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Peach Erotica

Poem By: Classy Peach
Erotica


Yay! Some Peach Erotica! Adult Subject Material! Yay! And lookit me, I’ve added music because that’s what all the kids are doing these days! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 1, 2008    Reads: 377    Comments: 42    Likes: 23   


Looking absolutely wicked with his big, strong and undeniably clever
hands waiting for her silky fresh skin. She quests him with sultry never
innocent thoughts and curbs her emotional naïveté. Still naked and feeling
the battering of hearts racing between their bare chests, her mouth ever

 

waters to taste his lips again. Please touch me. Panting, she tries
to hold still but her hips crave touching his hot damp skin as she sighs
softly and bliss embodies with touch. In her peripheral vision she
watches her weight of being trickle happily away, furtive she flies.

 

Crawling his strong arms underneath and around securing her feminine
shoulders he commands his breath into her ear, “Stay”. The sanction in
his voice coils a shrill tingle down her spine and lands in a sopping shrine
between her soft inner thighs. Raising her leg he wafts in her heaven

 

and gingerly kisses behind her stretched knee, he warms his arched knuckle
against the pink button hidden in wet folds and looks down at his damsel
she’s a volley of sensation snuggled beneath him. Thieving her nipple with
his mouth he gently suckles with no lack of attention to either ruby jewel.

 

Pink blushes to dark red as her nipples pronounce their excitement. Streaming
a small array of spanks, his merciless hand paddles her buttock cheek smacking
as she cuddles the sizzling heat of her face into his savory neck in euphoric state.
Each grinding blow bristling onto her pink ass leaves a slush of honey sapping

 

to pool and dry on their skin. Plump veins in his stiff cock amplifies the treasure
dive as he mounts her and glides home. Watching her juice coat the measure
of his thick erection as he slowly works his way in and out of her, her inner thigh
stretched aloft his body and her toes resting high on the wall curl with her pleasure.

 

The sight of her tight pussy wrapping and unwrapping around his brawny erection
stimulate with a sensual crack on ass. Clenching her inner muscles with perfection
while losing focus in her eyes she tries to regulate her breathing along with the biting
from his hand onto her now crimson behind. Surging the beckon of dark adoration

 

in floating in explicit pain and intense pleasure, her hips buck with each blow.
Beginning a privileged and powerful orgasm in her entire body building slow,
he keeps spawning extreme polar opposite sensations in her supple soul through
pressing deeper inside her, crashing his mouth down onto hers denying a swallow.

 

Knowing that he MOVED CLOSER for her sake, she starts to shake with necessitate.
Like a kitty mewling for her milk, cradling that privilege anticipated emotion vibrates
and her body begins to give in to the molten desire. He stepped through her heart and
she through his arms and his cock throbs with the sight of his sweet vixen bedmate.

 

Impossible to resist his emotional unlocking charm and captivated by piping,
intermittent breathing, at that moment he possesses her delectable bowstring
And with his gentlest masculine touch his lips dance carefree on her dainty neck
Forming his hands into the small of her curved back he watches her eyes pulsating.

 

When she reciprocates his gaze, all mortal soldiers with weapons fall to their knees
Sunshine signatures a brand new ray while oceanic waves abyss making a new blue sea
Kitty’s in the cradle sleeping tight. Sky imagines a new colour to make a new night.
Icarus feather takes winning flight. An esoteric surrender exposed for an erotic Pisces.


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Comments:

Need a flag warning us "oldies" Classy that this is full blown hot sensual stuff! I may require to turn back the clock and imagine a new colour tonight!
Beautifully written - might have to get my nineteen year old son to show me how to turn on the music (For goodness sakes Mum he will say....or worse...or he may read?)

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

You know what Anna Therese? I actually thought of you and Katie (Air) when I was posting this thinking to myself "god, i hope they don't feel the need to comment or even keep reading!" ha ha ha (can you feel me laughing because I am)...

All you have to do is press the little triangle that faces right on the little box below the introduction for the music. I would think you'll love this music and if anything, come back to listen but close your eyes!

I'm rying to rate it - not working. Another comment, I like it of course - you may rate for me CP.

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Aw, thanks Anna Therese.
(i'm still giggling at my dear Booksie Grace Kelly)...oh my...

I've got to come back to this when I return home from work. Don't want emotions to show on my face when I read it! You are just amazing!

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Perfect! So happy to have created some emotions!!! You are an amazing fan.

O_O

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Ba----Boooom!

Just Me
(not registered user)

Wow I am so tired, think I need a smoke.

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Make sure you blow a smoke ring.

"Stay"...okay! I'd stay as long as he wanted me. Hell, I'd stay until he was shoving me out the door and locking it behind me. I'd be peaking through the window begging him to let me stay just a little bit longer. "Please, Please! Just 15 more minutes!" Wow! Peach, this is your best piece of erotica. And little spankings, huh? Works for me! :)

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Must admit, I was SO looking forward to your comment Dragonfly. Yipppee! You made my heart sing a little more than it already is this morning with your review. I love your reply. Damn.

Thanks again, so much!
(still giggling at your words....)

Hot...sensual....*sigh* .... Excellent writing! Loved it!

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much.

*giggles* ok, I felt like I HAD to read it all the way through lol, sinse as Anna says up there "us oldies" you know lololol. well of course I will read it all the way sinse you wrote it, hot and heavy as all get out as it was and blushing all the way through lol....yes well I enjoy your writing, and even erotica as it is you do it kindly, and I have to say that I truly adored the last paragraph.

I am still attempting to catch up on all the reading and commenting so I ahve still to get to your story and will later on, right now I HAVE to go outside or will DIE! lol hehehehe, yes and HEY; HAPPY FIRE CRACKER DAY!!! have fun tonight if you watch the fire works......later*****katie

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

A little blushing is good for the cheeks! All 4 of 'em!!
No fireworks in Canada tonite Kate...we had ours on Monday. HOpe you had fun!

And yes, that last paragraph just sorta took a life of it's own for me.

Thank you sooooo much.

Wow, I hardly ever blush but I'm full crimson at the moment :P As always peach, you show how its done, writing that is lol. Beautiful and sensual = perfect!

By the way, is that Ani Difranco? If not, that sure does sound a lot like her.

Hurry up and write, I need my peach fix hehe

Regan

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

It's Kerry Lynn Zwicker.
I absolutely cannot believe that you asked me if that is Ani Difranco simply because of a conversation I once had with someone about Ani Difranco in regards to something along this line of life....and sorry, but I'm just having a rather freaky moment here. *shivers*

Ok, I've just pulled myself together enough to say Thank You So Much ReganFinch.

Gosh i am blushing......after such a long time....

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay!

lol Wow, well it sure did sound like her. Coincidences are fun :D

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks again for stopping in ReganFinch.

Mmm...delicious. The song (welsh? irish) was a perfect companion to this juicy peach. I hope you don't mind if I print this and...err...make little paper boats for the bathtub. heh

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

You make me laugh like crazy-ass.
Is this thing on?
hA!!!!
Thank you so much Aq.

F-Bomb Peach! you blew me out of the water, I'm so sory you had to drag your self through mine when this one was on fire in your pocket!
Did any of that make sence? because I think I have a fever now, I'm gonna hafta' read that one once a night, for like the next week and pick up a clue or two, cause you just schooled erotica;)
~rain

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Somebody cure her fever! Please! Someone?!!!

I didn't listen to the song with the poem the first time, so it was different when I tried it that way, Love that kind of music, I listen to alot of its kind, esp. when I write~again AWESOME Peach, the epitomy of my kind of thing;)
~rain

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much. This one just rambled right out of my divine dark side. It's Divine.

The song certainly adds a wonderful flavor and like you, I often write when listening to music, i trend towards symphonies though.

Thank you Raindown, your wonderful comments always leave me grinning and reeling with excitement.

ok peachy, yes this is a really good piece, and you use some wonderful words, as always peachy style, to create the erotic nature of the work. I love the words you use in your work by the way. They all seem to shout your name. It doesn't feel like a poem to me though, it's more like a short not quite story but image, fragment, if you know what i mean? Only the last stanza stands out as poetic, and thats a beautiful stanza by the way. It's one of those pieces which falls between poem and short story, more like a poetic fragment. Anyway, does that really matter? It's a great piece of art peachy!!

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Started out as a s/s which turned into poetry, you're right. As usual Matt, you're incredibly in tune with my writing.

Thank you so much.

hey i forgot to say i love the song too. Very mystical which kind of represents the poem, expressed in the last line:

Icarus feather takes winning flight. An esoteric surrender exposed for an erotic Pisces.

The poem is like a blushing nude sculpture; it’s art, but dam it knows it’s dirty!!



Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much Matt.

I have never read anything like this. Wow this is graphically and artistically awesome. liked it

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Cool.

Classic, hot and visceral. Erotic as breasts under silk.

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Well Ken Simm, you better read more than just my erotica!
Ha! Love your comment, your choice of words is right up my alley.

Thank you So Much.

Wow, do you usually write Erotica?
I believe this is the first one like it I have read of yours.
Hot, descriptive, Good

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes I usually write erotica.
Thanks.

Damn, Girl!
Feeling a bit feverish here....
Gonna go have to wake up my man now, ya know??

I don't usually read and comment on Erotica, but it's like a train wreck.

Damn. You just have a way with words.

MA

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much MA.

i loved this poem so much . i was just thinking to myself , how much fun i could have with a chilled peach and a warm body and up you popped .
this was seriously brilliant.

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Terry, you're crazy.
And thank you so much.

You have superb control of everything here, the language, the pace...Very, very nice! And how you transcend the physical act to a more spiritual nod at the end was perfect. Beautiful.

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

Author Comment:

devilrod, your comments are divine.
and thank you incredibly.

You've done it again my friend. This one is so hot I thought my computer was going to melt. So descriptive that it truly left an image that you can't forget. I think. I think I need to get some air to cool down after reading this. lol. Excellent poem. I love it. :)

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha! Thank you so much Michael68.

Wow.Very erotic.I Could see it like a movie.Great job classy.Very imaginative.

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much.

Yeah! That was some good stuff :-)

I really liked the flow of it. Wow it's getting hot in here. Phew!

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!

"Kitty’s in the cradle sleeping tight.
Sky imagines a new colour to make a new night."

The beginning of something new? I'm hoping.

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Ah.
Smarty Pants in the crowd.

Thank you so much for the keen eye and keen comment.

Really hot to read. Look my new version also

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

ok.
thanks.

heavy sigh

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

'atta boy.

That was pretty wild... wow!

You got that out without sounding dirty... wonderful piece... is in your face yet sublime... Spins your reader's head for sure.

Great going girl!

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you.

very , very, boring but i like the part about the clit, i couldnt read the rest,

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

got a fucking live wire in the crowd....
i don't really care that you found it boring as your comment shows your age.

Beautiful, delicious words, Peach - awesome work! I'm glad I read it through initially before re-reading with the music, though the song does compliment your gorgeous imagery nicely. On a very different level, I enjoyed your response to Lucien remeese (if indeed that is his name) very much too! Lovely!

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Ya! So there fucker!

Thank you so much Richard Elliott...

An artful blend of the earthy and the sublime. It tweaks traditional notions of the distinction between the poetic and the erotic. Beautifully done.

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Your comment is wonderful.
Thank You.

Oh mY!!! But you've got a way with words. My heart missed a couple of beats. Now I can honestly not wait to go home tonight. I might just recite the poem with the fettish boots on offcourse ;)

Posted: Sep 10, 2008

Author Comment:

of course! by all means!
I love this poem too and thank you so so so much dom22.

One of the best poems I have read in a while. Good layout and theme.

Posted: Sep 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank You very much.

Well, Besides the fact that that poem got me all wet, it was quite beautiful too. I liked the different subjects at the end wrapped in perfectly. Nicely done Peach.

-DD

Posted: Sep 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much.
wet is the intention.
:)

The sight of her tight pussy - he looks at her and says"Dems good eats. - nice work

Posted: Sep 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Now that's good news!

ran
(not registered user)

i guess almost anything could be called poetry these days.......... sweet the devotion of the 'oldies' who should actually be teaching - not learning from u..

The sight of her tight pussy wrapping and unwrapping around his brawny erection
stimulate with a sensual crack on ass.

latch it down sweetie - there is a hurrican a'coming

keep writing, keep your fantasies alive (esp for those Agatha Aunties. lol)

Posted: Oct 2, 2008

Author Comment:

You don't think this is poetry? Maybe the moment was ...

Thank you for cheering me on, what a delightful compliment.

Fuck me! and if i can say so without insulting you, id rather like for you to do exactly that after reading this poem. It's just, amazing, for once in my wretched life i'm utterly speechless. I suppose i could tell you that the imagery is as beautiful and seductively vivid as your other poetry but i'm sure someones already said that. Once again, perfect rhythm and meter, it blows we away that you can write such a long piece without missing a beat or resorting to awkward words that don't really fit right. Also that you can write such a long piece and still manage to sustain my attention and push me through. It's like being throw into a river and swept away with the raging tide, and you don't care that you can't remember how to swim. I bow down to in awe for you have far surpased my own mediocre abilities. I have to know? have you published it in print yet?. If not then you should your work is definately at that point. I'm doing a double major in writing and english and i have yet to meet any student in my course that can rival your abilities. All the best.

Posted: Oct 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Wanna make out? You are making my heart pound with your attention in your reviews. What a wonderful compliment coming from a dark and theatrical writer like you.

No, I have never considered publishing, I only have a few pieces that I believe are worthy of a wider audience (you know how that goes, some hit when emotionally tied and others not).

I am thrilled to have kept your attention and thank you very much.

Oh and just for the sake of being an asshole Mathew whoever you are. Your wrong about it not being a poem. Maybe you should do a little more research before you come to such conclusions. Have you never heard of free verse form? It's the most popular and extensively published form of contemporary poetry. I agree it's unusually long for a poem, and though it may infact have originated as a short story, the consistency of rhythm leaves no doubt in my mind about its status as a poem. If you were thinking the line breaks are at odd intervals, then yes id agree with you there but such formatting is another distinctive feature of modern day poetry and personally i think it works to the advantage of this piece.

Posted: Oct 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Akkkk! Are you getting a little territorial on me? I love when that happens.

I love to step outside the box and my very open mind allows that to happen whenever the fuck I feel like it.

ZerO, thank you so much.

Peach i look forward to reading and commenting on more of your work as soon as i get the opportunity. I'm even interested in your erotica which as a genre i usually regard as little more than wanking material and for that reason particularly dislike it. However after reading this piece I realize that it can be artistic and beautiful as well. My only grievance would be the use of words like "cock", in my opinion that's a little crasp and turns me off a little. However i also know that's just a matter of personal preference and not one, you'll be happy to know, that's shared by the majority of people either. Again great work. Keep it up.

Posted: Oct 8, 2008

Author Comment:

The word cock changes as you mature and get older. All of a sudden, words that had never been a turn on, all of a sudden pop into action.

This piece, I believe, is hardly not wanking material for me. I really love reading smut, for that reason alone. Yep, there...I said it.

My porn side may appear over my next few writes, we'll see.

Cannot thank you enough for praising me, it's truly appreciated and I really needed to hear this from someone like you, especially as of late.

Thank you, I hope to not disappoint in the future and look forward to your honesty and intellect.

Sincerely,
Peach

It's 2:15 in the afternoon and he's sitting
here watching Sunday football and eating
steak.

I will keep your next poem handy and read
it around 11:00 P.M; when he starts to
yawn.

That is the most exciting, graphic, wild,
funny, professional, classy poem I ever
had the pleasure to read. Enough said.
Kindest Regards. M

Posted: Nov 9, 2008

Author Comment:

My goodness, thank you ever so much.
What a wonderful compliment.
I hope your Sunday night worked out!

Hi Peach... well... truly an outstanding piece of writing, in description, in imagery, perfectly beautiful, sensual, erotic, explicit, just magnificent. I do not think I have ever read the like, not here, not any where. A real mastery of vocabulary and personal twisting... too many quotes to quote on your writing.... I am in awe... gobsmacked and somewhat envious.... ( and now I am babbling )..... accolade "POET"

Posted: Nov 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Just what I wanted to hear.
Babbling allowed!!

Thank you very much. I feel the same about your writing.



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