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Passionate Heat

Poem By: Michael68
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A passionate poem for the one woman that has my heart. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 1, 2008    Reads: 189    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


Limbs entwined within such desire
enveloped within passion's fire.
Kisses embraced so deep and long,
as these emotions within grows so strong.
Each touch done so tender and slow,
now the lovemaking we will start to show.
The side of your neck my lips do caress,
while eager hands to each others body they do undress,
while each kiss from you intoxicates me so.
Our naked bodies pressed against each other,
as we become each others passionate lover.
Passions bow burning with intense flame,
enticed with the knowledge we both feel the same.
You gasp softly as we lie in this bed,
all our inhibitions now shed.
I whisper to her... I love you my darling...I truly do.",
andyou smiles so lovingly knowing my words are true.
Youtell me howyou want our bodies to become one,
hoping that this moment won't pass or be done.
Offering yourself as you open your thighs,
such pleasure before us we both couldn't deny.
Piercing through the lips to your womb,
as like a flower our love does bloom.
Thrusting; moving to the rhythm of our heart,
not wanting to end what we did start.
Gripping each other so tight,
the temptation we could no longer fight.
Passion so heated we could burn the bed,
while consumed by the pleasures filling our head.
Then after a while, I explode and drain my liquid essence in your womb,
the sounds of our ecstasy echoes through-out the room.
Then we lay there entwined in such bliss,
before we sleep, I giveyou one last passionate kiss.


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Comments:

Michael, I feel the passion and emotion. Rhymes well and reaches it's climax nicely with a softer ending (as one would expect in true love) For me I think it would work better if you either stuck to calling your lover "you" - you bounce back to using "she" at times and this detracts from the personal feel. (in my view)

Posted: Sep 1, 2008

Author Comment:

I see what you mean. When I posted it I didn't realize I had done that. Thank you comment on this poem, I am glad you liked it. I always appreciate comments from the people on this site. :)

I felt so passion and love when I read it. But you could enlarge the picture yuo added.

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment and next time I'll make sure that I enlarge the picture. lol I am glad that you enjoyed it. God Bless.

i could feel the passion, lust and love in this poem... nice rhyming overall its a well done poem. I love it.

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. It was inspired by a special woman in my life. :)

This is a beautiful poem. It expresses true love between two people, the way God intened. Keep up the good work.

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much that is what I intended it to do. God Bless you too.



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