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The Fire We Create...

Poem By: Tesseth
Erotica

Tags: love, lust, passion, erotic, wet, sexy, sensual, romance, relationshipes, tesseth, spark, fire, ecstasy

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Submitted: Nov 10, 2007 Reads: 490 Comments: 18 Likes: 10

I see you...
I've been watching awhile.
Your dark sexy eyes,
That sweet, twisted smile.

I see you...
I know just what you need.
You can't contain lust,
It's meant to be free.

I see you...
I need your body near.
Come closer to me
There's nothing to fear.

I need to touch you
I just need you so bad.
I promise I'll be
The best you've ever had.

Melting together now...
Tangled bodies & souls
Passion, moans, sexy, wet
Ecstasy --- no control.

I love when you join me
This dive into the dark
The fire we create
Your fingertips the spark...

I see you too...

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Comments:

Nixie

Very nice, I love the last line! ...I think most of us can relate :) ~ Nixie

Posted: Nov 10, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you very much Nixie!

gerabel

Very, very nice! "Your fingertips the spark" is a killer line at the end. I really like this piece very much......................Jerry

Posted: Nov 10, 2007

Author Comment:

Well, thank you Jerry! I'm so glad that you like it :)

leesah

wow girl, you've been posting some real spicy stuff, I like, alot ~.^......well expressed passion...

love it...

~leesah

Posted: Nov 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks leesah! I was writing my more 'spicy stuff' under my penname Stevie here at Booksie... I can't remember my log-in! Ugh! So, time to incorporate my entire personality under one penname. You never know what I'll write now--- erotic/sensual to whatever it is you'd call what I 'normally' write under Tesseth. Tesseth is now Tesseth/Stevie...or it would be if I could change the darn penname here.
Well, thanks for reading and commenting me leesah -- I ALWAYS appreciate your feedback.
Take care!
Stevie

FumblesntheDark
(not registered user)

Very good very good, !!! Post moer because i am anctious to read what else you have came up with

Posted: Nov 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Feel free to look up the Writer Stevie here at Booksie -- that's me too. I'll just be posting everything under Tesseth now (cuz I forgot my login over the summer for my Stevie penname). That should keep ya busy for abit...til I post some more :)
Thanks for your comments! You're so sweet!

Take care,
Stevie/Tesseth

J A Morales

Nice. Very Nice. You rolled with my poem very nicely and frankly, you made it better.

Posted: Nov 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Naw...YOU started it! I liked what you wrote, so I enjoyed complementing it...

That was fun! I've done some picture challenges before (where you write about a photo they post) and I've heard of writers collaborating on some poems (not sure how that would work--- each writer writes a line taking turns til the poem is 'done'?) I thought this would be more interesting. And, I love your writing so you made it all the more fun! Thank you!

If you ever want to do it again -- let me know!
I've not been writing alot lately so this way was a great way to get me motivated! :)
Take care!
Stevie

Emily.x
(not registered user)

great ending"your fingertips the spark" absoloutely awsome! loved it

Posted: Nov 12, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you --- thank you very much :)

Speshlk

oooh! Just enough of a spark to peak the imagination, yet takes the passion just a bit further. Good stuff....VERY good stuff! I enjoyed! :-) ~ K

Posted: Nov 12, 2007

Author Comment:

I am glad that you liked it. Thanks for the FANTASTIC feedback :)

brinsley

Tesseth--

Beyond 'My Secret Life' I am not normally a reader of erotica. Having said that I think very highly of this charged and accomplished poem, full of panache and subtle restraint; yet it is suddenly incandescent--but never grimily base or physical...love the melting of restraint and the knotting of bodies and entwining of souls--a rare experience and still rarer expression of it. A great deal of art and soul and yourself went into this...congratulations you are a master of your art. Btw like the font colour also!

~brinsley

Posted: Nov 13, 2007

Author Comment:

Well thank you very much brinsley!
You have definitely left ME blushing!
I truly appreciate your absolutely wonderful comment!

And, yes, I do understand about the ole' typical 'erotica' type reads out there...

I like my 'version' better. It's more of a senual-erotica-ish style I think. Not your usual crass or vulgar words. (I certainly KNOW them!) I don't find them necessary. I'm not writing for shock-value. Just as a woman is more sensual/sexy when her outfit leaves something to the imagination (really!)--- so does my writing. I like to think that I've set the scene, the reader can fill in some of the details for themselves.

I'm writing about real sensual-sexual emotions and feeling --- the ones even us "good girls" have! :)

Thank you again!
It was very nice to hear from you :)

Mind Sight

Awesome poem. Very well written. Very sexy. I wish you well and God Bless. Lisa

Posted: Nov 13, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you Lisa... you are so sweet!

Terry Collett

Love it.

Posted: Dec 4, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks so much Terry! :)

Forsure

Your poem was very good. Its nice to see someone can put what their feeling in hints, mine are rather brass but I do like the calling a spade a spade. Hard to change after so many years of writng hard core. It was indeed a pleasure to feel a bit of a angel that hides inside this mind. Thank you

Posted: Dec 7, 2007

Author Comment:

Nice.
Very nice, thank you :)

Arnold
(not registered user)

This was a great poem. Sensual and erotic yet tasteful. I enjoyed it very much.

Posted: Jan 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much - I appreciate that :)

Classy Peach

Ooooh so elegant and sexy. I too, love it.

Posted: Feb 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much Classy! I am very glad!
:)

Mr Benn

Hey Tesseth

This is great! You get the feeling of a deep love and passion from this.I love it.

Posted: Mar 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much :)
I really appreciate that!

viper

Very Good And Erotic. That's A Great Poem.

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much!

dreaming of you

a mixture of sweet and sexy , i really enjoyed this poem , a kind of foreplay with words ,
terry

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!
Yes, I hate to call it 'erotic' I prefer 'sensual'... the reader takes the words and visualizes them as they please. I do not HAVE to be outright vulgar to get my point across I think.
Thanks for reading & commenting --- much appreciated!

Jamie Clements

I love your work. I have some poems that you may like. They are nothing like yours, but I felt them before I wrote them. The don't have ryhme but they came from my heart. Another Minute More and Mind's Eye are the titles.

Posted: Nov 7, 2008

Author Comment:

I will definitely be checking them out!
Thanks for reading some of mine :)

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