
Posted: May 9, 2008
love it! i'm glad you wrote about something like this...great job!
Posted: May 9, 2008
dear Wiki,
such a sweet poem sweet heart...
honest and innocent
Posted: May 9, 2008
Wonderful!!! It's so sweet and lovely. What makes it all the better is thats how I'm feeling about my BF of three years next month. XD
Posted: May 9, 2008
lovely :)
Posted: May 10, 2008
Very nice! i loved it! Great job!
Posted: May 10, 2008
I enjoyed this poem, For love is the greatest gift you can give and receive. God is Love.
Posted: May 10, 2008
its great, well done a beautiful poem...keep it up girl.. c",)
Posted: May 18, 2008
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