Submitted: Nov 9, 2007
Reads: 220
Comments: 13
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He grabs my arm
Turns me around
Puts his face to mine
Says, "don't make a sound"
I do as he says
A smirk on my face
I know what he wants
He just wants a taste
He pulls me to the bed
Pushes me down too rough
Puts his hands up my skirt
Then he shoves it all up
He bows before me
My thighs to his cheeks
Starts with his kisses
Soon I just can't breathe
He's soft, he's smooth
He's rough, He's crude
Takes everything he wants
Til I'm quivering through
He satisfies himself
He satisfies me
I return the favor
On bended knee...
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Well, well, well.
Posted: Nov 9, 2007
Irwin
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Ha! I remember it well - just! Out of breath now. Love all of your very varied work.
Posted: Nov 9, 2007
Frank
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Submissive till the end...
I am still in two minds about the tone of the poem. Nice of you to keep us guessing...
Almost a " Don't.....! Don't stop!" scenario. Hahaha!
Posted: Nov 9, 2007
interesting. second piece i've read lately about submission. what does this say about the sweet sensitive man?
Posted: Nov 9, 2007
And so we see another genere of writing for you, well done. This is good, unlike a lot of "erotica" it wasn't overly explicit. It's good to see talent being used in a way that lets the reader do some of the thinking, great job.
~Dan
Posted: Nov 9, 2007
Interesting.
Posted: Nov 9, 2007
I enjoyed this little romp.
I love the playfulness conveyed and think it's great that you went that route instead of going into all the explicit stuff.
Posted: Nov 9, 2007
You dirty dirty girl...lol Nice hon short yet very erotic. Never a dull line with you and always leaving the imagination running wild with lust and so forth.
Peace Love and Understanding.
Matt
Posted: Nov 10, 2007
Really quite a pleasant read not oner the top just nice Take care Juliet
Posted: Nov 11, 2007
leesah
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oh my...liking this style of yours :) S T E A M Y...lol..
Posted: Nov 12, 2007
haha! I do love erotic poetry and the most said with the least vulgarity is all the better. Very nice job of that! :-) ~ K
Posted: Nov 18, 2007
Ahhh my angelic beauty, so glad to enjoy all of you at once. Although your alter egos were fun.. (lol)What can i say. I read and bow to greatness. I gladly crown thee "Queen of Erotica". I've tried to comment before but have bumble some on my computer and I'm still not accustomed to this newly upgraded site. Your new stuff, great titles by the way, sends my mind into that "other place". I am satiated in all.... AS
Posted: Nov 21, 2007
I liked it as well it is really good
Posted: Dec 3, 2007
