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Rough Love

Poem By: Michael68
Erotica


Tags: erotic, sex

An experiment in eroc writing that I want to try. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 29, 2008    Reads: 147    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


 
Locked within such a fiery embrace,
Flesh against flesh,
Not letting anything stop us now.
Taste of her sex on my tongue,
Enticing me so,
Bringing out this beast-like love
That has been held back for so long.
Her body quivering
From the constant oral attack
My mouth has upon her womanhood
As she begs me to keep going.
Till finally I can not take it any longer,
I want her so much.
I take her from behind,
Thrusting myself deep into her,
Moving in forceful motions,
As she begs me not to stop,
The friction burning us so.
It is then that she tell me
To pull her hair,
To intensify the pleasure for her.
And who am I to deny her that,
As I do so
And pinch her nipple hard.
She screams out in pleasure,
The intensity of the moment envelopes us so,
Lost within the moment.
Not stopping,
Feeling each new, wondrous sensation
That overpowers me –
Till the climax drains both of us,
Then she turns and we kiss passionately.
Never had I thought
Intimacy could be so rough
And exciting.


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Comments:

It's amazing how rough treatment can seem ugly but is infact intimate and pleasurable. It's true about your ending.

Check out some of my work when you can, I'm new to this so I don't have heaps of stuff.

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment my friend and I will check out your stuff.

Hey Michael, rain here~had to read this one, nice! Getting fiery with that poetry now? 'I Like'd it! good job!

Posted: Oct 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks rain. I am glad you like it. I hope to be coming up with more soon. :)



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