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She Always Obeys.

Poem By: stevie
Erotica


Domination and submission. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 31, 2007    Reads: 369    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


She's kissing & touching
He'll grab & he'll grip
She's moaning, she's breathless
He's biting her lip

She's begging & pleading
"Stop---No please, don't stop"
He's like an animal
He's powered by lust

She's his for the taking
He's made it quite clear
By day he's her angel
By night, her worst fear

She's just slightly frightened
He likes it that way
Once her panties are off
She always obeys.



 


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Comments:

Erotic but also very sad. I guess it depends on a point of view. Always a pleasure.

Posted: Jun 1, 2007

Author Comment:

Only sad if she really doesn't WANT to obey, huh? Fine though, if she LOVES pleasing him because HE "obeys" HER desires too :)

Entertaining :)

Posted: Jun 3, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you :)

Words like this fall from a certain level of trust. I enjoyed.

Posted: Feb 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Exactly.
Thank you for your comments! :)

Oh, I LIKE'd it very much!
Off to check out more of your stuff'(smiles*)
~rain

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it :)



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