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What I Love About Men...

Poem By: raindown
Erotica

Tags: love, men, funny, humor, relationships, crazy, sexy, fun

I don't know what got into me with this one, but it's true for the most part, even if it's not something a nice* girl would say, or proper. These are SOME of the things I love about men, not all! I also love nice guys who I can count on not to leave me torn apart and in pain;) I might just erase this one after a bit, I'm not sure if its something I want to keep up(laughs) ~rain View table of contents...

Submitted: Jun 18, 2008 Reads: 198 Comments: 21 Likes: 9

What I Love About Men

Confidence.

Self control and will power

sharp suits and fresh hair cuts

cologne (esp. citrus scent)

big beautiful smiles*

Money.

Feeling their muscles

through their shirts

against my bare back

as they hold me from

behind...

Power.

White T's and tan skin,

with tight jeans and cute

a$$es,

Sex.

When I have to look up

to see into his eyes,

cause he's so tall...

Genes.

sitting in a lap

that's bigger than mine

having access to an arm that's

more than willing to lend

a hand,

Strength.

really good dancers

that know how to move

more than just your feet...

Skill.

Sweet talkers with

a sense of humor

who know just what to say

to make me smile*

Intelligence.

Experienced kissers

that take my breath away

and taste of mint.

Finesse.

Daring playboys who

pushme to my limits

and make me question

my morals.

Damn!

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Comments:

Classy Peach

Leave it up.
I'll be back in 4 or 5 hours to read and tingle.

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh god, I don't think it's good enough to make you do that! (laughing more than when I wrote it;)
I was just feeling really girly and needed a lap to fall into;) Hope it entertains you a little anyway!~rain

Dragonfly

Hmm? How about strong forearms, bare skin against jeans, sheepish grins that hold a touch of the devil, callused hand running up your hip, past your shoulder to tangle in your hair as his mouth...Oops! Lost myself there for a minute! This is YOUR poem. Lol! And I like men very much. I mean I like the POEM very much. And suddenly, I'm inspired!

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Feel free to add your sexy lines to mine anytime Dragonfly! Especially when I'm jus' ramblin about one of my favorite subjects;) Tell me if you make something out of that inspiration, I like your lines
~rain

Classy Peach

I told you I'd be back!
I love reading this.
Gets me started for my fresh batteries!
HA!!!!!!!!!!!!
sitting in a lap
that's bigger than mine
and
feeling their muscles
through their shirts
against my bare back

I don't have to tell you this, but poems like this, or short flashes like this, immediately tell my brain to start comparing what I like and then I think of what I like and then BAM! hello where'd my hand go? But I bet you knew that and wanted to get some pulses flowing. You've given just enough info for the reader to sail away.

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Woman you made me laugh again so hard this time, I don't believe anyone's ever made me laugh that hard in a long time!
Thank you-Thank you-Thank you soooooo much!! You are my fav. reader of all time, I don't know you (well here i do;) but I love you! Thank you a million, you are a classy peach you know that?! (laughing still*) hold on.........
You can jump on my boat anytime Lady*;)
~rain

julistar

love your list...i'm a big man-fan myself...how about that one special guy who's got it all but is so bad for you for some reason...liked the poem but nothing happens, no conclusion...why do you LOVE these things about men...think about how they make you feel and write another poem about that

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Well I've come to the conclusion that there is no conclusion for me! That's just it, I just love these things about men~among others...guess I'm hopeless that way;)

I could explain why, I love theses things about men...thinking...let me get back to you on that one...that is food for thought is it not? Love it;)

Thanks julistar;)
~rain

Nixie

Favourite line in the poem - MONEY! LOL Wait, I loved the poem, it was sassy and gave me a giggle in places, and awe in others. Being not sointo men, this makes me wonder why? Haha, I'm still thinking money... opps! LOL Really, loved it, awesome poem Rain! ~ Nixie

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Money. I know, I almost felt guilty when those parts came out;) Almost. I think I connect money with power and ability to TCB. That turns me on...
Oh and you know, woman can have many (no not all), but many of these assets too. I know you know that! (smiles*)
As well as some very unique ones all their own...hmmm. (Smiles* again)
I think you've stirred something there...later. ~rain

MTCuzino

Genes, funny you say that.
How different we are the sexes.
Good job

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks MT, yeah I love our differences;) Thanks, ~rain

bubbly

hi! raindown. i'll add these "virtues" to my list ('ll help me on my next date.) ha! haa!! haaa!!! lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes, quite so;)
Thanks bubbly, you finally came around to see me writing; I can breath now!:0 :* lol
~rain

Kinkyboots

Hah! This was awesome! Such an original idea, and I liked the little touches - a$$es, I absolutley loved it! Great job Rain! ~ KB

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

You know, I didn't like it at first (for posting on booksie anyways). It was sort of impromptu and I was writing for my own pleasure wrather...but it seems like it pleases you too;) as well as a few others; that tops it all for me!

I was waiting for you by the way;) Thanks KB,

~rain

floatLinger

ok nice......im none of that sh*t except really tall and willing to help and understand emotionally and really humourous my gal pals really like that about me. Yeh i too thought the a$$es bit was funny.

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Really tall is awesome;)
-(and hey), I was dating "guy with all of the above", and ended up with the "guy who was understanding emotionally and really good hearted" , well he's cute too, and he does have a nice a$$ and anyways...thanks for speaking up, I love comments, they make my day sometimes;)
~rain

boni

loved loved loved your piece woman!! very connected. i too love them in every immoral way,thank god.money hmm, usually dickheads, but fun for a run eh? insightful writing gonna read some more. see ya.

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

usually, yes. Especially when their dating a girl without;)$$
-sounds like you've been there too...(smirk;)
And yes exactly, fun for a run, or a ride in their nice cars...VVVvvvvvvvvvvrrrrooooooooom.....................
I think I better rain in on my morals, what will people think!
Love hearing it boni! Thanks for your comment, Love 'em;)
~rain

dreaming of you

Not sure what i was expecting but i sure learned a lot . I will have to stop sucking my cherry flavoured sweets and start eating mints ,
Us poor english guys have much to learn .
Terry

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

By your profile sounds like your doing just fine in that department! No worries;) Glad to enlighten you english guys, and it's not so much the mint flavour that matters (although I prefer it) as the freshness, cleanliness is a must when kissing;) Cherry flavoured sweets?....(laughing;)....I'm sure it works for you just fine 'dreaming of you'
Thanks,~rain

stephhlebreton

Damn! lmao, looove it, lol. it put a smile on my face, not to mention I agree with it all, lol. great job rain!
Steph(:

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Nice to see your back Steph;) Missed your comments!

Those are just some of my favorite things...good you like 'em too!

Kind of an accident poem, I started out rambling, playing around and look what happened...how fun;)

It took me a min. to figure out but I think I know what lmao means;) I swear I'm so not hip ;) I'm learning though!

Thanks for being the darling only you are,
~rain

jfm98

This is a GOOD poem! Erotic, but good! I have yet to feel these emotions, but hopefully, I will someday! Good job!

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Erotic, 'but' good! but? (laughs) I thought that erotic was good thing? (laughs) Thanks jfm98 Love can be complex sometimes...thanks so much for the compliment;)
~rain

Massonic

Wow, reading this poem makes me want to go out right now.

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

That's the spirit Massonic, ;) I wrote it in just that frame of mind...A wild streak moves me. ~rain

Pratibha

Hiya Rain, this is innovative....and u r so right...not all r like this...

This is too good...

lovely...u know what how i wish all men are at least sensitive...

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes, and gentle...and hands...and eyes...well I get carried away every time I see this one again, you deserve a sensitive man Pratibha, you are so big hearted and warm;) Smiles for you*
~rain

dreaming of you

i keep being drawn back to this one , suppose i'm trying to learn where i'm going wrong . i've changed the cherry sweets for mints ,i'm tall enough , i work out , so the body is ok , perhaps tucking my money into the waistband of my undies was'nt such a good idea after all.

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

He already commented on this one (laughing)...tucking your-what? lol, why would you do that?!

Terry you are so funny-You got that part too ya know!;)

Well, maybe part is just being aware of what does make you attractive, can help boost your confidence~ I think that one is probably the biggest one of all.

Working what attributes you've got! Be they your sparklie eyes(I believe you said to Peach?), or your beamer(fill in the blanks for your self here, lol)...or maybe you have a nice smile? You definitely write poetry well;) Girls love that!

What ever it is you like about yourself, take that and love it~shine up on that confidence, stick your chest out and hold your head high always~not too cocky (unless you have reason;)

Confidence is like a set of rose colored glasses that you somehow project...if you seem so happy with yourself, well hell it must mean you got something going on right? Ha!

Okay so I'm sure you were just comming back to tease me right? (wink*) thats okay, you got an ear full anyways!
come back anytime~we all love your humor box;)

~rain

dubl

hahahaha nice one!

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey, thanks for stopping by dubl! So glad you like;) ~rain

Hugh Parsons

I'm a newbie and I read a poem inspired by this one. So I had to read it. It was a lot of fun to read, rarley see good reads on men these days. I can't wait to read more of your work.

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Welcome then Hugh Parsons, yes KB can be so fun;)

I loved "What I Like About Women",

Kinky is an excellent writer; never dissappoints us!
Glad you felt compelled to read mine as well~
(and weren't dissappointed!)...

Here's to all the good! lol;)

Can't wait to hear what you think~
~rain

dadio

You and I know this is one heck of a good poem.

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. grins*
~rain

Nita Eads

I love this!

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

I love it too, I swear I was just playing around at first and in the end I thought it was kind of funny~so I thought I'd put it out there to see if others would get a kick out of it; I was suprised at all the awesome reactions to it, and now like I said, I love it too~I have it taped to my bedroom mirror, not that I could ever forget, ha! ~weeel thanks Nita, glad you got a kick out of it too! ;)
~rain

Marathongman

I guess it's safe to say you like men

Posted: Sep 20, 2008

Author Comment:

I do indeed Marathongman, I do indeed. ;) love your name, me and all my friends think its a riot! ~rain

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