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Traje de Luces

Poem By: Classy Peach
Erotica


Why can’t I just write normal. Inspired while listening to The Immigrant Song by Led Zepplin. (I have no clue what happens in my brain some days)(but it’s sure fun in there)(oh…I’ve provided a heads up when the metaphors start)
Six rhyming words in each stanza couplet.
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Submitted: May 19, 2008    Reads: 234    Comments: 13    Likes: 7   


I didn’t warrant this invitation
My bravura grin beams expression
To my sparkling imagination
Flamenco dress arrives with no instruction!

 

Dawning my slender thighs into senorita costume
Must remember to add spicy perfume
Cowboy boots add lurid animation
A suit of lights to tightly conquer his erection

 

Too much time for masturbation
Has harbored my fantasy’s conception
About to flutter into realization
Overly flamboyant manipulation

 

A wild fresh poppy in my hair adds va-voom!
Inordinately outsized cleavage entered the room
Lancing the ruby flamenco into a constellation
Lady matador with diamond tongue of creation

 

Accomplice sits on a bed wondering how
His little cavaleira’s entry will endow
Prancing towards him the show starts now
Double barreled fingers I shoot Pow! Pow!

 

Slinking onto his denim lap I’ll cum soon
Saddling his solid fly of heavenly male ba-boom
Ahhhh delicious rubbing soaks my peach wow!
Gyrating my soft lips onto him again Pow! Pow!

 

Revolutionized metaphoric muleta slit splits
The denim bull horn slashes rubied brocado with grit
Snorting off my bare shoulder he pulls brace and bit
Sliding fingers me lustful and rear rims my spade pit

 

Torsos take a final blow of exertion
A Sensual Ahhhh!  Fucking sexy ex-insertion
Staring adoringly I wipe the bull’s brow
Blowing smoke from my double barreled fingers Pow! Pow!


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Comments:

Jbortti
Jbortti

Nice , very nice one ! How good is the imagination when all you want it is to give you some pleasure .

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much for the big hug Jbortti!

matthew smith
matthew_smith

wow, peachy, just found this colourful explosion of your imagination. So u wear the suit of light as well as a flamenco dress. So you’re the matador and he’s the bull, but you’re also the beautiful feminine, very passionate flamenco dancer. cowboy boots, guns, it seems like you ride into town, seduce your man, ride the wild bull, and like the wild Romany sort you are, your gone in a trail of dust.
There’s a lot of very strong and colourful images here. It is a very fast poem and of course the erotic images simply speak for themselves. The poem feels like a woman who’s been sexually deprived for sometime and this is an orgy of pleasure. Lancing the ruby flamenco into a constellation gives me the idea of a very explosive sense of being. It reminds me of old fashioned hunting and like a Greek myth she is immortalised as a constellation.
But this wild beauty doesn’t stop there. She uses her muleta to arouse her bull, so in control of him she is now, that he will do as she commands, demands, and she demands pleasure, satisfaction…wow peachy this is one hell of a ride u take us on. My heads spinning!!! but hey, I got to say great work. Not many could pull it off , but of course you do!!!

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

I woke up at 3am, bolt shot of lightening I was, awakened from theeee worst nitemare ever (i was spitting my teeth out!)(i know what that means!!)...and in this dream everyone was calling each other Mrs. Livingstone (ask booksie author Alquimista about that)(sorry I digress!) and I thought "Uh-0h! I may have screwed that poem up!". Then I relaxed and thought a suit of lights could refer to a flamenco too (cuz I said).

And now, I am quite simply wondering if you sit on my pen when I write! Oh sure, I giggle and laugh to myself while I write and think "watch this!" and then click my boots on the floor with happiness and then you come along as if you were sitting here watching it all happen! (well the writing, not the flamenco dancer)(or did you?). Awww Matt. You stun me. Its such a pleasure writing with my friends on booksie.

Thank you for all your warm thoughts and praise.

Nixie
Nixie

Pow Pow! Classy, your mind astounds me! The words I'm sure come easy to you but damn woman, you really do impress me! My favourite line (spends half hour deciding) "Torsos take a final blow of exertion
A Sensual Ahhhh! Fucking sexy ex-insertion" I think it took it up a notch. In a word - feisty! I love it! ~ Nixie


Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

half hour? i've stolen your senses for a half hour? yipppeeee!!

(puts her guns back in her pockets and walks away grinning thanks to Nixie)(it's a big grin)

MAmberConrad
MAmberConrad

OMG!!!
You definitely have a way with words. I'm listening to The Immigrant Song as I read this....lol
Very sexy stuff....
MA

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

I am so thrilled that you've chosen to read while listening to the song...isn't it fun? (happy cartwheel!)

ahahaaaaaaaaaaa..........

Alquimista

Playful. Rhythmic. Erotic. It's sexy time in Senorita Peach's boudoir.

Posted: May 21, 2008

Author Comment:

ha ha...boudiorrrrrrrrrrrr.

air
air

WHOA..........
Hey this one is not only like Mat said: 'you take control' but also it's fun! like he said the fast ride of it with the hot passion, you know, I thought I would have to read more into translating metafors but it connected (weather I understood it all or not LOL) it all kept for an exciting read.

it's like so awesome how he has such insight into your mind WOW!

POW POW HAHAHAH that's GREAT!
see ya........~katie :)

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

it's all connecting Katie because like attracts like. or life attracts life. see, we're pulling you over .... and you don't even realize it! I flippin' love it.

Thanks for all your wonderful comments Katie.

Urja
Urja

Ha! Got the lyricist for my band! What an unbelievably amazing song - 'a wild fresh poppy in my hair' and all.... My favourite stanza is the penultimate one, which is just too perfect for words. You rock!

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

(swings her hip diva-like)
Thank You So Much for such warm praise Urja. I am just wondering if the lyricist job comes with benefits. Oh screw it, just sign me up....holla!!!!

Punishment

Ok, I know I shouldn't be reading this but peach this is really good.^^

Pow pow, that's funny, Hahaha ^^
Take care!

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Be good Punishment!!

Lacey Cummings

You know, I'm so glad you don't write everyone else. You always challenge me a bit and I love that! The 3rd stanza had me chuckling out loud. Hmm? Maybe that one hit me a little close to home. Yikes! "Sliding fingers me lustful and rear rims my spade pit" OmG! Lol! Your spade pit? That's hilarious! Damn I wish I'd thought of it...

You're awesome, original, and inspiring Peach!

Posted: May 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much.

Lacey Cummings

That was supposed to say "write like everyone else". BLAH! One more comment before I go. "Slinking onto his denim lap" was fantastic. I love, love, love the feel of bare skin against denim. I thought maybe it was my own personal thing, but now it seems like it might be shared by others. Great Poem!

Posted: May 28, 2008

Author Comment:

We do share that feeling.
It's highly stimulating and in my mind really represents strong male appeal (denim).

I can see this poem so clearly in my mind as a visual and thank you for sharing your comments with me.

raindown
raindown

I love the way you write, wouldn't have it any other way;), always colourful as matthew said. You always take my readers mind somewhere else, 90 degrees somewhere else! If I'm north you take me south,(haha;). I get caught up in the moment in your writing, I liked it.

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

Author Comment:

I love that you feel this way.
You should see me in real life! I actually show my tame side on booksie.

Thank you so much rain as I take this as incredible compliments coming from you.

Kred35
Kred35

A Thirsty, demanding passion........

All my senses intertwined.

Sensual, Beautiful......

You have such a gift in writing.

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Or a crazy mind!
Thank you so much for all your warm praise.

devilrod
devilrod

Ah, that was great.
A 'sparling imagination' is an understatement.
I really enjoyed the 'rear rims my spade pit'...very nice.
naughty, goodies peach

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Pow! Pow!
Spade Pit....killer line on this.



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