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Sexy, Sexy Nemesis

Poem By: raindown
Erotica

Tags: lionhearts, challenge, pain, love, sexy, poetry, poem, war, erotic, erotica, relationship, sex, emotion

This is my answer to Lionhearts five word challenge. My words were: nemesis, lips, shock, sharp and settlement. Well Lionheart, I want to know what you think, ;) so come and get it...grrr! View table of contents...

Submitted: Jun 6, 2008 Reads: 589 Comments: 21 Likes: 10

Sexy, sexy nemesis

Warning flashes in your eyes

As we circle each other warily

Your muscles flex, your weapons ready

I am not afraid

Rain breaks from heavens quilt

Rolling down our bodies

My red dress is soaked and torn

You are confidant, your hand steady

Striking out your mark is found

My eyes open wide in shock

Hands clasped to my breast, sink to my knees

The pain is sharp and heady

Arms hold me from earthly settlement

Lips parting as my neck lolls

Your kiss upon my throat breathing life into my sole

Sexy sexy nemesis, you are worthy

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Comments:

Classy Peach

I LOVE dramatic poetry.
I LOVE your last line, a little reminder that you are a privilege in life and the nemesis should not forget.

Very sexy. Almost like a game of whipping. Or two animals. This is lust induced.
You don't have to jump genres to show your confidence, as this one is worthy.

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey Peach,

So glad you found this one worthy, because your one of my favorites when it comes to poetry!

Jump genres to show my confidence? Now, how much confidence would that show? ;)

It's always a pleasure to receive one of your comments,
Thanks for reading me.
~rain

Lacey Cummings

Oh, this is wonderful! I pictured it as an old west showdown for some reason. "Your muscles flex, your weapons ready" I've got to admit my mind jumpt to, um, risque thoughts at this. Lol! Very, very good job!

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm so glad you read me Lacey ;), I was hoping you would. Yes, it was intended to be an erotic scene between Nemesis and girl. She was actually in love with him in my mind, so I'm glad it was taken as such...I haven't written poetry in quite a while, so I was a little nervous with this one.
So thanks again for giving me a sec, rain;)

stephhlebreton

ouu, I like i like rain:P Nothing smaller than lovely this was, of course I would expect nothing less, you are brilliant! And I really did enjoy this poem as much as I enjoy your novel:P
Keep it up dearie!
Steph(:

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

I hoped you would Steph, I think your my biggest fan;) ~rain

MTCuzino

That was a dramatic poem. I have not read many but I like it. I think this poem has what many lack intrigue and it is visual which really helps me when I read. You got the sexy angle down that is for sure.
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Rain breaks from heavens quilt
Rolling down our bodies
My red dress is soaked and torn
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Best passage

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Blushing that you approve MTC, Smiles! ;)~rain

PaintersPen

Wow sensational! Seems the appropiate word. A treat for the senses. A heady mix of the literal and figuritive. Superb

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thaks so much for reading me PaintersPen, It was alot of fun to write, I'm really glad you liked it! ~rain

Nixie

Ah I love it! Absolutely love it!! Every line makes a statement, especially the end. Plus, I also found it to be quite erotic, it made it very raw, which seemed ti fit so well! Again, I love it! ~ Nixie

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

I like that "raw", exactly what I strived for. Thanks for taking the time for me Nixie~rain

Kinkyboots

Rain, this to me is angry passion... worth dieing for? Maybe! It goes without saying, I am inspired. I loved it too! ~ KB

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey KB, thanks so much for reading! ;) I am always inspired by you and yours, so just putting mine in~

I think a fierce passion is the best kind, not violent exactly; just fiery and hot.

Alive and challenging, makes for good sport!;) I think this poem did maybe just that for me, I was getting bogged up in my writing and this gave me the right stir~

Thanks again for taking the time
~rain

Pratibha

dear rain, this sure is 'passionate'....

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Laughs* I try!

Thanks for reading;)

~rain

Kred35

This reminds me of someone in the past. I love this! I was right there, and knew. Passion, very erotic, SExy, confident, a sense of apprehension, the ache of desire, and yet,yielding.

My favorite line:

"Your kiss upon my throat breathing life into my sole"

Se L'Amore C'E

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Reminds me of someone from the past too...infact if I admit it, it is about him; glad I took you there too;)
~rain

Shannon Foster

This is so AMAZING! Almost an angry passion, but a very kinky passion. You truly know how to inspire!

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Shannon Foster;)I'm lucky to have been able to inspire as well as enjoy what I do! ~rain

xxjojo14xx

i liked this poem it was imaginative :-)

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Author Comment:

That's me all the way;) always day dreaming, night dreaming and trying to make sense out of it for you all;) Thanks for the praise xxjojo14xx,
~rain

musicplayersMP

that was really good :D

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much musicplayerMP! You read me:) Can I ask you

something, what is....looking for the right keys, hold on...

this

raindown

Well that was weird, you had something on there that

was a symbol and I was going to show it and ask what

it meant; but then neither yours nor mine showed up on

the comments on this page...it must have been edited,

I know what it means now! Oh how funny....that's

silly. I swear sometimes I feel like a daft silly

girl. So anyways, thanks for the comment;)

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

dreaming of you

OH DEAR ME . WHERE IS THAT COLD SHOWER .

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Do you have an English accent? Because I can truely hear you saying that with one;) Your sweet~rain

dreaming of you

yes gorgeous , i do have an english accent . i live in a little village in yorkshire .

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Well feel free to post your accent(I mean comments) anywhere you like on my pages...smiles*, I adore it.

James Woodrow

dramatic poems are always the best and you have proven that with this

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww, thank you so much;) I'm glad you liked it;) I'm all smiles tonight;) ~rain

Pratibha

i did not realise that i had already read this...i still blushed though as if i am reading for the first time...

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Pratibha!
This is one emotion I won't blush about;) I am comfortable with this, that is part of the reason behind the red dress...she wears it like war paint, Ha! Throws it in his face even;) Thank you so much for reading this again;)
~rain

nEoPOL

Great work. Simple as that really!!! LOL!

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

I love it, thank you;) ~rain

Ken Simm

Like thorns through silk. Wonderful

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Wonderful description also! I like that;)
~rain

dadio

If only I'd been born earlier and...Darn good poem, boom and boom goes the heart. Love it.

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha, thanks! Earlier? Well, I think your writing's pretty cool to~ ;) ~rain

ddrandall

Hello Raindown.... I found your work through my good friend AIR... I noticed you took on Lionhearts Challenge and had to read... I am impressed and a little flustered.....LOL!...

I am in the USA but should be in the UK... please read International Incarceration Part I, II, and III if you get some time... happy to meet you and as always.... write on my friend!

Posted: Sep 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks ddrandall, air is awesome~love the dream site!! Glad you liked it, ~rain

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