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Are You Ready? PT. 1

Poem By: Brown Skin
Erotica


Tags: erotic, sex, fantasy

A fantasy of mine! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 7, 2008    Reads: 912    Comments: 10    Likes: 5   


Imagination running wild
I wonder what you plan to do to me
Me in this blind fold, handcuffed to the bed posts
I feel you kissing my neck softly

You began to run your fingers on my body as if you were reading brail
Your hair tickling my cheek
I tighten my six pack when I feel your light finger nails

Tank's "My Body" is playing in the background
I smell the aroma of vanilla candles burning tenderly as they seduce my senses
The smell of your Love Spell body spray fills my nostrils
You whisper, "I hope you're ready for this."

You run your tongue across my chest
Then down to my mid section
You move your hands lower
You moan when you feel my erection

My body against your body
My lips against yours
Your breathing becomes heavier
Love seeps from your pors

I feel the coolness of whipped cream hug my stomach.......

Now ask yourself......are you ready for what's next?


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Comments:

All I can say is WOW! I con't wait for more!

Posted: Jan 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol Thank you! I have a part 2 and I'm working on a part 3! I'll let you know when I post part 3! Thanks again!

mmmmmmmmmm. wow i'm ready!
snowbelle

Posted: Jan 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol I'm glad you enjoyed this! Part 3 is on the way!

wow, that really makes me miss my Super Guy! it was really good! Great piece!

Posted: Jan 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!! Glad you liked it! I'm currently in the process of writing a part 3, so be watching for that! Thanks again!

I am ready! I am ready!!! Lol


Great poem and very seductive

Posted: Jan 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol Thank you...I'm glad you liked it! There is a part 2 written if you haven't read it and part 3 is in the works! Thanks again!

What kind of pathetic, juvenile rubbush is this?

Posted: Jan 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Sorry you didn't like the poem...not all of my writings are for everyone...if you didn't enjoy this one, maybe you'll like some of my other writings...if not...then I guess my style isn't for you. but I do appreciate the honesty! have a great day!

i agree. i think this poem was very seductive. not everyone can pull off this kind of writing.

Posted: Jan 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for your comment! I appreciate it very much!

I gotta say...

In the first few lines I was ready not to like this. But it carried me, in its brevity, in the direction you wanted.

Hat's off.

Posted: Jan 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol Thank you very much!

I'M READY! lol just kidding just kidding.

well, this was uhm... interesting....


i don't think i could ever write something like that with out .... cracking up or getting the heebadabajeebes. lol.

but very good job.

Posted: Jan 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol I love your word heebadabajeebes!! I love it!! Thanks for you hilarious comment!! It made me smile! I'm working on part 3, but I'm kind of stuck so it'll probably be a while until I finish it!! But thank you for commenting!

Wow, I really liked it. It's true that not very many people can pull this kind of thing off, but you did it really well.
BRAVO!!!
XxxxxBrokenxxxxX

Posted: Jan 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much! I am currently working on part 3 to try to wrap this thing up! I'm having a little trouble, but I'll be sure to let you know when its posted!

umm err i dunno it was kinda wqeird

Posted: Jul 24, 2008



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