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Inside Addiction

Poem By: elegantbleeding
Erotica


A poem making fun of other erotic poems. Kind of. 0_o Just read it... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 28, 2007    Reads: 94    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


Eyes glued to the pages,
We can't blink just yet-
They're getting to the good part
And no one wants to miss it.
One guesses perversion is human,
But our obsession is addiction.
Worse than a drug,
It's our senses.
Masturbation without purpose.
I guess we're suckers for things sinful,
We're lying when we say we don't like
Cheap fucks.
We're all repeating phrases,
Repeating dirty habits...
Your pleasure is right here,
Just sit back and enjoy.
The sensation's in all the right places.
Maybe someday we'll all feel guilty.
For now, we live in fantasy.
The erotic fascinates me.
Let out a moan in ecstasy...


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Bravo, Bravo. I stand guilty as charged. Elegant very good poem, I started to laugh from the summary.

Posted: Feb 28, 2007

Author Comment:

Glad it gave you some comedic relief as well as general entertainment. ;D

I like the point your makeing. but since sex amd masturbation are so natural then why is it so taboo?

Posted: Mar 21, 2007

Author Comment:

It's just the way our culture is set up. We are taught that it is wrong to act on such urges by society. It is a natural instinct, but anything can get out of hand quickly. I think the reason it's regarded as such taboo is because so many have let it get out of control. Like many things, you can easily become addicted. Addictions can easily become a distraction. Hopefully that made some sort of sense.

haha....being an erotic writer i smirk. it's a good smirk. nothing wrong with self indulgence. :)

Posted: Mar 4, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad it's a good smirk, though admittedly I have no idea what I'm talking about. =)



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