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Poem By: Classy Peach
Erotica

Tags: poem, poetry, seduce, love, sex, erotica

Fetching in form of enticing. Adult subject material. View table of contents...

Submitted: Apr 18, 2008 Reads: 165 Comments: 17 Likes: 8

Shiver me timbers
Deep love fashioned outside normal fashion
Fetching fuck me whispers

Thick black lashes make you stir
A tingling southern sensation
Shiver me timbers

Unzipping the cosmic zippers
Safe in the ship of a heaven
Fetching fuck me whispers

Bad kitty good pussy glitters
Mistress with orate manipulation
Shiver me timbers

Sweet scent on sweat that glimmers
Naked nude deep exhalation
Fetching fuck me whispers

Make love to me dominating blurs
Make love to me cat-o-nines stimulation
Shiver me timbers
Fetching fuck me whispers

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Comments:

wow..ive read this a few times now, bit different to what i write but hey i like it. i like the repetition in your poetry, it emphasises a cental theme. love the ship, piratety images, especially the cat-o-nines!! and fuck me acts like a personification in that it seems to whisper "fetching"...sometimes i wonder what to think of you peachy..tho can imagine u like to keep us guessing...u r a cosmic girl tho!!with pink hair!!

Posted: Apr 18, 2008

Author Comment:

what's there to think 'bout?
just a girl who loves to write erotica.

i love saying shiver me timbers (like this: shiva me timahs) and i rather enjoy this poem of mine, brutality of pirates yet everyone loves 'em.
thanks Matt very much.

Jbortti

Great ! Sexy ! And sometimes i think you are far ahead from us , because you write in a such poetic way.

Posted: Apr 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh don't be silly....we all learn from each other and that helps us grow.
I'll take Sexy.
Thanks j!!

Alquimista

This poem has all the necessary provisions for a flight of fancy- Deep love, whispers, cosmic zippers, orate manipulation, sweat scents, stimulation, and glittering kittens. Yarg!

Posted: Apr 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Isn't it crazy when that happens? Kinda shivers ya timbas!!

ps - your compliments to my writing are so encouraging and thank you very much for that.

Anna Therese

Wow! In my mid fifties takes a bit these days to get the "shiver me timber" feeling right down to the bottom of my boots but this poem did well!! A libido liftener! Nicely written.

Posted: Apr 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh you crazy cat..but what's a liftener AT?
meeheehee

Lacey Cummings

You just always put a smile on my face! Where did the idea come from? Very original and enticing. It brings all kinds of ideas to mind. I've got to go now. I need to write! Love it Peach!

Posted: Apr 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh I have so many damn ideas, just never the means of time to produce them! (kicking the air mad-like)

Thanks so much Lacey!!!

air

LOL!!! oh My! LOL! you know, IT'S GREAT!!!! love all the comments too LOL! 'shiver me timbers'
yes I have to say as for erotica this had such a fun flare and flow. very catchy too!

Posted: Apr 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Awwww.
thank you so much for reading some erotica!!

Nixie

Haha! How awesome was that! I love it, it made me giggle "Shiver me timbers" LOL, you crack me up. I'm going to read this again, and it probably won't be for the last time. :) ~ Nixie

Posted: Apr 21, 2008

Author Comment:

You're too kind sister!

I owe myself some Nixie time and shall swoop down on your page tonite....thank you so much for reading!!

Punishment

Shiver me timbers?

Hahahahahaha!
Good one peach! ^^

Posted: Apr 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Me likey too.
Thanks so much for your warm compliment on my profile...

Madame Dupree

My timbers have been in need of some shivering - but I guess I can hold out a little while longer after reading this! You're so sassy but still classy!

Posted: Apr 24, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks so much for all your reading on my behalf...

ZED

tHE LASH OF yUOR WRITING lEaVES Me WitH sCARS OF pLeASUrE...OHHH...AHHH...HiT mE wiTH YouR pOETRY!

Posted: Apr 27, 2008

Author Comment:

laughing...

Eric JHRB Egan

You sexy babe!! This is hot shit!! I really liked you repition of 'Fetching fuck me whispers' , it is both cool and confident. 53 thumbs up. Rubbing my cock now lol.

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

Author Comment:

'atta boy.

viper

Very Erotic. I Liked It. Almost Pornographic LOL.

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Oooh the fine line of erotica/pornography....someone's gotta test it.

Thanks so much Viper!

devilrod

The piratess of the heavens.
'Mistress with orate manipulation' - you have many great lines like that in your works.
What wonderful style you have.

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you.

raindown

So you know what I did? I listened to Orinoco Flow while I was reading this~just for fun;)

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

it's kinda cool how the music peaks and falls, like a sub/dom maneuver.

Sweet.

raindown

I see such foreign places and faces upon the many facets of your poetry~hers was a saucy pirate wench with a quick silver tongue and a sexy appeal that brings us/me to attention, with wispers that beg for domination...brilliant character Peach~you know I loved it;)
~rain

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Right on little sister.
Rather enticing to mix soft melodic music with this life style.

Love it.

Anastasia Starlena
(not registered user)

This is a very intriguing piece. I bow down to you. I was told you were the Queen of Erotica, I believe it..

Posted: Oct 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Gosh no, I am certainly NOT Queen of Erotica. I am a soul sister to erotica, however. Or maybe a diva alongside the other erotica divas. ha!

Thanks so much again!