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Love...A Kiss...Lust...Ecstasy! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Dec 10, 2007    Reads: 151    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


The room is lit by only candle light illumination,

He stares at his wife with teasing provocation,

Shyly whispering romantic conversation,

Meant for her mental and spiritual stimulation,

He breaks the chain with a kiss full, of emotion,

Embarking on unspoken verbal communication,

He is slow, sure to gain her deep affection,

Unbuttoning her blouse slowly, a sweet sensation,

His hands gently as feathers, creeping lovely motion,

She answers with delightful mourns and recognition,

Her blouse is on the floor now, without her attention,

He controls as a king, this is his queens coronation,

He surely loves her, a fairy love beyond any mention,

He cups her breast, with great care and supervision,

She becomes hot, sweating changes to evaporation,

He is gentle, breathing becomes hyperventilation,

She jerks once, twice, thrice, it becomes a vibration,

She feels a warm flow inside her, the wet solution,

She is full of gratification beyond definition,

She hits the climax, letting go. Ecstasy.


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Comments:

beautiful.....how can I say more? Loved it, totally!Merry Christmas

Posted: Dec 21, 2007

Brilliantly beautiful, I loved it. It has a great feel, a great flow, love the rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing.

Posted: Jan 4, 2008

WOW! That sure blew me away! I love it! =)
~Maple

Posted: Jul 9, 2008



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