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Die Stimme, die schreit, kann nicht Ihr Herz haben

Poem By: Ken Simm
Erotica


The Voice that talks cannot have your heart. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 27, 2008    Reads: 49    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


 

The wetness that cleaves

To a hole in your heart

The substance that stands

On its own

The fires that then build

In correction distilled

Are reactions to falling apart

This flight of these senses

With sensation anointed

Mined deep in the souls

Largest part

Come with me wrapped clean

Nude limb and sweat sheen

incomplete before this a

false start

breath me in through your thighs

with salt liquid your cries

temptation in vaults come apart

flowing wet caress love

decline push neither shove

where emotion rise affairs jointed caught

pause for joy in this scream

push point into this dream

the flower lip erupt from the dark

its petals expand

at rough usage command

with your lover entwined through the heart


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Comments:

There is a hole in the heart, in the beginning, purposely for the entwining that needed to occur at the end.

The voice that screams cannot have your heart.
Tears falling. Inevitable tears. The souls largest part, the heart you say? The lover before the author came around was horrible. The author is taken with her emotionals. It's a sad love affair. Am I near the mark?

Great, great and powerful poem.

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes you are more than near the mark you are spot on it.

I don't have Peachies ability to decifer poems so closely(she's brilliant there), I do get the feeling of her vulnerability though.

The second to last line takes my breath away~I feel the heart wrenching love/pain, oh...you are a spectacular poet!

Love line twelve as well...can't wait for more of your work; always a pleasure!

~rain

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Peaches does have an amazing talent. But then so do you. You hit upon the crux of the matter also. Thank you.



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