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A young woman goes on a blind date and winds up becoming a sex slave to a man she has never met. Now she has to figure out a way to escape and not die. View table of contents...
Submitted: Oct 10, 2008 Reads: 471 Comments: 17 Likes: 5
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Posted: Oct 10, 2008
O.M.G.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He proposed to her i luv him i luv him i luv him!!!! he's so sweet but where's my badboy that i know and luvv??? lol greatt chapter update soon!!
p.s. i think he should have killed natalia the psycho bitch!!
Posted: Oct 10, 2008
Sorry guys! I went back in to add 2 lines and all of my spaces are gone! Sorry! Thanks for reading though!
Posted: Oct 10, 2008
I STILL HATE YOU HOW ON EARTH COULD YOU LEAVE ME HERE
LETS FLASH BACK TO THE BITCH FORMALY KNOW AS NATALIA GO TO WHERE EVER THE HELL SHE IDS(HOPEFULLY IN HELL) AND LET HER NEW MASTER BEAT THE BITCH HALF TO DEATH
BACK TO THIS PART
JUST ONE THNG
IS SHE GONNA SAY YES?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Posted: Oct 10, 2008
Awe, he is turning out to be a sweetie, but I can already tell he is going to abuse her... the sudden mood changes are a warning.
Posted: Oct 11, 2008
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww~~~~~
What is she going to say?
YES or NO??????
Update ASAP please :D
Posted: Oct 11, 2008
☻☺ Please update soon!!!!☺☻
Posted: Oct 11, 2008
Omd dah was brilliant update now ...
Posted: Oct 11, 2008
o_O Perrry, omg. Wow. You know,this chapter had so much emotion wrapped in one,and your a amazing writer. :)
-DD
Posted: Oct 11, 2008
man i bet he still gonna abuse her i bet i dnt think i like him u know but i sure do love ur story lol post soon
Posted: Oct 11, 2008
Wow this story intrigues me on so many different levels I have read it all so far in one sitting. I am captivated and will be back to read the rest as you post. I can't wait either to read more.
Posted: Oct 11, 2008
YAY!!! *jumps around like a little hyper child*
Posted: Oct 11, 2008
hmm.. im not sure i like him yet...
but i love your writing =]
Posted: Oct 12, 2008
awww this is a good story, he's so sweet :] ♥
Posted: Oct 13, 2008
now here's a chapter that's pretty fucked up! *giggling* great writing, Perry.
Posted: Oct 13, 2008
OMG!!!!!! You're Right! Damn it! What's happened to me? You must think I'm a monster!
btw...you are certainly allowed bragging privileges ... i've only been on the featured writing once and it was for about 3 minutes.
ha!
*peach runs away sobbing wondering what's happened to her over the years***
Posted: Oct 13, 2008
Aaawwwww..... :)
Posted: Oct 30, 2008
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