Aug 11, 2010
So I'm having some major issues with writing...I'm getting nowhere with "Cold Day in July" and I hate everything I've written in "The Girl who Cried Barbie" and I've lost my notebook with the Tobakume story in it. Soooo....I'm not really sure when I'll get around to writing more. I'm also getting very busy with two jobs, marching band, and cross country starting, and then school in two weeks. Sorry guys. :(

Aug 7, 2010
Well, I'm home from vacation and typing "The Girl Who Cried 'Barbie'" as fast as I can! Sorry about the wait!

Jul 20, 2010
Hey there!! So I just found an old notebook that I wrote a story in. I'm posting the prologue right now but I have to go to cross country practice soon so I'll have to wait to post any more. The good news is the story is finished, I just have to type it and edit anything I don't like, so you won't be waiting long for updates :)

May 12, 2010
I finally got that paragraph fixed! Thanks for everyone's advice. Although I didn't use anyone's full paragraph, I got ideas from each of them and put together my own. I'm hoping to post the next part of the story later tonight. I'm slowly coming out of my funk. Wish me luck! :) thanks guys :)

Apr 11, 2010
Hey guys, thanks for all your help with that paragraph in Cold Day in July. I am currently working in the new ideas. I just posted a new story...This one is mostly done; how fast I post depends on how fast I type. This one is pretty different from my others...I hope you like it!

Apr 2, 2010
Hey! I need some help, guys....I was working on Cold Day in July when I decided to re-read some of it. I came across this paragraph, and I think it is terrible. It's confusing and doesn't really work. If you could read it and maybe rewrite it as a comment on the story, I would really appreciate it! I'll read them and when I find one I like, I will re-post that chapter with the new paragraph. Thanks! You guys rock :) "My parents had been married here. Since I was a product of my mom’s first marriage with Luke, I was able to remember being at the wedding. I could also remember all the picnics we had taken there as a family. Those trips stopped when my dad died, though, and even after my mom remarried we didn’t go very much. It was too painful for my mom. My stepdad, Doug, now divorced from my mother and living three states south of us, never liked the meadow because he knew about everything that had happened there. But he agreed to be married there because he knew how much it meant to my mom. Greg had even taken me here once or twice."

Mar 29, 2010
The next part for Cold Day in July is up. I also have some new poems. Thanks for reading :)

Mar 22, 2010
Sorry I didn't post! I made last minute plans. I'm going on a trip for a few days and won't have a computer. I'll be back Saturday (3-27) so I'll try to post then.

Mar 21, 2010
Alright, Kid-Napped Sequel is up. Thanks for reading it :) I'm still working on Cold Day in July...I mentioned before that I started writing it last year or so, but I lost it when my thumbdrive crashed. So, I started to re-write it this year, but I've gotten to the point where I am past what I wrote before (I remembered it for the most part, but now I don't remember where I was going with it!). So I am still writing, but it's taking me longer to figure out what I want it to say. Thanks for reading and your patience :)

Mar 20, 2010
Hey guys. I'm working on a sequel for Kid-Napped right now, and I'm finishing up the next section of Cold Day in July. I hope I will get them posted by Sunday. Thanks for reading!

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