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Losing Virginity

Poem By: tigergoddess81
Erotica


My first attempt at Erotica, it's a long story/poem. Please let me know how you like it, or don't like it... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 16, 2007    Reads: 544    Comments: 6    Likes: 4   


Losing Virginity

A gleam in her eye,
he knows what it is,
thought he'd die,
before a chance like this.

Where does he start,
she's never done this before,
when it's passions of the heart,
she's still quite unsure.

He longs to kiss her,
his hand through her hair,
hearts are a flutter,
venture, do they dare?

She makes the move,
her lips touch his,
he more than approves,
the taste of bliss.

In the eyes they stare,
as his hands move south,
away their clothes, they tear,
heavy breathing escapes the mouth.

He gently kisses her neck,
inhabitions are out the door,
down her body, kissed with a peck,
her body, his to explore.

Her chest is heaving,
he licks her breasts,
the pleasure she's receiving,
she's very impressed.

Her chest, the garden,
his mouth the bee,
his penis begins to harden,
she's happy to see.

His hand moves to her waist,
she aches for more,
he pulls her in, a sweet embrace,
she shakes to the core.

His fingers creep,
to the prize below,
she wants them, deep,
as the juices begin to flow.

He begins with her clit,
slowly rubbing her there,
drives her wild, with a quick flit,
his fingers move to her lair.

Just one at first,
slowly in and out,
she aches with thirst,
to end the drought.

Two fingers now,
she begins to moan,
anything she'll allow,
as his member continues to grow.

She wants another finger,
to add to the pleasure,
teasing he still lingers,
his penis wants her treasure.

As three fingers are in,
her body moves around,
she feels the pressure within,
her spot he's found.

She's never been this wet,
it feels so good, how much more could she take,
he's kissing her, as they start to sweat,
her orgasm is near to break.

She makes him switch,
to his member instead,
 in order to cure her itch,
for his throbbing head.

Her legs, he gently opens,
between them he climbs,
to receive her token,
of love sublime.

He teases the hole,
rubbing it, with his dick,
her body is losing control,
aching for his stick.

He eases it inside,
she screams with delight,
in and out he slides,
as more passion ignites.

Harder and faster he pounds,
her body is no longer her own,
Moaning and panting sounds,
"I'm going to cum," she moans.

He's almost there,
unbearable throbbing feeling,
the orgasm they'll share,
in this sexual healing.

"Here it comes,"
he moans, "you ready?"
Hearts beating like drums,
"I'm nearly there, hold steady."

Both bodies, glistening wet,
as the climax takes control,
there's no regret,
as they meet their goal.

His head leans back,
she claws at the bed,
as orgasms attack,
they're near the end.

She's screaming with pleasure,
he's slamming her hard,
as he cums in her treasure,
their release is unbarred.

Both have finished,
they lay in content,
the urge diminished,
a pool of sweat, the end.


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Comments:

i dont know what sex i rly like ( im 13) but that how i imagen it 2 be

Posted: Sep 17, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you. Should you be reading Erotica though? lol ~JT~

This was really rather lovely, your rhymes were rather nice. Great work. 5/5

Posted: Sep 17, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it! ~JT~

Thanks for making my morning an enjoyable one.. A great read and very descriptive. I like the fact that you tagged the word treasure....hehehehe

Posted: Sep 19, 2007

Author Comment:

lol Thank you so much for the encouragement...this was my first attempt at some romantic/erotic. ~JT~

I love
"Her chest, the garden,
his mouth the bee,"
too, it's so inexplicably ... GREAT =D
x

Posted: Sep 19, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so very much! I do like that line myself. ;) ~JT~

yes just nice work......so nicely balanced with explicit descriptions and delicate analogies....a compelling read.....and it's climax (pardon the pun) pleasantly and naturally, predictable......keep writing :-)

Posted: Oct 9, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks so much. Much appreciated! ~JT~

I like this bold poem, it does well to suprise but hold the reader... I wasn't expecting it to be so explicit but a nice read of course ;) ~ Nixie

Posted: Oct 23, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you very much Nixie! ~JT~



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