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Gabriel and Sora Chronicles Story One

Short story By: FeathereMoon
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Um i just didnt know what i was writing literally. I was just sitting in my room and i forgot about the homework i was doing and i wrote this instead. . .my teacher didnt like that one bit. I cant say i dont like this peice but i like the second one better.


Submitted:Jun 15, 2010    Reads: 47    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        

  Gabriel looked at Sora,                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  with her long black hair and eyes...oh the eyes,they hypnotised anyone who dared look into them. As Gabriel looked at sora, Sora watched him thoughtfully."What are you stairing at Gabriel." Sora said in words dipped in melancholy, Sora hated words for they were so easily twisted or manipulated.
"Your eyes tend to hypnotise people, making looking away, near impossible."Gabriel anwsered
"Huh, what do you mean." Sora noted
"Your considered cool and untouchable. Your always staring into space which gives you a cool aura but thats not how you are all the time, thats just how most people percieve you. The people who have seen the other you often become your closest friends becouse they've seen the nice and caring side of you." Gabriel anwsered swiftly
"But im always worried"She said.
"About . . . what"He said thoughtfully.
"About not having a reality to return to."Sora murmured.
"Why would you worry about that Sora."He said shakily.
"Everyone dreams and has a dream, but dreams are meant to be untouchable, so if your dream came true there would be no reason for reality because that dream never would have been a dream, but nothing more than a mere goal" Sora commented

"But what are dreams if not goals." Gabriel anwsered softly looking at the sky with rain just starting to fall.





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