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Young Male Hunting

Poem By: Ken Simm
Erotica


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Submitted: Aug 1, 2008    Reads: 67    Comments: 1    Likes: 2   


 

Completely concerned

in control now she turned

whatever wish now this girl

round his heat her lip curled

Cried in passion release

a shout for centre and peace

in losing conflict completely

she too cries out sweetly

velvet purse symptomatic

looks for any climatic

point of contact returning

to give reason this yearning

closing movement this music

pays for every chance use it.


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Comments:

velvet purse.
smart.

in losing conflict serenely
she cries out too sweetly

Hunting is great word choice on this. The male's hunt for the female O. Or, maybe it should be called Stumble Upon. ha!

Love it.

Posted: Aug 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Fall over and then loose again. Yes just there, no you've missed it again. No it does not matter.



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