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Feeding The Desire

Poem By: Michael68
Erotica


Tags: erotica, passion, love, sex

A Poem that I came up with tonight while thinking of the woman I love and desire. :) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 13, 2008    Reads: 173    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   



Her green eyes stare lovingly at me,
as I hold her in my arms
feeling her body pressed against mine.
She doesn't speak a word at first,
but her eyes seems to say
"Take me. Take me now
and show me what passion really is."
My lips caresses hers
feeling her fingers
running through my hair.
The sweet taste of her kiss
intoxicates me,
as we slowly undress each other.
Till finally
we are naked upon her bed,
our hands exploring
each others body.
Each touch, each kiss,
intensifying this undying passion,
feeling into the hunger
that we both are consumed by.
My lips caressing the side of her neck,
nibbling on her ear,
while my hand touches
the delicate petals of her womanhood.
The yearning growing within such strength,
eager to envelope ourselves
within the moment we both long for.
Yet, we go slow,
build up the desire within
making it be even more special
to us both.
My lips caress her breast,
as her moans slightly in sweet exceptance.

Till finally she says 

the words I long to hear from her. 

Let me feel you inside of me.

Don't make me wait any longer, 

for I don't think I can take it any longer. 

I enter into her sex,

her back arches, gasping in wondrous excitement.

Each thrust of my body 

sends her into a sea of pleasure,

as her holds me close

begging me not to stop. 

But all things must come to an end,

and I explode in her womb,

draining my liquid essence into her. 

Within that moment

I had taken her to heaven and back,

and now we lay there,

locked in each others arms.

Spent and drained

as the bliss of the moment 

cradles us to sleep.


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Comments:

Very rarelly can the dual sedulous emotion of the fuse with such spontaneous so synchrony with the bilateral sharing of the physicality of orgasm.
The exquisute pleasures derived are of such intensity as to distract the mond/ soul from the other.
We all like to think of the intertwining of the phyhical and the spiritual , because nothing seems to superceed these as human experiences.
They say that very devout people like saints achieve can arrive at a transcendental state [ nothing to do with acid] whereby their nearness to God is so overwhelming it surpasses everything , pain anguish , torment , fear, - and makes the pleasures of the flesh seem superficial.
The rest of us have to settle for the old big ''O''
and be grateful when we get it.
The poem is quite beautiful and suggests that you have experienced the greatest reward love can offer.

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much for your comment and you are right I have experienced a greater reward. It's called true love and I am so grateful that God blessed me with the woman that I love. Thank you again for your comment. :)



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